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中考英語話題作文：為祖國成就而自豪

【背景介紹】

從過去幾年來看，中國經(jīng)濟在國內(nèi)國際復雜形勢下仍然保持了較高增速，經(jīng)濟結(jié)構(gòu)不斷優(yōu)化升級，經(jīng)濟總量達到了82.7萬億元，貧困人口減少了6800多萬，城鎮(zhèn)新增就業(yè)6600萬人以上，重點城市重污染天數(shù)減少一半等，都為中國經(jīng)濟持續(xù)發(fā)展創(chuàng)造了良好基礎。在他看來，這些令人矚目的成績在中國和當代世界發(fā)展歷史上都是不曾有過的，40年的改革開放使中國在邁向全面建成小康社會的道路上又進了一步。

【佳作賞析】

A

2021年是中國共產(chǎn)黨成立100周年, 盛世華誕, 舉國同慶。在這100年里, 我國發(fā)生了翻天覆地的變化并取得了舉世矚目的成就。請根據(jù)下表提示, 以The Changes in China為題, 寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

要求：

1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名;

2. 語言通順, 要點齊全, 意思連貫,條理清楚。

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【答案】

The Changes in China

With the development of society, China has changed a lot. In the past, the houses were old and small and people were leading a poor life. The roads were so narrow that the traffic wasn’t convenient at all. What’s worse, the communication developed slowly and people had little entertainment activities.

Now, great changes have taken place. We live in big and bright houses with well-suited furniture. More and more families have cars. The roads are becoming wider and wider which make the traffic more and more convenient. Besides, people have more kinds of activities.

I believe our country will become more and more beautiful.

【詳解】

1.題干解讀：本文緊跟時代熱點，描寫新中國的變化。材料的表格內(nèi)容清晰，分別從兩方面進行描寫，過去和現(xiàn)在。同學們要捋清楚思路，在寫作的過程中，將過去與現(xiàn)在進行對比，符合邏輯即可。

2.例文點評：本文采用三段式，段落布局清晰，首段描寫過去，主要采用一般過去時。而第二段對現(xiàn)在進行描寫，采用一般現(xiàn)在時。與第一段的內(nèi)容進行一一對應。第三段則是對將來的展望。

3.高分亮點：

短語：with the development of；lead a poor life；What’s worse。

句型：so…that；which引導定語從句。

B

2020年新冠肺炎疫情發(fā)生后，為了更好地保障同桌就餐人員的衛(wèi)生安全，國家大力宣傳并提倡家庭及餐飲機構(gòu)提供公筷，以方便取食。對此不同的人有不同的看法。請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文。

提示詞：serving chopsticks（公筷）

要求：

1．短文需涵蓋表格中所有內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；

2．行文連貫、條理清楚、語句通順、語法正確、書寫規(guī)范；

3．詞數(shù)：80～100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

In order to better protect be health and safety or dinning staff at the same table, many families and restaurants provide serving chopsticks._______________________________________________________________________

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【答案】

In order to better protect be health and safety or dinning staff at the same table, many families and restaurants provide serving chopsticks. Different people have different opinions about it. Some people think it is convenient, sanitary and safe to use serving chopsticks. And it can help avoid infection. Others think they often forget to use serving chopsticks. It is embarrassing to use serving chopsticks when friends and relatives gather for a meal.

In my opinion, the use of serving chopsticks is a sign of civilization. It is important to protect the health and safety of yourself and those around you. Family and friendship will not change because of serving chopsticks.

【詳解】

1.題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫作，題目要求根據(jù)表格提示，寫一篇文章闡述不同的人對提供公筷的不同看法，并發(fā)表自己的觀點。

2.寫作指導：本文應該用第三人稱為主來論述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；在寫作時，力求觀點明確，論據(jù)充分，語言準確，條理清晰。

C

“綠水青山就是金山銀山"，堅持節(jié)約資源和保護環(huán)境是我國的基本國策。請以”共建綠色家園”為主題，根據(jù)以下文字提示，請你寫一篇英語短文向校報投稿，并適當發(fā)表自 己的觀點。

注意：

（1）短文應包括所有要點；

（2）詞數(shù)80-120詞（開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；

（3）不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。

Let's build a green home together!

