采用一些托福 寫作詞匯,將托福 寫作寫出最地道的英語。多認識一些名詞化,不僅對托福聽力有幫助,對口語也會有很好的提高效果,下面就讓我們一起來看看這些吧。托福考試作為國外類考試,多進行托福寫作練習,其寫作部分的用詞地道的重要性毋庸置疑。
然而,由于歷史、地理和社會的原因因此,擅用名詞化不僅體現(xiàn)了寫作水平,更是一種思維方式。曾經(jīng)一個針對中國幾所頂尖大學 的優(yōu)秀作文的調(diào)查顯示,20 篇優(yōu)秀作文中名詞化的使用頻率為7%-8%,而普通習作的使用頻率僅為5%-6%。與此同時,選用了20 篇英語國家學生的英語作文 ,同樣的方法 統(tǒng)計出其名詞化的使用頻率為10%-15%。有人更是戲說道,老外眼中句子分為3個檔次,最差的是主動句,較好的是被動句,倒裝句等,最好的nominalization(名詞化)的句子,這樣的句子最學術(shù)最適合寫論文。那么面對這樣的差異,我們需要重新審視我們寫作中的思維方式,做到如何恰到好處又不“畫蛇添足”。 語文成績好,書法少不了,學書法,推薦<A http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform/type_3.html>易優(yōu)少兒書法培訓</a>
簡單說,名詞化即是動詞或形容詞被用作名詞的現(xiàn)象。比如動詞轉(zhuǎn)成名詞:discovery->discovery, move->movement, refuse->refusal,又比如形容詞轉(zhuǎn)成名詞:careless->carelessness, difficult->difficulty, intense->intensity。那么什么情況下,我們需要進行名詞化呢?
A 謂語動詞的賓語部分
原句:I do not know either what she meant or what he intends.
名詞化:I do not know either her meaning or his intentions.
B 結(jié)合被動形式
原句:If people decide without enough persuasive information,...
名詞化:If a decision is made without enough persuasive information,...
C 取代諸如從句中“the fact that”的用法
原句:The fact that I denied what he accused me of impressed the jury.
名詞化:My denial of his accusations impressed the jury. 在線批改作文,<a href=http://www.zequeka.cn/jiaoshoulanmu/>易優(yōu)名師作文批改</a>
更好的名詞化:a. When I denied his accusations, I impressed the jury.
b. In denying his accusations, I impressed the jury.
D 名詞化部分用在there is/are的后面
原句:We demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.
名詞化:There is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.
原句:The floods considerably eroded the land.
名詞化:There was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.
然而,有些時候,在我們的思維方式中認為理所應當使用“名詞化”時,老外認為是沒有必要的。比如:
A 名詞化部分跟在動詞后面
原句(名詞化“冗余”):The police conducted an investigation into the matter.
改后:The police investigated the matter.
B 名詞化部分作為主語
原句:Our discussion is concerned with a tax cut.
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改后:We discussed a tax cut.
C 連續(xù)進行名詞化
原句:a. First, she reviewed the evolution of the dorsal fin.
b. There was a first a review of the evolution of the dorsal fin.
改后:First, she reviewed how the dorsal fin evolved.
D 連接部分名詞化
原句:Their cessation of hostilities was because of their personnel losses.
改后:They ceased hostilities because they lost personnel.
原句:The instability of the motor housing did not preclude the completion of the field trials.
改后:Even though the motor housing was unstable, the research staff completed the field trials.
在保證基本的語言語法不出錯的基礎上,托福寫作中如果能更多地正確使用名詞化,文章不但更地道,也更易取得高分。當然,應當多加進行托福寫作練習,熟練掌握名詞化不是一蹴而就的事情,平時需要多積累,多運用