祝賀獲得好成績(jī)
【內(nèi)容提示】
假如今天是1990年6月18日。你的名字叫高峰，家住北京西四大街148號(hào)。你剛收到你的英國(guó)朋友Tom Brown寫(xiě)給你的信，他的住址是：28 Carr Lane, Acomb York, Yo 25HU, U. K.?，F(xiàn)在你給他寫(xiě)封回信，信中祝賀他在大學(xué) 入學(xué)（matriculation）考試中獲得好成績(jī)，你確信他能考入他所喜歡的重點(diǎn)大學(xué) ，他一直想當(dāng)一名外科醫(yī)生（surgeon），所以你認(rèn)為他應(yīng)該學(xué)醫(yī)。最后你告訴他，因?yàn)槊髂昴慵磳⒏咧?畢業(yè)，從現(xiàn)在起必須充分利用時(shí)間做好考試的準(zhǔn)備，力爭(zhēng)在來(lái)年的考試中能像他一樣取得好成績(jī)，考入理想的（ideal）大學(xué)——北京清華大學(xué)。
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①只須用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)上述內(nèi)容，不必逐句翻譯。全篇詞數(shù)：150—180。
②信中不要使用自己的真實(shí)姓名和地址。
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【作文示范】
Congratulations on Tom＇s Success
148 Xisi Street
Beijing
P. R. C.
June 18, 1990
Mr. Tom Brown
28 Carr Lane
Acomb York
Yo 25HU
U. K.
Dear Tom Brown,
I have just received your letter. I am really glad to hear that you have done so brilliantly in the Matriculation① Examination. Congratulations! With such excellent results you will be able to get into any leading university you like, I am sure. And I suppose you should study Medicine since it has been your dream to become a surgeon all these years.
Next year I shall finish my middle school and I want very much to enter my ideal university, Qinghua University. So from now on I have to make full use of my time to get well prepared for the next year＇s Matriculation Examination. I shall try my best to do as well as you have done in your Matriculation Examination this year. Please say hello to your family.
Yours sincerely,
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Gao Feng
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
matriculation [m+?trkju＇leiM+n] n． （大學(xué)的）入學(xué)考試
【寫(xiě)法指要】
這是一封較為正式的祝賀信。祝賀信（letters of congratulation）是得到親友、同事、同學(xué)通過(guò)考試、榮獲晉升、獲得學(xué)位、結(jié)婚、喜得貴子等好消息時(shí)寫(xiě)的信。這種信要寫(xiě)得及時(shí)、真誠(chéng)、自然、親切動(dòng)人。祝賀信一般不宜寫(xiě)得過(guò)長(zhǎng)。
祝賀信常用的語(yǔ)句有：
①Congratulations on your success /achievements!
②I＇m so glad to hear of your winning the prize in the … contest. Congratulations!
③Please accept my heartiest congratulations on your graduation from….
④Heartiest congratulations upon your graduation. May your future be as successful as your middle-school days have been.
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⑤A word of congratulation just doesn＇t seem enough, so I am sending you a gift that I am sure you will find useful.
