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1．健康對我們來說非常重要, 我們有很多方法來保持身體健康。請根據(jù)下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”為題，寫一篇80個詞左右的短文，倡議“健康生活”，從三個方面說明如何保持健康。短文首句已給出，不記入總詞數(shù), 可適當發(fā)揮。 易優(yōu)作文網(wǎng)，中小學(xué)學(xué)生學(xué)作文的好網(wǎng)站（http://www.zequeka.cn）。
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3.happiness keep happy, make friends, smile…
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2．大千世界，無奇不有。相信同學(xué)們也遇到過這類謊言、騙局或謠言。假設(shè)你叫李明，是紅星（Hongxing）中學(xué)九（1）班的學(xué)生，請你寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括：
自我介紹；
描述一次類似的經(jīng)歷，并說說你當時的感受；
以后再經(jīng)歷這樣的事，作為學(xué)生，我們該怎么做？請?zhí)岢鰞蓚€建議或做法。
作文要求：
不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名；
語句連貫，次數(shù)在80個左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總次數(shù)。
Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.____________________________
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That’s all. Thank you.
3．假如你是Mary 的班主任老師，Mary把她的困惑告訴了你。請根據(jù)以下信息，你給Mary提出幾點建議。（不少于70詞）
應(yīng)該做的事情 1.上課專心聽講，按時完成作業(yè)； 2.每周至少參加兩次體育活動； 3.友好地和同學(xué)們相處； 4.周末好好休息； 5.做一些自己喜歡的事情； 6.可以多讀一些好書 |
不應(yīng)該做的事情 1.不要和父母吵架； 2.周末不要上太多的課程； 3..不要過多的上網(wǎng)，少打游戲。 |
希望 平時更好地和父母、老師交流； |
要求：1.包含所有表格內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；
2.開頭已給出不計入總詞數(shù)。
Here is my advice
4．大多數(shù)中學(xué)生認為校園生活是豐富多彩的，學(xué)習是快樂有趣的。然而，無論在城市
還是農(nóng)村學(xué)校都有一些厭學(xué)的學(xué)生。請圍繞該話題用英語談?wù)勀愕目捶?。
要求：（1）內(nèi)容包括 ① 中學(xué)生厭學(xué)的主要原因。
② 你對該現(xiàn)象的看法。
（2）字數(shù)：60-80詞。
（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。
5．假定上周六晚上，你們?nèi)?/span>在一家飯店就餐。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示．用英語寫一篇短文，描述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，并適當加以評論。
要點提示：
(1)鄰桌年輕人大聲說笑、吸煙。
(2)你請他們不要那樣做。
(3)他們不聽，反而嘲笑你。
(4)你認為：①他們在公共場所那樣做是不對的。
②年輕人是天津的未來，應(yīng)該……
參考詞匯：嘲笑laugh at
要求：
(1)詞數(shù)：80～100個。
(2)短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
(3)要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。
Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant.
6．請用英語表述一下內(nèi)容。
要點如下：
本周六是王洪的生日，許多同學(xué)將去她家參加生日聚會。
王洪愛好廣泛，為人友善；經(jīng)常幫父母做家務(wù)。
一些同學(xué)打算向父母要錢買禮物送給她。
你對同學(xué)們花錢買禮物一事的看法及理由。
要求：1.不要逐字翻譯。
2.詞數(shù)：60-80。
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7．根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，寫出不少于60個單詞的短文。
假設(shè)你對服裝很感興趣，要從事服裝設(shè)計，針對不同人適合穿什么服裝談?wù)勀愕目捶?。
可包含以下內(nèi)容：1 穿合適服裝的重要性； 2 不同職業(yè)穿不同的衣服； 3你設(shè)計服裝會怎么做？
8．研究表明音樂對人們的情緒有著重要的影響，因此人們用不同的音樂來調(diào)節(jié)心情。請根據(jù)下表提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文。
聽音樂前的情緒狀態(tài) | 適用音樂 | 聽音樂后的心境 |
壓力大，過分焦慮 | 流行音樂 | 放松 |
沉迷電腦游戲，興奮過度 | 鄉(xiāng)村音樂 | 平靜 |
困倦.疲勞 | 搖滾音樂 | 振奮 |
孤獨.悲傷 | （考生自擬） | （考生自擬） |
注意：
1.詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2.內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點；
3.條理清楚.語句連續(xù)；
4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名.校名和人名等信息。
（參考詞匯：搖滾音樂rock music）
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods.
9．你班上周舉行了關(guān)于是否縮短寒暑假并增加春秋假的討論，同學(xué)們各抒己見。請你根據(jù)下表中的討論記錄，結(jié)合你自己對此事的看法，用英語給校報寫一篇短文。
贊成 | 目前學(xué)期長而枯燥，學(xué)生無法充分休息 春秋兩季風景優(yōu)美，學(xué)生可以感受自然 |
反對 | 一年分成四個學(xué)期，影響學(xué)習效果 作業(yè)可能因此變多，家中學(xué)習壓力 |
你的觀點 | 。。。。。（至少一點） |
注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱
2.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言通順，意思清楚，連貫，書寫規(guī)范
3.詞數(shù)不少于90。文章開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
We had a discussion about whether to shorten the summer and winter holidays and add the spring and autumn holidays lat week. Opinions are different.
