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The world is enveloped in moonlight. A poetic feeling arises and softness pervades the atmosphere. At this time, a breeze of ten accompanies the silvery light of the moon and gives the world a peculiar appearance and the people a peculiar feeling. The air is suffused with a sweet scent, driving away the ugliness and squal or of the daytime, soothing the distressed and wretched souls. If
you sing a song, your voice will reach the clouds. If you read a poem, it will echo in the mountains and valleys far away. If you hum a lullaby, its rhythm will send the whole sleepless city to dreams.
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本文描寫了月光下的都市沉浸在一片安寧與恬靜中。不再有眩目的陽光，一陣清風(fēng)伴隨著銀色的月光，空氣中彌漫著絲絲芳香。月光驅(qū)散了白天的一切丑陋和骯臟，撫慰著痛苦和不幸的人們。最后三個句子結(jié)構(gòu)并列，意義遞進(jìn)，以唱歌或吟詩作比，表現(xiàn)出月夜的寧靜。 易優(yōu)作文投稿、作文評價系統(tǒng)，http://www.zequeka.cn/jiaoshoulanmu/
本文側(cè)重于對感覺的描寫，包括具體的和抽象的，充滿了想像力。讀來像一首優(yōu)美的詩歌，在寫景的同時表達(dá)了作者對社會現(xiàn)實的思考，對安寧生活的向往。
(點評教師：黃鶯)
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