As we all know , the environment around us is getting worse and worse. ____________________________   

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【答案】

Let's build a green home together！

As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. Waste and pollution become more and more serious, which has a bad effect on our earth. As a middle school student. it's time for us to protect our earth, to help build a green home.

We must take some action. Firstly, we should often go outside on foot or by bike instead of car. Therefore, we can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution. Secondly, we had better use cloth shopping bags rather than plastic bags when we go shopping. Otherwise, using too much plastic bags may cause mountains of rubbish and pollute the land. Thirdly, turn off the light when we leave, as a result, we can save much energy. Last but not least, it is a good way to plant more threes, which can make our earth become greener and more beautiful.

【詳解】

1. 題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文，要求以”共建綠色家園”為主題寫一篇英語短文向校報投稿。需要包括的內(nèi)容有主題，必要性和四點建議。

2. 例文點評：例文用第一人稱復數(shù)來進行倡議，使語言更有感染力；時態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時。文章條理清晰、內(nèi)容全面，材料要求的所有內(nèi)容都有涉及，描述建議時還很好地應用了表示順序的詞firstly, secondly等，使得層次分明。

3. 高分亮點：

短語：worse and worse；take action；last but not least；instead of；rather than。

句型：as we all know；have an effect on；it’s time to do sth.；had better do sth.；when引導的時間狀語從句；which引導的非限定性定語從句。

D

近年來中國不斷取得重大的科技成就。除航空航天領(lǐng)域外，我國在醫(yī)療、計算機、生物、農(nóng)業(yè)、基建等各個領(lǐng)域也取得了非凡的成就。就目前來看，我國各行各業(yè)發(fā)展迅速，跨行業(yè)、跨領(lǐng)域發(fā)展前景寬廣。作為祖國未來的希望，你未來想從事什么行業(yè)？請以“My Dream Job”為題，寫一篇英文短文，講述你未來想要從事的工作。

要點：

1、你想從事的工作；

2、你想從事這項工作的原因；

3、你打算怎么做呢？

要求：

1、不少于80詞；

2、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名。

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【答案】

My Dream Job

　Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.

　　To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

【詳解】

1、題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，是話題作文，談論你未來想從事什么行業(yè)。仔細閱讀提示要點，這是寫作提綱，寫作必須包含所有要點，但可以適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)要點提示，作文必須包含以下三個方面：1、你想從事的工作；2、你想從事這項工作的原因；3、你打算怎么做呢？

2、寫作指導：根據(jù)要點提示，本文使用多種時態(tài)，可能會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時、一般將來時、現(xiàn)在完成時等時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換和主謂一致等問題。像表達“你想從事的工作”要使用一般現(xiàn)在時，表達“你想從事這項工作的原因”可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時，也可能使用一般過去時等時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)的選??；在表達“你打算怎么做呢？”時，使用的時態(tài)是一般將來時。敘述要條理連貫，表達清楚，注意拼寫、標點、語法，書寫要規(guī)范整潔。

E

今年上映的大型紀錄片《厲害了！我的國》展現(xiàn)了我國近幾年來各個領(lǐng)域的巨大變化和取得的偉大成就。請你以“Amazing China！”為題，從中學生的角度介紹你身邊的變化。

寫作要求：

1.表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名，校名和地名。

參考詞匯：free breakfast, shared-bikes（共享單車），high-speed train（高鐵）， subway（地鐵）， Wechat Pay（微信支付）， community service（社區(qū)服務），life quality

Amazing！China！

I’m very proud of my country-China, especially after watching the documentary Amazing! China. Actually, our life has changed a lot in recent years. _______________________________________________                                                       

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【答案】

Amazing! China!

I’m very proud of my country—China, especially after watching the documentary Amazing! China!. Actually, our life has changed a lot in recent years.

First, there are some shared-bikes around us. They’re very helpful and convenient for us to travel to places not too far away from our home.

Secondly, lots of restaurants offer the old and disabled people free breakfast. Besides, the government provide textbooks, meals for all the primary and junior middle school students for free. The old people over sixty ages can get some money from the government every month to feed themselves.

Thirdly, you can see high-speed trains, subways and high-speed roads everywhere in China. It shows China is developing fastest in the world.

