托福 獨立寫作題目：
The government should support artists or should artists support themselves.
Introduction:
First of all, financial support to artists would enable current artists to contribute more to our society.
主題句：
擴展支持藝術(shù)利一：有利于藝術(shù)繁榮。
It is not uncommon in history that great artists were barricaded by financial problems or even gave up their callings eventually due to their pennilessness like Van Gogh and great Chinese painter Baishi Qi. Since artistic creation is a tedious and long-term process without tangible rewards, most artists might find it hard to afford their own living.
背景信息：
為什么作者會提出此分論點？歷史上很多偉大的藝術(shù)家都因窮困放棄藝術(shù)。
If governments, at this point, assumed the responsibility to support artists, these talented and creative people would no doubt accomplish more truly innovative artistic works. After all, in order to devote their heart and soul to the pursuit of their real interest, people should first have the ability to support their basic necessities of life.
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解釋主題句：
寫完背景，引入段落最重要的環(huán)節(jié)—解釋主題句：政府若能資助藝術(shù)家，他們就能創(chuàng)造出更多偉大的藝術(shù)作品。畢竟，溫飽是追求理想的前提。
The United States movie industry is a great case in point. Due to the effective financial support given by the U.S. government, movie industry in this country is booming. Based on the subsidy offered by governments, filmmakers here are free and bold to explore every possibility. They can just let their wild imagination surge and their creative ideas spark. So, there is no wonder that people around the globe are willing to go to movie to appreciate the great and inspired films made by these innovative movie directors.
舉例論證：
作者用美國政府對于電影業(yè)的支持細(xì)化前方邏輯鏈：What kinds of specific support do governments give to artist?à How flourishing is art?
Body paragraph 2
Combining the two advantages mentioned in the passage above, supporting art can not only encourage artists to be more committed to their cause, but also benefit the nation as a whole. Thus, it is wise for governments to support art development.
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重述觀點：
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