Some students think____________________________________________________________
10．某中文網(wǎng)站提出 “走路去上學(xué)” 的倡議，請你就這一話題寫一篇約70詞的英語短文。
內(nèi)容提示：1. 走路有利于健康且安全；
2. 和同學(xué)結(jié)伴可以相互了解，相互幫助；
3. 不需要父母接送，學(xué)會自理；
4. 道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵；
……
要求：1. 要點齊全，條理清楚，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名，否則不予評分。
3. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，可適當發(fā)揮。
參考詞匯：be good for , each other , send , no longer, crowded
Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise.
11．現(xiàn)在是周六上午九點，我們來看看Jim 一家正在做什么呢? 請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文. 可適當發(fā)揮，60—80詞。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。
People | Activity |
Jim | Writing a letter |
Father | Washing the car |
Mother | Cleaning the room |
Sister | Doing homework |
Grandparents | Making food |
It’s 9 o’clock on Saturday morning now.
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12．提示：假如你叫王明，是七年級一班的一個學(xué)生。上周五晚上，你所在的班級舉行 了一場英語派對（an English party)。在派對上，大家盡情地唱歌、跳舞、表演節(jié)目、做 游戲等。你的老師們也參加了這次派對并表演了節(jié)目，師生們一起度過了一段美好的時 光。 請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以A Wonderful English Party為題寫一篇書面表達。 注意：1、短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的班級、姓名等信息； 2、使用提示內(nèi)容中提供的信息，并可以適當發(fā)揮；
3、書寫規(guī)范，注意大小寫和標點符號；
4、書面表達內(nèi)容不少于60個單詞。
A Wonderful English Party
13．同學(xué)們，在剛才的答題過程中，大家已經(jīng)閱讀和欣賞了詩歌、書評、雜志專欄、新聞、 寓言、科普故事等不同的材料。著名作家Francis Bacon曾說過：“ Reading makes a full man.”可見，閱讀對于每個人的成長都有著舉足輕重的作用。請你根據(jù)以下信息提示，結(jié)合自己的觀點，以“Reading Makes a Full Man” 為題，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，表達你對閱讀的看法和計劃。
要求：句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，要點齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
14．為了進一步增強中學(xué)生的安全意識，提高自我保護能力，某校開展了以"安全為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示寫一篇演講稿。
注意：1)內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點，可適當發(fā)揮；
2)表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
3)詞數(shù)80左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：be careful, on line, danger, call...for, go bad
How to keep safe?
As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.
First, _______________________________________________________________________________
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15．假設(shè)你是一名來自雅安的中學(xué)生李紅,今年14 歲, 暑假你將參加學(xué)校組織的赴北京的夏令營活動。請你用英語寫一篇在開營儀式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。請將該發(fā)言稿寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。詞數(shù) 60 - 90。發(fā)言稿還包括以下要點:
1. 你愛好畫畫;
2. 課余時間你喜歡野營,喜歡在大自然中畫植物,聆聽鳥兒的歌唱;
3. 你最喜歡的科 目是科學(xué),希望長大以后成為一名科學(xué)家;
4. 你很高興參加夏令營,希望你們能成為好朋友。
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16．請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”為題，用英語寫一篇演講稿。
背 景 | 1.認為上中學(xué)時吃好穿好是應(yīng)該的； 2.走向社會后沒有感恩意識。 |
學(xué)會感恩 | 1.感謝社會提供良好的教育機會； 2.感謝父母供養(yǎng)自己上學(xué)； 3.感謝老師傳授知識； 4.感謝朋友的支持與鼓勵。 |
參考詞匯：enter society 進入社會， sense of thanks 感恩意識， behavior 行為
要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括所提供的所有內(nèi)容，可以適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；
2.演講稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名及能夠透露你個人身份的信息；
3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”.___________________
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In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.
Thank you for your listening!
17．今天是父親節(jié)。假定你是李華，請給你的美國朋友John寫一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c父親一起度過這個特別的日子。要點如下：
●表述你與父親間的情感；
●為父親制作二張卡片；
●幫助父親做點事；
●陪父親散步等。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80-100；
2．請不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮；
3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear John,
It's Father's Day today. It's a special day, isn't it? ______________________
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What' your plan for Father's Day? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
18．根據(jù)提示，請以“ School Rules”為題， 寫一篇短文：每所，學(xué)校都有規(guī)章制度 。下面是你們學(xué)校的一些規(guī)章制度，請你向一位新生Mary作一下介紹。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 上課不能遲到。
2. 教室要保持(keep)干凈和安靜。
3. 見到老師要問好。（greet)
4. 不允許在教室里吃東西。
5. 不許在課堂上聽音樂，玩游戲。
6. 不要損害花草樹木。（pick flowers; climb trees）
要求：意思連貫、語句通順。70詞左右。
19．昨天是奶奶的生日，以An interesting birthday party為題…
提示詞：1. birthday , yesterday , morning
2. go, the shop, buy , presents,
3. go , see, presents , have a good time .
4. go home until , nine o’clock , evening.