What’s more, WeChat Pay is widely used in cities, towns and villages. The Chinese people of all ages can use their smart phones to shop online, watch the latest movies. Lots of foreigners can hardly believe their eyes.

Finally, all kinds of community services are good for Chinese people, including medical, educational and other parts of our life. All these mean we are improving our life quality.

How amazing China is! We’re proud of our country!

【詳解】

這是一篇話題作文，話題是“Amazing China！”。本文人稱主要是第三人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。認為閱讀材料，認真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)主題和所給提示列出本文的提綱，根據(jù)主題可適當發(fā)揮。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，字數(shù)80詞左右。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性，注意表達的順序。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：

厲害了！中國！

我為我的祖國中國感到驕傲，尤其是在看了這部紀錄片之后！中國！事實上，近年來我們的生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。

首先，我們周圍有一些共享單車。它們對我們來說很有幫助，也很方便去離家不遠的地方旅行。

第二，許多餐館為老年人和殘疾人提供免費早餐。此外，政府還免費為所有中小學生提供教科書、食物。60歲以上的老人每月可以從政府那里領(lǐng)到一些錢來養(yǎng)活自己。

第三，在中國到處都可以看到高速列車、地鐵和高速公路。這表明中國在世界上發(fā)展最快。

此外，微信支付在城市、城鎮(zhèn)和農(nóng)村中得到了廣泛的應用。所有年齡段的中國人都可以用他們的智能手機上網(wǎng)購物，看最新的電影。很多外國人簡直不敢相信自己的眼睛。

最后，各種社區(qū)服務對中國人民都是有益的，包括醫(yī)療、教育和我們生活的其他部分。所有這些都意味著我們正在提高生活質(zhì)量。

中國是多么厲害啊！我們?yōu)槲覀兊膰腋械津湴?！

【點睛】

書面表達要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。語言要規(guī)范，時態(tài)運用要正確，敘述清楚條里，信息表達清晰、完整，意思連貫。要學以致用。像First, Secondly, Thirdly, Finally表示順序的詞，使文章表達更清楚條里。（1）學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運用適當?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達的順序。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標點符號等的正確運用。  （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：1.審題：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。2.抓住要點：要點是否齊全，適當補充。3.擴充句子：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實。4.連句成文，合理使用連詞。5.改正錯誤：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當?shù)?。6.謄寫作文：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。

F

每一個中國人都在為“中國夢”的實現(xiàn)而努力，我們的家鄉(xiāng)福建也發(fā)生了巨大的變化。請描述一下家鄉(xiāng)的變化吧，可以從環(huán)境、科技、出行方式、溝通方式等各方面進行介紹；并說一下你將如何努力為家鄉(xiāng)建設貢獻一份力。詞數(shù)100左右。

注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、地名、校名等。

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【答案】

Everyone has been making an effort to realize Our Chinese Dream, and at the same time, my hometown, Fujian, has changed a lot in many ways.

First, the environment in Fujian has become better and better because of our strong sense of environmental protection and our government’s efficient and wonderful methods. What’s more, with the development of science and technology, we can communicate more easily and conveniently than ever before. There is no doubt that we have more choices of going out, such as well-developed bus system and subway.

I am proud of these great changes of my hometown, so I am prepared to try my best to make it more beautiful. I have a strong desire to study hard and get into my dream senior high, then my ideal university. In the future, I will spare no effort to devote to my job, being a great teacher!

【詳解】

1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇話題作文，主要是以“中國夢”為主題，寫出自己家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生的一些變化，包括環(huán)境，科技和出行自己溝通方式等方面，還要寫出自己將要為家長建設要做哪些功效，把題目中的這些要求寫清楚具體即可。

2. 例文點評：文章主要是分三段描寫。第一段主要總述自己的家長發(fā)生了很大的變化；第二段主要寫家鄉(xiāng)各方面發(fā)生的具體的變化；第三段主要寫將要為家長建設做的一些貢獻。整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言表達通順，意思明確易懂，詞匯應用恰當。

3. 高分亮點：

短語：make an effort；at the same time；because of；what’s more；be proud of；spare no effort。

句型：that引導的同位語從句；so引導的并列句I am proud of these great changes of my hometown, so I am prepared to try my best to make it more beautiful.。