在警察局里
【內容提示】
暑假期間,為了了解社會你參加了一次公安局對罪犯的審訊活動。被審訊的人是一名19歲的吸毒者。你旁聽了公安人員和罪犯的對話后對這個年輕人很是惋惜。請你寫一篇文章表達你的惋惜之情。
【作文示范】
At the Police Station
During the summer vacation, I had a chance to visit a police station in order to learn something about society. There I caught sight of a drug addict①.
That day, I was reading a dossier of a case② in the office when a young man was brought in.
“How old are you?”a policeman asked.
“Nineteen,”the man answered in a low voice.
“How long have you been taking drugs?”
“For 3 years.”
On hearing this, I was very surprised. Now I knew how he had become so thin, so pale and so weak. Drugtaking③ cost him so much money that he had to steal. As a result he was caught. 蘇州語文閱讀寫作培訓課程推薦,<a http://www.zequeka.cn/miniform/type_1.html>蘇州中小學語文閱讀寫作培訓</a>
“Now I realize I was wrong. I feel I have let my mother down who has been ill for a long time and is always worried about me. But now…I must die. I must die….”
Nineteen is a golden age. At this age he could have been at school or in the army or on a farm if he had not taken drugs.
His case proves the truth of a Chinese saying:“A moment's error can bring a lifelong regret.④”
(選自《英語畫刊》高中 版1997年第4期)
【詞語解釋】
①drug addict ['dr)g +'dikt] 吸毒者
②a dossier ['d&siei]of a case 一起案件材料
③drug-taking n.吸毒
④A moment's error can bring a lifelong regret.一失足成千古恨。
【寫法指要】
本文用夾敘夾議的手法寫了對一個失足青年的惋惜之情。第一、二段是敘述,寫時間、地點和事件 ;第三段是議論,寫作者聽到警察與吸毒青年的交談后的感想;第四段敘述該罪犯懺悔的表白;第五段又是議論,抒發(fā)惋惜之情;第六段引用一句中國格言結束全文