我最好的朋友
【內(nèi)容提示】
你有一位最要好的朋友，名叫王英。她是三好學(xué)生，她學(xué)習(xí)勤勉，性情溫厚，門門功課學(xué)得都好。她是個(gè)熱心腸的人，經(jīng)常幫助別人。在你有病時(shí)，她幫你補(bǔ)課。她把省下的錢送給需要幫助的人。去年的一天，她為了救一個(gè)落水的小男孩獻(xiàn)出了自己的生命。每當(dāng)你看見(jiàn)她的照片就情不自禁地想起了她。
請(qǐng)你就上述內(nèi)容，再加上你自己的想象和發(fā)揮，寫一篇回憶性的記敘文。
【作文示范】
My Best Friend
When I look at the old photo, I can＇t help thinking of my best friend, Wang Ying. At the age of five, I made friends with her. She lived next door to me, and was then seventeen years old. The twelve year＇s gap in age didn＇t hinder① our growing fondness② for each other. She treated me as a younger sister of her own. 蘇州易優(yōu)吳老師中考語(yǔ)文提分班（TEL:181-1815-9898）有趣、有用、提分快
In school, Wang Ying was a 3-A student③. She did well in every subject. But she never seemed to be proud of her achievements. She was hard-working and good-natured to younger students. I remember the little incident that took place two years ago. One day I caught a bad cold and had a high fever. I had to stay in bed. This prevented me from going to school. I was very anxious for missing so many classes when suddenly the door opened. In came Wang Ying.
“Hello, Tong-tong. How are you feeling today?” she said to me with a friendly smile. “Don＇t worry about your lessons. Now let me make them up for you.” Before I could say anything, she had taken the English textbook out of her schoolbag. I was so moved that I couldn＇t keep back my tears.
Wang Ying was a kind-hearted girl. Though she was the only child of her parents, she was not spoiled. She was polite to teachers and students, generous to her friends, and kind to the poor. She was always ready to give her pocket money she had saved to those in need without hesitation.
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One day last year, on her way home, Wang Ying saw a little boy slipping into a pond. The boy was struggling desperately④ in the water. Seeing this, Wang Ying quickly ran to the pond while shouting for help. She jumped into the cold water to save the boy. With the help of some workers, the boy was finally rescued. However, our little hero, like Luo Shengjiao, lost her own life.
People were sad over her death. I felt something was missing in my life. For the happiness of the boy＇s family, Wang Ying sacrificed⑤herself. Her death is a glorious death weightier than Mount Tai.
（選自1987年8月11日《上海學(xué)生英文報(bào)》）
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
①hinder [＇hind+] v．阻止；阻礙；妨礙
②fondness [＇f&ndnis] n．喜愛(ài)
③a 3-A student 一個(gè)三好學(xué)生
④desperately [＇desp+ritli] ad．拼死地；不顧一切地
⑤sacrifice [＇s$krifais] v．犧牲；獻(xiàn)出
【寫法指要】
文章起筆，觸景生情。看見(jiàn)舊照片就“情不自禁地想起了我最好的朋友。”然后，文章運(yùn)用夾敘夾議的方法 寫了“朋友”的三方面的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)和三件事：1）她是三好學(xué)生，“我”生病時(shí)誤了課，她幫“我”補(bǔ)課；2）她是個(gè)熱心的人，經(jīng)常把自已攢的錢給別人；3）她是一個(gè)慷慨的人，為救別人犧牲了自己的生命。這樣，從平時(shí)的表現(xiàn)，到關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻的獻(xiàn)身，英雄形象的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程便活生生地展現(xiàn)在我們面前，給人以啟迪，給人以教育