An interesting birthday party
20．當前，全市各學(xué)校正開展“好書伴我成長”活動。請你根據(jù)活動主題并結(jié)合表格中所給信息，以“Growing up with good books” 為題，用英語寫一篇100-120詞的倡議書，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。
讀書的益處 | 獲取知識，增長見識，使人快樂。 |
存在的現(xiàn)象 | 聽音樂，看電視，上網(wǎng)，占用了大部分業(yè)余時間。 |
發(fā)出倡議 | 多讀書，讀經(jīng)典好書。向世界傳播中國傳統(tǒng)文化。 讓讀書成為我們生活的一部分 |
要求：
1.倡議書應(yīng)包括所有要點；
2.倡議書的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Growing up with good books
My dear friends,
Reading is very important. _____________________________________________
21．假設(shè)你是李明，本周班會上， 你將代表老師用英語通知學(xué)生參加一次敬老院的公益活動。
要點如下：
星期天早上8：30在校門口集合，乘公共汽車前往；
給老人們贈送班級禮物；
打掃衛(wèi)生，整理房間；
唱歌、跳舞、講故事、聊天，給老人們帶去快樂；
活動很有意放，希望積極參與；
注意：
次數(shù)60 --- 80， 書面表達的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：
1. chat v. 聊天 2. meaningful adj. 有意義的 3. cheer up 使……高興
22．假設(shè)你班為了配合創(chuàng)建“宜居城市”，最近以“Life in the future ：for better or worse?”為題進行了一次討論。許多同學(xué)對未來表示樂觀，但也有一些同學(xué)對未來有些擔心。請你根據(jù)下列表格中的內(nèi)容要點提示，用英語寫一篇短文。
樂觀者的觀點 | 1.世界變得更好 2.生活水平提高 3.人的壽命更長 |
擔心者的觀點 | 1.世界變得更擠 2.環(huán)境問題更多 3.能源變得更少 |
你自己的觀點 | 考生自擬（至少兩點） |
注意：
1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2.短文須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順;
3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
參考詞匯： 水平、標準standard n.； 觀點、看法opinion
Life in the future：for better or worse?
Many students are optimistic(樂觀的)about the next fifty years.__________________
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23．請以"My last holiday"為題，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：
1. Where did you go?
2. When did you go?
3. How did you get there?
4. How long did you spend there?
5. What did you do or see?
6. What was it like?
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24．安全對每個人都很重要。請根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語小短文。
提示： 1. 體育鍛煉
2. 上下樓梯
3. 交朋結(jié)友
4. 食品衛(wèi)生
要求： 1. 語句通順，表達準確，內(nèi)容連貫；
2．短文可以適當發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點。
3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.___________ _____________________________________________
25．新學(xué)期你認識了一個新朋友叫Tina Green，請根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容，作適當發(fā)揮后，寫一篇關(guān)于她的60字左右的介紹短文。(10分)
Name
Age
sex Nationality(國籍)
school dinner Collection
Hobbies（愛好）
TinaGreen 14 girl English No.1 Middle School 西紅柿，雞肉和水果 9 baseballs…4 volleyballs
I have a new friend .
26．近期，我國一名中學(xué)生隨父母旅游時，在埃及一著名景點文物上刻寫“××到此一游”，此事經(jīng)媒體曝光后，在國內(nèi)引起極大反響。作為一名中學(xué)生，你就“如何文明旅游”這一話題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。
提示：1、旅游中不文明的陋習，如……；
2、文明意識和行為，如……；
3、詞數(shù)80左右（首句已給出，不計算在總詞數(shù)之內(nèi)）。
Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life._________
27．劉偉，無臂鋼琴演奏者。他十歲時在一次意外中失去雙臂，但他并沒有放棄成為一名鋼琴家的夢想。經(jīng)過刻苦用腳練習彈琴，他最終在“中國達人秀”（China’s Got Talent）的舞臺上實現(xiàn)了自己的夢想。請根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文。
要求：
簡要描述劉偉的經(jīng)歷；
談?wù)剰乃慕?jīng)歷中得到的啟示；
詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience.
28．很快就要初中畢業(yè)了，中考完后每個人都有自己的計劃或者愿望。下課時，有幾位同學(xué)談了自己的想法，有人想學(xué)習，有人想旅游，你又有什么想法呢？請根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文介紹一下吧：
Jim | 以前很忙，沒有時間玩，想去北京旅游放松一下，并且學(xué)習更多中國歷史。 |
Amy | 對電腦感興趣，考完試后去學(xué)習電腦, 這樣能在電腦上做很多事情。 |
You | …… |
提示詞：used to travel learn more about… after the exam hope
要求：1）所有提示詞都應(yīng)用上，語言運用準確得當，句子通順，表達符合語言邏輯，可發(fā)揮適當想像，字數(shù)80左右。
2）不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及所在學(xué)校名稱等個人相關(guān)信息。
29．書面表達
請以“My dream”為題寫一篇英語作文，供英語課上交流。
Dream | I want to |
Reasons | be interested in … |
Ways to achieves my dream | work hard at school find out how successful people did it … |
注意：1、短文必須包括三部分內(nèi)容，需要陳述理由（2條）和方式（3條）
2、表中右欄信息僅供參考，也可自由發(fā)揮；
詞數(shù)80個左右
30．埃及千年神廟驚現(xiàn)中文涂鴉“丁 ××到此一游”。此事曝光后，引起國內(nèi)外廣泛關(guān)注，某國外英語網(wǎng)站就此發(fā)起討論。請你以一名中國中學(xué)生（網(wǎng)名Whitecloud） 的身份，跟帖發(fā)表自己的看法。
要點提示：
1.表明身份；
2. 發(fā)表看法；
3. 你的行動
要求：
1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右， 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。
