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（1）在體育上很成功。獲得了很多奧運會金牌。
（2）在商業(yè)上很成功
（3）在業(yè)余和家庭生活中也很成功
Topic 90 What famous athlete would you like to meet?
If I have the opportunity to meet a famous entertainer or athlete, I would like tomeet Michael Jordan.
Jordan was neither tall nor strong in his childhood, but he never gave up playing basketball. He has huge success today as a legendary guy in the basketball history, and is a god for all the basketball fans all around the world. I think the reason of his success is because his diligence, courage and his strong inner desire to win. All theseare what I admire most of him.
Jordan won six championships of NBA. That was theheydays of Jordan.Six rings! That is every NBA player's dream. Someone spent many years in orderto get a ring but failed, like Carl Malone, and King Baylor.Jordangot six!His last ring was won by his exciting shoot, which was once considered the lastand perfect moment in his life and a best end for his history of playing basketball.
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Jordan's name was linked with "perfect" when people mentioned Jordan.A great deal of courage is needed for one to break off the word "perfect" which he used years to establish, but Jordan did it. He came back again, not as a god, but as a common basketball player. He was no longer young and could not act has what he did when his young. There are even some fans that opposed him to come back; they did not want to see their god beatenby the youth. In the opposite,Jordandid quite well, though not as good as before, but better than what we allimagined. He, a nearly forty-year-old man with two in jured knees, led Wizardsget much better marks than it did last year. He could still sometimes score more than forty points. What support him is the steadfast belief he had and the strong love of basketball. This gave him the unbelievable strength.
If I saw him, I wanted to ask him how he managed to gain the desire and where does thislove come from, maybe Jordan would just give me a smile and say, "I love this game!"
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