1.(??碱}:并列)Nurses and anesthesiologists are both essential in the operating room,and the anesthesiologists would keep the patient sedated while the nurses would assist and support the surgeon.
the anesthesiologists to keep the patient sedated and the nurses to assist and support
點評:anesthesiologists和nurses為并列關系,所以用“…to… and…to…”避免run-on。記住這種形式,考得比較多,大家做題時多注意類似題目
2.The sausage served at the end of the meal was more flavorful than any of the other pastas I had tasted;probably because it was roasted in its own juices.
was more flavorful than any of the pastas I had tasted,probably because
點評:pastas不是sausage,故談到pastas用“any of pastas”不用“any other”。由于后半句談原因,所以和前面是有聯(lián)系的,中間用逗號。
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When a bacterial culture is handled in an environment that is not appropriately sterilized,new organisms can be introduced,ruining
點評:對這個題我比較無語。。。。。。
4.The hawks” nest,wedged into an apartment building”s facade,was a rather unique sight in Chicago;they became such an attraction that several book were written about them and tourists came from all over the country to see them.
the hawks,after several books were written about them,became such an attraction that
由于最后代詞是“them”,可見所指為復數(shù)名詞。而第一句主語為nest, 所以可見第二局主語不是網(wǎng)而是鷹。故正確答案不用代詞為主語,而是將“they”指明,換成“hawks”
5.(??碱}:并列)The major complaints professors have about teaching is that they have challenging research to complete and must also work hard to hold student interest.
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點評:主謂一致性要保持,同時使用并列結構。
6.Having achieved fame, widespread acclaim,as well as continued relevance,DS is considered to be a classic American movie.
Having achieved fame,widespread acclaim,and continued relevance
點評:用動名詞“Having”沒錯。但能用and就不用as well as(這似乎又是一條規(guī)律),and前有無逗號無所謂。
7.For as many as 9 months or more,Thad Carthart lived in Paris.
For more than 9 months
點評:不說了,簡潔為上!九個月或九個月以上就是“九個月以上”
8.Many home owners in the northern states use a window sealant,for it will prevent heat loss in the winter.
that will prevent
點評:談原因,從句有時候更簡潔。
9.The runners coming this far,they decided to push through the very strenuous final mile of the marathon.
Having come this far,the runners
點評:記住這個句式,Having done sth,XX…不是說它有知識上的意義(大家肯定早就知道了),只是說它正確的頻率相當高。同時原句沒有轉(zhuǎn)折語氣就不要用轉(zhuǎn)折詞