一、寫作決竅
總體把握，要點(diǎn)齊全；人稱時態(tài)，邏輯清楚；
關(guān)鍵詞匯，動詞第一；組詞成句，結(jié)構(gòu)完整；
組句成文，連詞增色；此路不通，繞道迂回；
字跡工整，留好印象；從句適量，高分有望。
二、寫作步驟
1.認(rèn)真審題。審題包括要點(diǎn)、格式、詞數(shù)以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息，告誡讀者什么(即寫作目的)。
2.確定文體和時態(tài)。確定文體后，根據(jù)不同文體的特點(diǎn)和要求進(jìn)行組織材料；同時確定出該篇文章的總時態(tài)與時態(tài)的變化。
3.寫完要點(diǎn)，但不隨意發(fā)揮。
4.先草稿，后抄寫。
三、習(xí)作點(diǎn)評
[2004年全國中學(xué)生英語能力競賽初賽初三組] (14分) 蘇州小學(xué)生語文培訓(xùn)，（TEl:181-1815-9898）蘇州易優(yōu)閱讀寫作同步提升
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.
·What exactly your hobby is;
·When and how you became interested in this hobby;
·Why you enjoy your hobby;
·About your hopes and plans for the future.
寫作要求：
1.根據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)拓展想象空間，靈活地將提供的信息體現(xiàn)在文章中。
2.條理清楚，語句通順，書寫清晰、規(guī)范。
3.詞數(shù)60-80.
[學(xué)生習(xí)作A]
My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.
?、俑臑閞eading books，動詞作表語時應(yīng)該用動名詞。 蘇州易優(yōu)中考語文培訓(xùn),吳老師語文課（Tel:181-1815-9898）
?、赼lso的位置應(yīng)放在can之后。
[點(diǎn)評]：檔次9-11分。
?、僖c(diǎn)不全，漏掉最后一個要點(diǎn)。
②句子基本無誤，能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢，句子與句子之間過渡不自然，給讀者感覺在回答上述問題。
?、塾猩倭垮e誤。
[學(xué)生習(xí)作B]
My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren”t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.
