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假如你是李華，你校校報的英語專欄正在開展以“美麗的黃河風情線” (The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)為主題的英語征文活動，你打算參加。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點用英語寫一篇短文。
1. 風情線總覽(the Yellow River, run through the city of Lanzhou, a famous road called Binhe Road, along the Yellow River)；
2. 聚焦景觀(Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel(水車), many parks)；
3. 休閑娛樂(fly kites, play chess)；
4. 特色游覽(go sightseeing, sheepskin raft(羊皮筏子),water bus)。
要求：1. 80詞左右；
2. 條理清楚，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；內(nèi)容上可適度發(fā)揮。
注意：不得出現(xiàn)學校、姓名等個人信息(除所給身份外)。
【寫作思路】
這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下美麗的黃河風情線。主要從風情線總覽、聚焦景觀、休閑娛樂和特色游覽四個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。
【參考范文】
The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line
The Yellow River is our mother river. Do you know what scenic spots the beautiful Yellow River has? Let me tell you! The Yellow River flows through Lanzhou. There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. Along the Yellow River there are many parks, as well as the picturesque Zhongshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheel and so on. There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. There, you can enjoy special tours, such as sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water bus. The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you!
【名師點評】
【高分句型一】
There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. 有一條著名的公路叫做濱河路，它沿著黃河行駛。句子which runs along the Yellow River.是由which引導的定語從句。
【高分句型二】
There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. 有很多休閑娛樂的地方，如放風箏、下棋等。該句話用there be結(jié)構(gòu)來寫。
相關(guān)話題范文解析
（一）
A City
There is a city in the north of China. It has a population of over 5 million.
There are many places of interest and well- protected historical sites there. It is a famous tourist city. Many visitors across the country come here to spend their holidays. Besides, the city is very modern. On both sides of the wide roads, there are many tall buildings. You can see tall trees, beautiful flowers and green grass everywhere. The people of the city live a happy life. They are also very nice, who often help others.
Many visitors think highly of the city. You are all welcome to visit this city.
參考譯文
一座城市
在中國的北方，有一-座城市。它有超過500萬的人口。
那里有很多名勝古跡和保護得很好的歷史遺跡。它是一座著名的旅游城市。全國的很多游客來這里度假。除此以外，這座城市非?，F(xiàn)代化。在寬闊道路的兩旁，有很多高高的建筑。隨處可以看到高高的樹木、美麗的花朵和綠草。城市中的人們過著幸福的生活。他們還非常友好，經(jīng)常幫助別人。
很多游客對這座城市評價很高。歡迎來這座城市參觀。
亮點詞匯
population 人口
places of interest 名勝古跡
historical sites歷史遺跡
Tourist city旅游城市
Everywhere到處
Think highly of....對......評價很高
出彩句型
... in the north of... ... ......在......的北面
It has a population of....它有.......人口
On both sides of the wide roads, there are...在寬闊的道路旁，有.......
You are all welcome to ...歡迎你們來......
高分點評
本文描寫的是中國北方的一座城市，展現(xiàn)了其歷史和現(xiàn)代并存的特點，突顯了這座城市的與眾不同和地方風情。文章的表達非常地道，如描寫人口時，使用的“It has a a population of.... "句式，描寫“某地有某物”時，使用的"there be' 句式。
（二）
A Beautiful Town
In the southwest part of China, there is a small town with a population of about 5,000.
The town is very beautiful with high mountains around it. And the mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboos, Through the town runs a small stream. There is also a new railway outside the town, People in the town are all hard-working.Though they are having a rich and good life, they are still working hard to build their town into a modern one.
I's a beautiful town, isn't it? Are you attracted by it?
參考譯文
座美麗的小鎮(zhèn)
在中國的西南部，有一座小鎮(zhèn)，小鎮(zhèn)上大約有5000人。
小鎮(zhèn)非常美麗，四周有高山環(huán)繞。山上覆蓋著各種各樣的綠色竹子。有一條小溪穿小鎮(zhèn)。在小鎮(zhèn)外面，有一條新的鐵路。鎮(zhèn)上的人都很勤奮。雖然他們過著富足的好生但他們還是努力將他們的小鎮(zhèn)變得現(xiàn)代化。
這是一座漂亮的小鎮(zhèn)，不是嗎?你有被它吸引嗎?
亮點詞匯
southwest.西南部
bamboo 竹子
stream小溪;溪流
railway鐵路
hard-working 勤奮的;勤勉的
出彩句型
In the .. part o... there is..........方位，.有.....
The town is.. with high mountains around it.小鎮(zhèn).....被群山環(huán)繞著。
.. are covered with.......復蓋著。
Through the town runs a small stream.有一條小溪穿過小鎮(zhèn)。
It's a beautiful town, isn't it?這是一個漂亮的小鎮(zhèn)，不是嗎?
高分點評
本文據(jù)寫了一個美團的小值，主要抓住兩個特點一自然風景和人文風情，展現(xiàn)了小鎮(zhèn)美你的一面，文事的句式運用是大出彩的地方， 如倒裝句"Through the town runs a small stream..”反義疑問句"It's a beautiful town, isn't it?“”顯示出作者扎文的語言功底。
英語滿分作文必背
（一）
假設你是劉偉，你的美國朋友MIKE 想通過你了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請你根據(jù)提示，給Mike 寫一封e-mail，向他介紹我國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日春節(jié)的情況。
內(nèi)容提示：
1.春節(jié)是中國最重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日;
2.春節(jié)期間人們的主要活動(節(jié)前、除夕、節(jié)日期間)
提示詞語：Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money
根據(jù)中文大意和英語提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于80詞的短文。所給英文提示詞供選用。注意：不要寫出你的真實姓名和校名。
滿分范文
Dear Mike,
How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I’d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you.
Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 15 days.Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish one another a happy year and good luck. How happy we are.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Liu Wei
（二）
近幾年，旅游已經(jīng)成為一項全民活動。初中生們旅游的機會也有很多，因此，旅游也是初中生們津津樂道的話題。
你的美國朋友Tom非常喜歡中國文化，去年暑假你和他一起從桂林出發(fā)去北京旅游了幾天，你們參觀了一些著名景點，還品嘗了一些有名的小吃，請結(jié)合下表，把你們的旅游經(jīng)歷寫成一篇不少于80詞的短文。
滿分范文
A Trip to Beijing
My American friend Tom and I went to Beijing by plane last summer.
On the first day，we visited the Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square. The next day，we climbed the Great Wall. We took lots of photos. Although we felt tired，it was a fantastic experience. The third day we relaxed. Then we had the Beijing roast duck for lunch. I think it is the most delicious food in the world. Tom is interested in Chinese culture，so we drank tea and saw Beijing Opera in Lao She Teahouse in the evening. Finally，we did some shopping and flew back to Guilin.
The trip to Beijing was short，but it was wonderful. Tom said that he would never forget it.
《中考英語作文指導：如何寫地域風情》添加時間：2025-01-08；更新時間：2025-03-15