31．據(jù)報道，從2011年開始上海、寧波等地個別學(xué)校進行了電子書包試點。這是否預(yù)示電子書將全面推廣？它對學(xué)生的學(xué)習會有什么影響？就此，你班同學(xué)發(fā)起了一次主題為“E-Books, Good or Bad?”的討論，假如你叫陳華，請你給某英文報社寫一封信，介紹一下討論的情況及你自己的觀點。
贊成 | 反對 |
環(huán)保，節(jié)約紙張，不會過多砍伐樹木 | 長時間使用對眼睛有害 |
美觀、小巧，便于攜帶，便于查找資料 | 不能直接在書上做筆記 |
可以在無光的環(huán)境下閱讀 | 被一些學(xué)生用來玩游戲 |
注意：1、開頭部分已寫好，只需接著寫,不計入字數(shù)總數(shù)。
2、可適當增加討論話題時經(jīng)常用到的話語，使所寫內(nèi)容連貫。
3、所寫內(nèi)容必須包括上面表格全部信息。
4、短文詞數(shù)：80個左右。
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether e-books are good or bad?___________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
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Yours truely,
Chen Hua
32．書面表達（滿分20分）
假如你叫劉明，你班進行了“Is daily homework necessary?” 的分組討論，你代表第五小組，向全班用英語匯報討論結(jié)果。請你根據(jù)提示和要求，完成匯報稿。
Is daily homework necessary? Different students have different ideas. | |
三分之二的學(xué)生同意 | 有助于理解，熟能生巧。 |
三分之一的學(xué)生不同意 | 業(yè)余愛好時間少，疲勞，學(xué)習興趣降低。 |
你的看法（至少兩點） |
|
要求：
匯報內(nèi)容包含三大要點：
①自我介紹：姓名、小組；
②討論情況：不同學(xué)生有不同看法；
③你自己的看法：……
以第一人稱寫；
90詞左右（已給出的部分不計入總詞數(shù)）
注意: 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。
33．書面表達（本大題共10分）
假設(shè)學(xué)校戲劇俱樂部正在舉辦“奧斯卡影片欣賞月”活動，上周播放的影片是《少年派》。請據(jù)此在答題卡指定的位置上寫一篇80詞左右的英文觀后感。內(nèi)容提示如下：
1.影片由李安（Ang Lee）執(zhí)導(dǎo)， 他因此片獲最佳導(dǎo)演獎。
2.影片講述了一個名叫派（Pi）的年輕人的故事，他獨自乘小船出行；
3. 他要應(yīng)付惡劣的天氣，還要找到足夠的食物，最終安全返回。
4.觀后感想。
注意：
1.觀后感須包括所給的內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫。
2. 第4要點的內(nèi)容須用2-3句話展開合理想象，作適當發(fā)揮。
3.觀后感的開頭已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
34．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：８０詞左右．（共１５分）．
根據(jù)遼寧省政府減輕中小學(xué)生課業(yè)負擔的要求，各市教育局已經(jīng)調(diào)整了學(xué)生上下學(xué)的時間，這使學(xué)生們的生活發(fā)生了一系列變化。請根據(jù)下列表格中的提示，用英語寫一篇文章。
在校時間 | 作業(yè)時限 | 假日安排 | 課外活動 | |
過 去 | …… | …… | 周末和節(jié)假日補課 | 少而乏味 |
現(xiàn) 在 | 不超過7個半小時 | 不超過1個半小時 | 不補課，做自己喜歡做的事。 | 豐富多彩，如：郊游，文體活動，做家務(wù)等。 |
你的看法 | …… | |||
要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。
2.文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
3.內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的要點,可以適當發(fā)揮。
4.參考詞匯：have extra classes，after-school activities, few and boring, colorful.
Great changes have taken place since the government of Liaoning did something to reduce the students’ studying pressure.
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35．假如你是小李，你的一位美國筆友Andrew想來中國旅游，來信咨詢你乘飛機或火車旅行的利弊。請根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容，以從青島到廣州為例，寫信簡述你的觀點。
注意：詞數(shù)100左右。
交通工具 | 飛機 | 火車 |
價 格 | 1200元 | 550元 |
旅游時間 | 2小時 | 23小時 |
優(yōu) 點 | 舒適…… | 便宜，可以觀光views |
缺 點 | …… | 耗時，擁擠，疲勞 |
Dear Andrew,
Yours
Xiao Li
參考答案
1．
Good Ways to Keep Healthy
It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?
First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat. Different kinds of foods are necessary, it’s also important to eat a balanced diet.
Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day.
Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends, it is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy. (127words)
【解析】本題是圍繞健康展開敘述，本題已經(jīng)給出主要寫作要點，寫作中注意從三個方面進行論述。在寫作時，本文的主語可以用第一，二人稱，時態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時。應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣，適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
2．
面對謊言
Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first. My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor. I offered to do the cleaning for him. Later I found him playing basketball on the playground. I was quite unhappy. He didn’t tell the lie. I would do the duty for him if he asked.
As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us. When others tell lies, we’d better make them understand that honesty is the best policy.
That’s all. Thank you. (95 words)
面對騙局
Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first. My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Last year, I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter. If I sent if to as many people as possible, I would get good luck. But if I didn’t , I would die the next day. I was so scared that I sent it to some of my friends.
