There are many characteristic exist in the world, and characteristic is very important to people. For example, active, persistence, optimistic makes people successful; lazy, passive makes people fail. Having a good characteristic means you have the key to the successful door, but you have to find the way of success. This is what I am going to talk about, the key to success: persistence.
世界上有許多種性格，性格對(duì)人們來(lái)說(shuō)是很重要的。比如，積極，有毅力，樂(lè)觀能讓人成功；懶惰，消極讓人失敗。有個(gè)好的個(gè)性意味著你有了通向成功之門的鑰匙，但你需要尋找成功之路。這就是我要說(shuō)的，成功的鑰匙：毅力。
Persistence is a key to success, whether for a single person or an organization. People who lack of it would mean failure in reaching a certain goal. People need to know that success seldom comes easily on the first try; they should have the patient to insist trying until they get the goal. Unsuccessful people try something just a few times, and when it fails, they give up; they usually pass the blame onto someone or something, and learn nothing from their experience. Successful people are different, even they fail, and they won”t lose their passion. 易優(yōu)作文網(wǎng)名師改作文（http://www.zequeka.cn/jiaoshoulanmu/ ）
毅力是成功的關(guān)鍵，無(wú)論是對(duì)個(gè)人還是群體來(lái)說(shuō)。缺少這個(gè)的人意味著沒(méi)有特定的目標(biāo)。人們要知道成功在一開始不是那么容易的，他們應(yīng)該耐心地堅(jiān)持嘗試直到成功為止。失敗的人只會(huì)嘗試幾次，然后一失敗，他們就會(huì)放棄，他們通常都會(huì)把這個(gè)歸根于其他人或其他事。成功人士就不會(huì)這樣，就算他們失敗了，也不會(huì)失去熱情。
Let me take a famous person to example. His name is Da Vinci, he is known as a great painter, artist. Everyone knows him, but I think there are not much people known that how much effort did he made before he became a famous artist. Da Vinci draw eggs everyday when he was young, hundreds and thousands times a day. It is definite a boring work, many people could not bear to face an egg and draw it in different angle thousands times. But Da Vinci did it, and he made it. We could say it is not for his persistence that he would not get the great aptitude for painting. 在線作文批改系統(tǒng)，<a href=http://www.zequeka.cn/jiaoshoulanmu/>易優(yōu)名師作文批改</A>
我用個(gè)名人來(lái)打比方。他的名字叫達(dá)芬奇，是位偉大的畫家，藝術(shù)家。每個(gè)人都知道他，但是我想不是很多人知道他在成名之前付出過(guò)多大的努力。達(dá)芬奇小時(shí)候每天都畫雞蛋，一天成百上千地畫。這無(wú)疑是非常無(wú)聊的，許多人都無(wú)法忍受一天要對(duì)著一個(gè)雞蛋畫不同的角度上千次。但是達(dá)芬奇做到了，也成功了。我們可以說(shuō)要不是他持之以恒，他就沒(méi)有那么厲害的繪畫天資。
Talent is a gift from god, persistence is a key you”ve got, and effort makes those working which bring you to open the door of success.
天賦是上帝賜予的禮物，毅力是你已得到的鑰匙，只要努力，你就會(huì)開啟成功之門
