托福 寫作避免生搬硬套，要把學(xué)到的句式和詞組靈活運用到自己的寫作當中去!這樣，寫作的分數(shù)自然也就提高啦!
增加過渡段：
A1 好。。。
A1 好，而且 A2 好。(這個“而且”，可以用科技發(fā)展啊技術(shù)進步啊之類的擴充)
A2 好。。。
14 條萬能理由：
與事物有關(guān)：效率、方便、經(jīng)濟、耐久、安全、空間。
與人有關(guān)：健康、樂趣、成就、性格、情感、交流、經(jīng)驗、他人。
理由的安排也要有邏輯順序—首段要雕琢，要表現(xiàn)!
1、排比反問：
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If you have never had such experiences, you would never know how much fun outdoor activities could bring you.
2、背景知識式：
With the development of science and technology, more and more companies (including international companies and small companies) are founded, but there are not enough people to
take these positions. So a large number of working opportunities are provided to people who are still teenager students.
In some countries, some people think if teenagers do a job while they are still studying in school, it may have a bad impact on their grade. Others consider that teenagers
should have jobs while they are still students. As far as Iam concerned, I agree with the latter.
Because teenagers can learn amount of useful experience through working and they think through the job they will acquire some knowledge of how to get a good relationship with others.
3、定義式：
Technology refers to skills, knowledge, and techniques thathuman beings use in their daily life and work. As everybodymay find, technology develops day by day. How does the development of technology affect our life? 作文網(wǎng)推薦，<a http://www.zequeka.cn>易優(yōu)作文網(wǎng)</a>，中小學(xué)生學(xué)語文閱讀寫作的好幫手
Many people hold the opinion that it is due to the development of technology that human beings have access to the comfortable modern life. On the other hand, a number of people are always aware ofall kinds of destructive influence of the technological development on us. As far as I am concerned, the development of technology does far more good than harm to people”s happiness.
正文部分每段安排：
1~3 行 主題句
4~8 行 細節(jié)論述
1~2 行 主題再現(xiàn)
主題句的要求：
1、要有概括性：
Eg -. When I work in daytime, other people are also working, so I can work more efficiently.
Eg +. Outside environment during daytime helps to promote efficiency in many ways.
解說： TS 一定要概括， 不要寫成反例那樣那么細節(jié)， 不然后面的話不好展開了。
2、避免絕對化：
Eg -. Elder people are efficient.
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Eg +. Compared with many un-experienced young people, most experienced elders can work more efficiently.
解說：正例表述得體，尺度很好，有限定成分“most”，有對比說法“compared with”等。
3、避免語法和用詞錯誤。
細節(jié)論述部分：
1、個人事例推廣到一般：(圖書館有錢該買書還是買電腦)
During the last semester, all the twenty students of my class are required to resort to the British Encyclopedia to complete our final paper.
However, there was only one set in the whole library because it takes a whole shelf to hold and is too expensive to purchase more than one set. Ever since the university bought in the CD version of the British Encyclopedia, we are free to refer to the same article at the same time through different terminals.
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2、反例：(still 圖書館)
Paper books in the library circulate very fast. Frequently we find a good book lose its good shape within 3 months. Those seldom-borrowed books are not safe at all, in danger ofnatural erosion and worm bites.
解說：不好說電腦好存放的時候，就說書不好存放。
舉反例要適可而止，不能指望全篇用反例來支撐自己的觀點。
3、具體數(shù)據(jù)和引用權(quán)威：
想得4分以上必須注意， 因為4分要求說服力，5分要求appropriateexamples。
Eg.My hometown used to have one million acres of forests. The town people are shortsighted as to sell trees for $10 per piece. Trees are sold at a rate of approximately 100 thousand pieces per year, according to the data from the government.
Professor Selephant from Peking University, one of the bestuniversities in Environmental Engineering, once said, the tress in my hometown will disappear within 10 years at thisspeed of lumbering.
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倒數(shù)第二段讓步：
Eg.Admittedly, books do have certain advantages over computers. They are easier to carry with, lower in unit price, and more energy efficient given that computers are driven by electrical power.
However, computers have more valuable merits as an efficient, durable, manageable means for libraries of the new century. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose computers as my final choice for the investment.
解說：讓步之后一定記得重申 anyway 我還是堅持 XXX 觀點