As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters. If we don’t know how to deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help.
That’s all. Thank you.(95 words)
面對謠言
Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first. My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. I heard a rumor of the same kind this year. It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that. So it was sold out in our city very soon. I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all. I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.
As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors. Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.
That’s all. Thank you.(98 words)
【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文,寫一篇發(fā)言稿介紹自己的一次經(jīng)歷,并針對自己的經(jīng)歷提出兩點建議。結(jié)合本文題材可知,寫作中首先要對自己的情況簡要介紹,并注意用語的禮貌性,如開頭對聽眾進行問候,結(jié)尾表達謝意等.結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文時態(tài)涉及過去,現(xiàn)在和將來三種時態(tài),注意時態(tài)和時間狀語的一致問題。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞,注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。
3．
Here is my advice:
The right thing to do
1. Listen attentively in class, finish your homework on time.
2. Take part in the physical activity for at least two times a week;
3. Get on well with your classmates;
4. Have a good rest over the weekend;
5. Do something you like;
6. You can read some good books.
Should not be doing
1. Don't quarrel with your parents;
2. On the weekend, don't take too many courses;
3. Don't spend too much time on the Internet, playing video games.
I think you’d better communicate with parents, teachers at ordinary times;
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，以老師的名義給瑪麗寫一封信,并就她面臨的問題提出幾點建議。題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題,注意不要遺漏要點，注意文后要適當提出自己的建議。時態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，祈使句和should句型用的較多。由于本文主要是來提出建議,故敘述中可以借助于序數(shù)詞.
考點：提綱類作文
點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數(shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時就會有法可依。
4．
范文：
Most students believe that the life in school is colorful and interesting. However, there are still some students feeling tired of learning both in cities and countries.
Concerning the problem, the reasons are listed below. To begin with, they dislike the way that their teachers show. Besides, there is a lot of homework to do so they are stressed out. In addition, they feel bored about the courses.
From my point of view, students should be focused on study. As the saying goes “Study hard and you will make progress.”
Concerning the problem, the reasons are listed below. To begin with, they dislike the way that their teachers show. Besides, there is a lot of homework to do so they are stressed out. In addition, they feel bored about the courses.
From my point of view, students should be focused on study. As the saying goes “Study hard and you will make progress.”
【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應(yīng)認真閱讀要點，根據(jù)要點組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中做注意結(jié)合自己實際，認真談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生的厭學(xué)原因，這部分重點寫，然后談?wù)勛约簩@個問題的看法。注意不要遺漏要點，適當發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第三人稱，時態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時。注意情態(tài)動詞should后面動詞用原形。適當使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，注意從句的應(yīng)用，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
5．
Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant. We were enjoying ourselves when something disturbing happened. A group of young people were sitting at the table nearby. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked cigarettes, making the restaurant full of noise and smoke. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.
In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, one should keep quite and not affect others when in public. Therefore it’s completely bad behavior to do that in the restaurant. What’s more, we should always watch our manners and pay attention to public morality, as young people are the future of Tianjin.
【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較簡略，故動筆前要認真閱讀材料，根據(jù)材料組織內(nèi)容，適當發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點。寫作中注意重點介紹事情的發(fā)生經(jīng)過，并對此評論，表達自己的看法。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文在敘述事情經(jīng)過時，應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài)。表達觀點時，可用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)或者將來時態(tài)。本文人稱較為復(fù)雜，注意時態(tài)語與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
6．
Wang Hong is a friendly girl and has a lot of hobbies. She often helps her parents with the housework. It’s her birthday this Saturday. Many classmates will go to her home for her birthday party. Some of them will ask their parents for some money to buy her gifts. But I don’t think it’s a good idea, because that’ll cost our parents’ money. I’m going to make a birthday card for her by myself. I’m sure she’ll like it.
【解析】
試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是花錢為同學(xué)買禮物好不好。本題所給材料較為簡略，故動筆前一定要認真閱讀材料，根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定人稱，時態(tài)等問題。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣，適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：做英語書面表達時，只要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。
7．
I am very interested in designing clothes . As we all known , some good cloth can make you look like beautiful . But different people should be wearing different styles
. In my opinion the youth should be wearing light to show he is full of energy and lively.the adult should be wearing the firm in order to show he is a successful man . Finally the old should be wearing the deep color cloth . So if you wear clothes in suitable ways you will become more beautiful
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一篇介紹自己對服裝設(shè)計的看法。本題給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應(yīng)先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，注意從三個方面進行敘述。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。
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One possible version:
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of music to change moods. If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music. After you listen to it, you will feel relaxed. Some of the students are crazy about computer games and feel over excited, they can listen to country music. After listening to it, they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feel tired and sleepy, they can listen to rock music. After they listen to it, they will feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to disco music, after I listen to it, I feel happy again. Music is so wonderful. I like it very much.
