我們學(xué)校成立的周年紀(jì)念
【內(nèi)容提示】
每一所學(xué)校都有該校成立的紀(jì)念日。請(qǐng)你就你校成立的周年紀(jì)念日寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
①學(xué)校的歷史有多長(zhǎng)。②周年紀(jì)念日在哪一天。③今年是她的第幾周年紀(jì)念。④參加周年紀(jì)念的人數(shù)及人員。⑤歷任校長(zhǎng)是誰(shuí)，其教育思想概述。⑥培養(yǎng)出來(lái)些什么人，其工作情況如何。
【作文示范】
The Anniversary of the Founding of Our School
翁嘉華
Shanghai＇s Yucai Middle School is a famous and beautiful school with a long history. All those who have studied in it are proud of it.The day after National Day is the anniversary①of the founding of our school. She turned 85 years old this year.
More than one thousand alumni② and alumnae③ came to their old school to celebrate this birthday . 作文網(wǎng)推薦，<A http://www.zequeka.cn>易優(yōu)作文網(wǎng)</a>，中小學(xué)生學(xué)語(yǔ)文閱讀寫(xiě)作的好幫手
That day, many of the graduates went to their classrooms and found them bright, clean and more beautiful than ever. Some of them had photos with their old teachers taken at the gate of the school.
Since the founding of the People＇s Republic, Mr. Duan Lipei （段力佩）has been the school＇s principal. He has always paid great attention to developing the students＇ ability to study on their own . Now many graduates from Yucai are useful citizens. They are engineers, teachers, scientists, managers and advanced workers . Some of them are working in foreign countries. They work hard in order to win honour for our country.Such a great and beautiful school! I love her very much! I must study harder and harder so that I can win honour for my dear school!
（選自1987年11月17日《上海學(xué)生英文報(bào)》）
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
①anniversary [?$ni＇v+:s+ri] n．周年紀(jì)念（日）②alumni[+＇l)mnai] n．（復(fù)數(shù)）男校友；男畢業(yè)生③alumnae[+＇l)mni:]n．（復(fù)數(shù)）女校友；女畢業(yè)生
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【寫(xiě)法指要】
本文雖然寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)單，但是把學(xué)校周年紀(jì)念的重要事項(xiàng)都表達(dá)出來(lái)了。先寫(xiě)學(xué)校名聲，再寫(xiě)其歷史，然后是85周年紀(jì)念日慶祝的盛況，接下來(lái)寫(xiě)校長(zhǎng)及其辦學(xué)思想以及該校為祖國(guó)各行各業(yè)培養(yǎng)人才的情況。最后作者抒發(fā)自己的感情
