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每天的寫作任務(wù)是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發(fā)至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請(qǐng)注明），我們將進(jìn)入互批作文模式。在此我對(duì)每天的topic進(jìn)行解析和范文精講，請(qǐng)大家寫完作文之后不忘進(jìn)行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！
80. Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice, using specific reasons and examples.
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參考分析：
隨便找一個(gè)。比如外國人來到中國，最好習(xí)慣一件事情，付賬的時(shí)候不要go Dutch，很討厭。
80、在春天的時(shí)候和朋友一起到郊區(qū)種樹
（1）保護(hù)環(huán)境
（2）對(duì)自己的健康有利
（3）和朋友在一起，增進(jìn)友誼
Topic 80 Describe a custom from your country
Who took care of you before you are eligible to go to the daycare? That grandparents taking care of their baby grandchildren is a tradition in my country. I would like people from other countries to adopt this tradition.
At first thought, this tradition seems to be unimaginable to people who are accustomed to the "parents-children breeding" model. However, did you notice that swarm of young mothers are roaming in the department stores with their babies during working hours? Young ladies quit their jobs and sacrifice their careers to look after their offspring. How many women can really keep up with their professional work after several years' absence from their positions in such a fast pace society? A babysitter may help you, but do they really care your baby as his grandma does? The answer is No. Grandparents ensure the love, care, health and education of your kids.
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On the other hand, senior citizens gain more happiness through this day to day caring of their young grandchildren. Old people are sad about the aging and loss of work. When they spend their time with young kids, when the fun and loveliness filled in their soul, all unhappiness disappears. The moments they spent together with the babies are so sweet they can improve seniors' mental and physical health.
It is undeniable that the relationships of different generations will be tightened. Needless to say, kids will be tied with their grandparents in this process. I was brought up by my grandparents who are in their nineties now. I still call them quite often and buy gifts for them. I feel the strong connection among us.
From above analysis, I highly recommend our custom of grandparents give their hand to cultivate future generation.
好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅(jiān)持練習(xí)作文，每天進(jìn)步一小點(diǎn)，一個(gè)月下來托福寫作絕對(duì)是質(zhì)的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時(shí)候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
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