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56. A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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參考分析：
選擇哪一個都可以。只要列舉出兩三個sound reasons。并且要在作文中提及另外一個選擇的好處，以顯示“考慮周全”。需要考慮的至少有兩點(diǎn)：
企業(yè)花錢，當(dāng)然要考慮input-output ratio。投入哪一個活動中，公眾效應(yīng)更加明顯？社會作為受體，哪一個活動將對社會有更多的實(shí)際好處？
56、將錢投入在保護(hù)環(huán)境上
（1）保護(hù)環(huán)境，有利于人民的健康
（2）保護(hù)環(huán)境，能夠更好地促進(jìn)商業(yè)發(fā)展。
（3）公司將錢投入到環(huán)境上，能夠提高自己的名聲，更好的獲得利益
Topic 56 Arts or environment?
Frankly speaking, both arts and environment are important to human being. However, if I were the CEO of a company, I would rather give the money to protect the environment than to support the arts. Because environment protection is quite urgent and matters the future of our globe, while arts is a continuous process to improve the quality of life.
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First of all, environment protection is very urgent. Global warming is becoming more and more serious. Many spices are dying, the ice in South Pole is melting, and many rivers are being contaminated. Now it is time for us to do something to save our earth and our own future.
Secondly, environment protection is very important for all, including human being, plants, animals and the Earth. When I was a little boy, I often played in the river that is located beside my village. The water was so clean that we could just drink it directly. There were also many kinds of fishes in the river. It was such a beautiful place that I often played for a whole day. Now things are totally different, the water became brown in color due to pollution from factories, very few fishes can live there. Those small children can never enjoy the fun that I once did.
Thirdly, the art is a continuous process to improve the quality of life, which is not as urgent as environment protection. In addition, there are many ways by which funds can be raised for arts, such as exhibitions and auctions of artistic works. Environment protection needs money more urgently than arts do. 易優(yōu)作文網(wǎng)，中小學(xué)學(xué)生學(xué)作文的好網(wǎng)站（http://www.zequeka.cn）。
Although both arts and the environment are important, I prefer to give the money to support environment protection, due to the three reasons mentioned above.
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