上海新東方提供的四級 作文參考。
題目：
Create a green campus
1.建設(shè)綠色校園十分重要
2.綠色校園不僅指綠色環(huán)境
3.為了建設(shè)綠色校園我們應(yīng)該……
范文：
Create a Green Campus
It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college. Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days, since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society.
The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment. To begin with, the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable. Some of the authorities’ budget should be on how to reduce of the waste. What’s more, we’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us. Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life. 在線批改作文，<a href=http://www.zequeka.cn/jiaoshoulanmu/>易優(yōu)名師作文批改</a>
It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution, and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Certainly, there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses.
本次作文還是延續(xù)四級一貫成熟的風格，偏重校園生活。當然也結(jié)合了時下流行的話題，綠色環(huán)保。上面這篇文章盡管有些不妥當之處，但能較好的符合四級考試作文的核心：無論題目怎么變，都是以考察學生的語言為核心，不是考查思維和知識面的。所以只需關(guān)注語言的應(yīng)用就行了。還是可以靈活套用固定的套路，中心句＋邏輯詞的方式，做到不變應(yīng)萬變。相信大多新東方學員應(yīng)該能夠習慣的應(yīng)用新路老方法 走的思路。但是，還是這句話，無錯表達才是四級語言表達合格的核心
