新聞通訊:漢堡學(xué)生代表團訪問我校
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①3月底的一天早晨，學(xué)校呈現(xiàn)出迎賓的氣氛。
②大約8點鐘，一輛新式汽車緩緩開進校園。訪問團成員走下車，人們在歡迎他們。
③參觀團由校長陪同走進接待室。校長致了簡短歡迎詞并介紹了學(xué)校情況。
④參觀團參觀校園和設(shè)備，他們對高級設(shè)備感到驚奇。
⑤參觀團聽了兩節(jié)課，一節(jié)是初中 英語課，一節(jié)是德語課。
⑥德國客人在學(xué)校吃午飯，贊揚中國菜肴。
⑦最后一項是自由交談。
【作文示范】
A Hamburg Students Delegation Visited Our Middle School
It was a morning in the end of March. The fountain was spraying① water about 2 metres high. The coloured flags were waving in the wind. A blackboard was put at the gate of the school. On it were large Chinese characters and German, saying:“Welcome to Our School!” The whole school was set for a gala②.
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It was about 8 o＇clock. A modern bus slowly came into the gate and stood in the middle of the drive. Warm applause broke out. The members of the delegation got off one by one. We shook each other＇s hands.
Accompanied by the school master, they entered the reception room③. A simple and short meeting of welcome was held. The school master delivered a brief speech. He also made an introduction to the school to them and, after that, showed them around the school. They were greatly surprised at the superior equipment in our school, like the computer room, the electronic educational room and audio④ room.
They were eager to know how the class was conducted here and so attended a junior English class. In class the teacher and the students cooperated well. No language but English was used. They were amazed to find that our students had such a good command of English. They also attended a German class. It is the second foreign language taught in our school.
We treated the German visitors to lunch. It was very funny that they all wanted to use chopsticks, which they were not accustomed to, but they appreciated⑤ Chinese dishes very much just the same. While we were eating, some performances were put on. Singing and laughing mixed together. 作文批改系統(tǒng)，易優(yōu)作文批改、作文點評、作文打分系統(tǒng)，<a href=http://www.zequeka.cn/jiaoshoulanmu/>易優(yōu)作文批改</A>
The last item was free talk. Though language is an obstacle⑥ to communication, it did not matter. If we were not able to express our idea in language, we, used gestures. The exchange made us realize how important it is to master a foreign language! Language can strengthen the friendship among the people all over the world.
【詞語解釋】
①spray [sprei] v. 噴；（如浪花般）濺散
②gala [＇ga:l+; ＇geil+] n. 節(jié)日；慶祝；盛會
③reception[ri＇sepM+n] room 接待室，會客室
④ audio [＇&:di+u] a. 聽覺的；聲音的；聽力的
⑤ appreciate [+＇pri:Mieit] v. 欣賞，賞識
⑥ obstacle[＇&bst+kl] n. 障礙；妨礙
【寫法指要】
這是一篇新聞通訊，它比一般消息更詳細。新聞通訊分兩大類：一是人物 通訊，二是事件 通訊。本文屬于事件 通訊，形象地報道了德國學(xué)生代表團參觀訪問的情況。事件通訊象平鋪直敘的記敘文一樣，按照時間順序安排內(nèi)容，把事件經(jīng)過從頭至尾寫完整。不同的是，事件通訊一般在文章開頭要創(chuàng)造一種事件發(fā)生時的氣氛，把讀者一下子就帶入那種氛圍之中，引起讀者的閱讀興趣
