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為豐富初三學生課余生活，上周末你校組織了一次社會實踐活動。請根據以下內容提示，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹此次活動，并談談自己的感想。 <a hRef=http://www.zequeka.cn/miNiform.html>蘇州閱讀寫作培訓</a>
活動內容：
1．上午游覽人民公園：欣賞美景、歌舞聯(lián)歡、拍照留念；
2．下午參觀市民廣場：觀看圖片展，了解祖國和家鄉(xiāng)70年巨變。
你的感想：
1．師生情深，感謝老師和同學的幫助；
2．倍受鼓舞，決心勤奮學習報效祖國；
3. ……（考生自己發(fā)揮）
要求：
1．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。
2．所寫內容必須包括內容提示中所提供的信息，并可作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。
3．不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。
參考詞匯：市民廣場Civic Square
In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. _______________________________________________
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【寫作思路】
這是一篇材料作文，根據材料中的相關信息介紹一下上周末你校所組織的一次社會實踐活動。所提供的材料中列舉了活動內容和你的感想。主要從：1．上午游覽人民公園：欣賞美景、歌舞聯(lián)歡、拍照留念；2．下午參觀市民廣場：觀看圖片展，了解祖國和家鄉(xiāng)70年巨變。以及表達師生情深，感謝老師和同學的幫助；倍受鼓舞，決心勤奮學習報效祖國；（自己在發(fā)揮一些）。這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性。
【參考范文】
In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the People’s Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizen’s Square. In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country.
【名師點評】
【高分句型一】
I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感謝我的老師和同學們的幫助。該句話用到了would like to do sth. 豐富了語言。
【高分句型二】
In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民廣場，我們看了70年來的攝影展，了解了祖國和家鄉(xiāng)的巨大變化。該句話的語言簡練，層次分明，語意明確，用簡單的句子表達了豐富的內涵。使人讀起來朗朗上口。
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假如你參加了學校組織的“走近鄉(xiāng)村”寒假社會實踐活動。請根據要求，向某英語網站投稿，分享活動經歷。
要求：1.80~120詞，可適當發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。
參考信息：
Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine!
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【寫作思路】
本文屬于一篇圖表作文，根據表格提供的信息來介紹“走近鄉(xiāng)村”寒假社會實踐活動的經歷。人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)主要為一般過去時。動筆前先要注意認真閱讀材料確定寫作內容；文章必須包括要點中所給的信息，既要寫活動的過程，又要總結活動感受與收獲。并補充兩條個人的觀點。表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性。多種句式交叉使用來豐富文章的文采。高分句型：1.We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before. 我們經歷了農村的生活，學到了一些我們以前從書中得不到的東西。that we couldn’t get from books before.是定語從句，修飾不定代詞something。2. We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation! 我們真的希望今年寒假還能有這樣的活動！hope后面是省略that的賓語從句。
【參考范文】
Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine.
During the winter vacation my classmates and I joined in the school activity “Get close to the countryside”. We live in the famers’ homes. Their great living conditions surprised us a lot. Do you know where vegetables come from? We got the answer when working with the farmers. Besides, we learned about other plants and some farm animals. How interesting!
We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before, and felt the wonderful changes of the countryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked and decided to save food. We were happy to see the farmers’ life was getting better and better.
We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation!
（三）
人生中有很多第一次：第一次學游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家務；第一次贏得比賽；第一次……。請根據提示，就你的第一次……寫一篇短文。 內容包括：
1. 第一次……的整個過程；
2. 你的感受。
要求：
1. 詞數(shù)：80-100（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名。
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time ________________
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【寫作思路】
這是一篇材料作文，根據提示信息，選擇給你印象深刻的第一次活動進行描述并談談自己的感受。時態(tài)主要為一般過去時，人稱主要為第一、三人稱。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文。首先開門見山，介紹自己的第一次活動是什么，接下來詳細介紹第一次活動的整個過程，最后談一談自己的感受。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性。注意： 注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范，避免出現(xiàn)拼寫錯誤；詞數(shù)在80—100。
【參考范文】
The first time to learn to swim
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time to learn to swim.
Last summer vacation, my father took me to the swimming pool in our neighborhood and taught me to swim. It was the first for me to swim. At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very patient. He encouraged me and taught me how to swim. He taught me how to breathe in the water first. Then, He threw me into the deepest part of the swimming pool. I was so frightened that I couldn’t move. But I never gave up. I felt safe with my dad around. Three hours later, with the help of my father, I could swim by myself. Although I couldn't swim very well, I was very happy.
I will never forget this experience, because I not only learned how to swim, but also learned to be brave!
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5月18日是國際博物館日，下圖是你班同學參觀博物館的情況。請你結合調查結果、自己的參觀經歷和感受，寫一份報告，并在英語課上匯報。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80-100 (短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。
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【寫作思路】
這是一篇圖表，是同學參觀博物館的情況，結合調查結果、自己的參觀經歷和感受，寫一份報告，并在英語課上匯報。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據材料注意人稱和時態(tài)的不同，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
【參考范文】
Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc.
Among them, the science museum is our favorite.
I've been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What I'm interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.
Museums make it possible for us students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more?
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近幾年，旅游已經成為一項全民活動。初中生們旅游的機會也有很多，因此，旅游也是初中生們津津樂道的話題。
你的美國朋友Tom非常喜歡中國文化，去年暑假你和他一起從桂林出發(fā)去北京旅游了幾天，你們參觀了一些著名景點，還品嘗了一些有名的小吃，請把你們的旅游經歷寫成一篇不少于80詞的短文。
參考范文：
A Trip to Beijing My American friend Tom and I went to Beijing by plane last summer. On the first day，we visited the Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square. The next day，we climbed the Great Wall. We took lots of photos. Although we felt tired，it was a fantastic experience. The third day we relaxed. Then we had the Beijing roast duck for lunch. I think it is the most delicious food in the world. Tom is interested in Chinese culture，so we drank tea and saw Beijing Opera in Lao She Teahouse in the evening. Finally，we did some shopping and flew back to Guilin. The trip to Beijing was short，but it was wonderful. Tom said that he would never forget it.
《中考英語作文指導：社會熱點作文之課外實踐英語作文》添加時間：2025-01-10；更新時間：2025-03-15