【解析】本題要求寫一篇音樂的議論文。本題所給材料較為詳細，故動筆前先要認真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中主要將各種情緒狀態(tài)及適合的音樂介紹清楚。結(jié)合語境可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述，人稱問題較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當修改。
9．略
【解析】試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，談?wù)勱P(guān)于假期的問題。要求中只給出了要點，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多，注意將提示的要點表達清楚，并發(fā)表自己的觀點。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述，人稱問題較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，如賓語從句，條件狀語從句等。注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。
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Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise. I think it’s good for health and it’s safe. When we walk with our classmates, we can talk about something interesting and know each other better. Also, we can help each other. What’s more，if we walk, our parents don’t have to send us to school. We can learn to look after ourselves. As a result, there will be fewer cars in the city. Then the streets are no longer crowded. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，寫關(guān)于走路去上學(xué)的短語。本題所給材料較為詳細，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要用第一人稱進行敘述，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上，為了讓表達更符合邏輯，可以適當使用序數(shù)詞；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。
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【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文以表格的形式給出了主要寫作要點，寫作中主要將這些要點表達清楚。根據(jù)要求可知本句主要是用現(xiàn)在進行時態(tài)進行敘述，人稱問題比較復(fù)雜，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。
考點：提綱類作文
點評:該題型主要考查學(xué)生的語言表達能力，在寫作中根據(jù)所給提示和語言信息，不遺漏要點，可以適當發(fā)揮。做到表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫
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A Wonderful English Party
Hi! My name is Wang Ming. I’m a student of Class One, Grade Seven. Last Friday evening we had an English party, it was wonderful.
At the party, we had a good time. Li Lei sang some songs, Lin Tao danced to disco. Mary performed ballet, and my friend Kangkang performed Chinese Kong Fu. Michael performed magic tricks. My teachers came to our party, too. Mr. Wang sang an English song, and my Chinese teacher recited a Chinese poem. We played the musical Chairs game, too. Everyone was happy.
We had a good time, we enjoyed ourselves very much.
【解析】
試題分析；這是一篇給材料作文，介紹你一次英語聚會。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要用一般過去時態(tài)進行敘述，人稱為單數(shù)第一三人稱，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意運用所給短語。寫作中注意敘述順序，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。文中適當使用代詞，注意避免句式的單調(diào)重復(fù)，避免單詞及語法錯誤。
考點：記述文寫作
點評：此類作文考查的是學(xué)生基礎(chǔ)的寫作能力，主要是一些基礎(chǔ)句型的應(yīng)用。平時學(xué)習中應(yīng)注意對于一些常見句型句式的記憶，聯(lián)系默寫此類句型。對于一些比較經(jīng)典的段落，有目的的進行背誦，考試作為參照。這尤其對于敘述的邏輯問題有很大的幫助。
13．
One possible version
Reading Makes a Full Man
Reading is very important in our life. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent. Besides, reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English.
Textbooks, newspapers, magazines and other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into an excellent person.
I’m planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday. And I’ll spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life. Reading makes a full man! Let’s start reading now.
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在及將來時態(tài)，注意主謂一致及時間狀語與時態(tài)的一致問題。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
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How to keep safe?
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some
of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first !
【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文只給出了主要寫作要點。寫作中要注意從四個方面進行敘述，并自己補充一到兩點。動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順。寫作中注意使用連接詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系
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One Possible Version
Dear friends,
I’m very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hong. I’m 14 years old. I live in Ya’an. I’m interested in drawing. In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature. My favourite subject is Science. I want to be a
scientist when I grow up.
I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good friends.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹自己的發(fā)言稿文。結(jié)合材料，可知本文要愛好，課外活動，理想方面進行介紹，并注意表達自己希望參加夏令營的愿望。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。
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書面表達參考范文（一）：
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.
I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.
In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.
Thank you for your listening!
書面表達參考范文（二）：
Learn to express thanks
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find most Middle School students don’t show any sense of “Thanks”. They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionable clothes.
As Middle School students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school. And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge. Besides, our friends always give us encouragement and help.
In a word, we are lucky in everything. But we should learn to express thanks. In the future, I should study harder to repay our parents and teachers. I should go to my friends to share their happiness and sadness.
Thank you for your listening!
【解析】
這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇關(guān)于感恩的演講稿。寫作中注意將材料按照材料提示進行介紹，通過材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意使用連接詞，做到語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。由于是演講類作文，尤其注意應(yīng)用一些常見句式、短語來提高我們的表達水平。
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Dear John,
It's Father's Day today. It's a special day, isn't it?
I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me.
Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I' m sure he'll be very happy.
What's your plan for Father's Day? I' m looking forward to hearing from yon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一封電子郵件，介紹如何與父親一起度過父親節(jié)。材料中給的資料比較全面，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要用一般將來時態(tài)進行敘述，寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
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School Rules
Welcome to our school, Mary. Here are some of our school rules. Let me tell you: We can't arrive late for class. We can't talk loudly in class. We have to be quiet in class, and we have to keep our class clean. When we meet the teachers on the way, we must greet them. We can't eat or drink in the classroom. But we can eat outside. We can't listen to music or play games in class, either. We can't pick flowers or climb trees.
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，向一位新生Mary介紹學(xué)校的規(guī)章制度。題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。為了使語言更顯親切,在寫作時，本文的主語主要是用復(fù)數(shù)第一人稱，時態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài). 注意時間狀語與時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題。注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫,適當使用連詞。
考點：說明文寫作
點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數(shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時就會有法可依。
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It was October 12th yesterday. My friends held a birthday party for me. In the morning, they came to my home early, and they brought many presents for me. I liked them very much. I invited them to the KTV, we sang songs, danced and played games. About 5:30 p.m., we went my home. My mother had cooked a delicious dinner for us. After dinner, we watched TV and at about 8:30 p.m. we ate birthday cake. There were fifteen candles on my birthday cake. I made a silent wish, and then I blew the candles out in one breath. I had an interesting birthday party. We had a good time in the party. I was so grateful to what they did for me.
