寫作題目：
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Throughout the history, people dream to build a perfect society while they haven't agreed how the ideal society would be like.
What is the most important element for a perfect society? What can people do to achieve an ideal
題目講解：
分段解析：
1. Introduction
1）背景信息：Various social problems have emerged together with the social development.
2）引出話題：With the wish to prevent the society from developing in the wrong path, people have never stopped discussing about what the destination of social development should be.
2.回答第一個問題：什么是構成理想社會的最重要因素
a.提出前人觀點
關鍵詞句推薦：A Utopian society has been believed to be what human beings should seek for. Without anything called the private property, people living in the Utopia are free from crimes, wars, starvation and oppression.
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b.提出自己觀點：理想社會應該是一個人人都有平等機會的社會。
關鍵詞句推薦：However, in my personal opinion, people do not really need a society where they have nothing to fight for. Instead, the perfect society should offer everybody equal opportunities to make them what they are born to be.
3.回答第二個問題：如何建成理想社會
a. 合理的競爭制度
關鍵詞句推薦：In order build an ideal society, proper competition system would be required. Such a system will make sure that the winners are only the most talented ones, instead of those with special background.
b. 一個為所有人服務的政府
關鍵詞句推薦：For the sake of the effective operation of such a system, a fair and service-oriented government is essential. Such a government will make sure that all its policies benefit everybody in the society.
4. Conclusion
重申觀點：In conclusion, an ideal society should offer freedom and equal rights to all its members