【解析】
試題分析；這是一篇給材料作文，介紹奶奶的生日。動筆前先要先認真閱讀提示單詞，根據(jù)單詞組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。根據(jù)提示可知本文主要記述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，故時態(tài)主要是一般過去時態(tài)。人稱為第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)。句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)。寫作中注意敘述順序，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。文中適當使用代詞，注意避免句式的單調(diào)重復(fù)，避免單詞及語法錯誤。
考點：記述文寫作
點評：此類作文考查的是學(xué)生基礎(chǔ)的寫作能力，主要是一些基礎(chǔ)句型的應(yīng)用。平時學(xué)習中應(yīng)注意對于一些常見句型句式的記憶，聯(lián)系默寫此類句型。對于一些比較經(jīng)典的段落，有目的的進行背誦，考試作為參照。這尤其對于敘述的邏輯問題有很大的幫助。
20．One possible version:
My dear friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us clever and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.
However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going on line to play games. It takes much of their spare time。So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【解析】首先我們應(yīng)該注意文章的體裁是應(yīng)用文，那就要注意應(yīng)用文的寫作特點和格式。其次要注意時態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。再次要注意內(nèi)容要點，不要有漏啦。最后要注意條理清晰，語言具有感染力。
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We will pay a visit to the old people’s home this Sunday. We’ll have to meet at the school gate at 8:30 on Sunday morning and then go there by bus. There we will do some cleaning and tidy the rooms. After that we will have many activities, such as singing, dancing, telling stories and chatting to cheer up the old. Before we leave, we’ll give our presents to them.
I hope all of us can take an active part. Through the meaningful activity, we can learn to care for the old.
【解析】
本題要求根據(jù)所給表格中所提供的信息，用英語寫一個通知，將學(xué)生參加一次敬老院的公益活動的活動安排告知全班同學(xué)。本題給出大量的信息，包括活動時間、集合時間、出發(fā)時間以及返回時間；集合地點、活動地點；活動內(nèi)容，及交通方式，注意將這些內(nèi)容介紹清楚。寫作中注意用詞準確，邏輯清楚，并注意應(yīng)用文題的格式，要求。
22．one possible version：
Life in the future：for better or worse?
Many students are optimistic(樂觀的)about the next fifty years．In fact，they think
that the world will be a better place than it is now and our lives will be greatly improved．
As a result，people will have a higher standard of living and live longer．
However，other students are worried about the future．They say the world will
become more crowded．Therefore，we will have even more environmental problems and
live in a world with less energy available．
But in my opinion，I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will
live more happily．
【解析】本文屬于議論文，主體時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時要用正確的句式表達出樂觀者和擔心者的觀點，最后用自己的觀點結(jié)束全文。
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On my last holiday went to Hawaii. My classmates LiZhi wei,QinChangping and I. First day, went to the beach took a bus.The QinChangping pulled out to a stong American and he won. The LZhiwei played volleyball with two beautiful American girl but he lost. I swam with six sportsmans. My sawm was the best.
Next day. We saw a film in a big cinema. We had lunch in a big hotel and ate lots of shashliks.There shashilks were very nice. Afternoon ,we went to graeyard of ZhangXue liang ,and took lots of photos.
Third day. We stayed 5 hours in the beach. We played volleyball with seven beautiful American girls. there were only us there boys ,so we won to the girls. Afternoon ,we bought many books of ZhangXueliang in there. The books were very nice. I am going to send my friends.
Next we took a plane to Beijing .I love Hawaii.
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的最后一個假期。本題所給材料比較簡單，動詞前先要閱讀所給六個問題,對涉及問題都要有所回應(yīng)。在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性,注意應(yīng)用所給單詞，短語。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般過去時態(tài)，第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。
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Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.
【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。結(jié)合要點提示，可知本文主要從三個方面進行敘述，注意圍繞要點組織材料，適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。
25．
I have a new friend .Her name is Tina Green. Her age is 14 years old .Her nationality is English. She is in the first high school .Her lunch is the tomato、 chicken and fruit. Her collection is 9 baseballs and 4 volleyball. She likes playing baseballs and volleyball. We are good friends.
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇短文，介紹自己的新朋友。本題給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應(yīng)先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第三人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，適當使用連接詞。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。日常學(xué)習中，注意多背誦范文，熟記一些經(jīng)典句型，考試時就能有所參照，有的放矢。
26．One possible version:
Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest. Some make noises in public places. Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on. As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors. For example, throw rubbish into dustbins and don’t write or draw on the relics. Don’t make noises in public places. We’d better follow guides and obey orders. At the same time, we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions.
【解析】本題是就一起熱點網(wǎng)絡(luò)時間發(fā)表看法。故動筆前先要圍繞自己想要表達的觀點確定材料，表達自己對這起事件的看法，同時注意自己是中國人，要自覺的維護自己國家的形象。結(jié)合材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在及時態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。
27．
Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience. He lost his arms in an
accident when he was 10, but he didn’t give up his dream of being a pianist. He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet. Finally he realized his dream in "China’s Got Talent".
As a student, I’ve learnt a lot from his story. We may meet a lot of difficulties in our future life, but we should believe that our dream will come true by working hard. No matter how hard life is, we won’t fail unless we give up our hope.
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一篇介紹無臂鋼琴演奏者劉偉的短文。本題給出的材料較為詳細，寫作中首先要描述一下劉偉的經(jīng)歷，然后談?wù)勛约菏艿降膯⑹?。通過閱讀材料可知在敘述劉偉的經(jīng)歷部分主要用一般過去時態(tài)，在表達自己感想時可用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)及將來時態(tài)。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。
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Jim used to be very busy and hardly had time to play. After the exam, he would like to travel to Beijing to relax himself. He thinks it’s a beautiful city. He can learn more history about China at the same time. Amy, a girl who is interested in computer, hopes to learn how to use the computer after the exam. Then she can do many things on computer. As for me, I would like to do something different. Maybe I will volunteer my time to help other people in the poor area. I’m sure I’ll be happy when I help them.
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料非常詳細，分別介紹兩個人的想法。寫作中注意將兩個人的想法表達清楚。注意應(yīng)用所給單詞短語。在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在及將來時態(tài)，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數(shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時就會有法可依。
【答案】One possible version:
My Dream
I want to be a writer when I grow up. Writing has been part of my life. Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.
I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn as much as possible. It’s also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them.
【解析】首先審題：寫自己的夢想。其次：注意寫作要點中要陳述兩條理由和實現(xiàn)夢想的三種方式。最后注意結(jié)束語。
30．
One possible version:
Whitecloud: I come from China k.Com] . I’m also a middle school student like Ding. When I read the news, my heart ached. What Ding did made me sad. Ding should feel sorry for that. As a student, it’s very important to care about what we do in public. For example, we’d better keep our voice
down . I will be more polite to people around me and take better care of public things. And I’m sure we Chinese will show our best to the whole world!
Sincerely yours,
【解析】本題是就一起熱點網(wǎng)絡(luò)時間發(fā)表看法。故動筆前先要圍繞自己想要表達的觀點確定材料，表達自己對這起事件的看法，同時注意自己是中國人，要自覺的維護自己國家的形象。結(jié)合材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在及時態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。
31．
Some students thought that E-Books are good for environment. They can save plenty of paper. So people needn’t cut down too many trees. E-books are also very nice and small. And they are easy to carry .people can search for information conveniently. They can be read in the environment without light.
But some students disagreed with them. They thought if they use them for a long time, they are bad for their eyes. While having classes, students can’t make notes directly in the books. Sometimes, they can be played by students .I think E-books will be replaced the traditional books in the future. I am looking forward to the day.
【解析】
試題分析：本題要求寫一篇關(guān)于推廣電子書包議論文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了主要要點比較簡略，寫作中注意根據(jù)要點組織內(nèi)容，從正反兩方面介紹人們贊成或者反對的觀點。動筆前先要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當修改。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：做英語書面表達時，只要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改。
32．略
【解析】
試題分析：本文屬于陳述各方觀點的議論文作文，主題是討論家庭作業(yè)的必要性。要求中只給出了要點，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應(yīng)先認真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意表達自己的觀點。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。
Dear Class,
It is our turn to report.
That’s all. Thanks.
33．One possible version:
Our school Drama Club is holding a film activity. We saw Life of Pi last week. It is directed by Ang Lee. And he gets the Best Director Award for it. The film is about the story of a young man called Pi. He takes a boat trip alone. He not only has to deal with difficult weather conditions but also needs to find enough food for himself. And at last he comes back home safely.
Many people think Life of Pi is one of the year’s best films. It tells us we should brave enough to face any problem and find ways to solve them. We are heroes of ourselves.
【解析】
這是一篇給材料作文，介紹你在看了李安執(zhí)導(dǎo)的電影《少年派》的感想。在寫作此類作文時，首先要將電腦內(nèi)容進行簡單介紹，然后在針對某個問題發(fā)表自己的感想。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一三人稱，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意運用所給短語。寫作中注意敘述順序，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。文中適當使用代詞，注意避免句式的單調(diào)重復(fù)，避免單詞及語法錯誤。
34．略
【解析】
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇文章介紹了學(xué)生們生活的變化。本題以表格形式給出了主要寫作內(nèi)容，寫作中注意將學(xué)生們過去和現(xiàn)在的生活介紹清楚，病發(fā)表自己的看法。故動筆前一定要認真閱讀材料，根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定人稱，時態(tài)等問題。結(jié)合材料可知本文可能涉及過去，現(xiàn)在和將來三種時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣，適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：做英語書面表達時，只要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。
35．
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. In my opinion, both air travel and train travel have advantages and disadvantages.
Travelling by air can save much time. For example, if you fly from Qingdao to Guangzhou, it takes only two hours. If you take the train, you will not get to Guangzhou in 23 hours. Also, air travel is more comfortable. The train is usually crowded and you have to sit on your seat for a long time. You will get tired after the long travel. On the other hand, train travel also has its advantages. First, it costs only 550 yuan while travelling by air costs 1200 yuan. What’s more, you can enjoy the beautiful countryside views outside the window along the way.
Which would you prefer? I am afraid you have to make your own choice. If you need more information, please let me know.
Have a nice journey!
Yours
Xiao Li
【解析】
試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，談?wù)剝煞N交通方式的利弊。要求中只給出了要點，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應(yīng)先認真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：做英語書面表達時，只要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。
