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78. Is it more important to be able to work with a group ofpeople on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples tosupport your answer.
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參考分析：
兩種能力都重要。分別陳述兩種能力的重要性。針對(duì)不同的人，不同的工作環(huán)境，才會(huì)有孰重孰輕之分。
78、和一個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì)工作更好
（1）節(jié)省很多時(shí)間
（2）團(tuán)隊(duì)精神
（3）學(xué)習(xí)別人的思維方式
Topic 78 Teamwork vs. working independently
Some people like to work independently, while others would prefer to work in a team.Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people in a team or to work independently? Depending on different personal traits and working environments,people will have different answer to this question. I think being able to workin a team is more important for me.
First,the modern society and industry is a complicated system that requires teamwork,communication and cooperation among companies and individuals. Take a computer system for example, it comprises of hardware, operating system and software, which are manufactured separately by different companies. Not one single company can accomplish a computer system without using products and technologies from other companies. Similarly, in a company, communication and teamwork is more and moreimportant among workers because a worker cannot do his/her work properly without interacting with his supervisor and colleagues. 作文培訓(xùn)網(wǎng)站推薦，<a http://www.zequeka.cn>易優(yōu)作文網(wǎng)</a>。
Second,there are many advantages of working in a group than working alone. Teamwork provides a worker with a cooperative, friendly and enjoyable work environment. Thet eam can also be helpful in responding to a worker's questions and problems,therefore increase the work efficiency. Teamwork can also challenge a worker's abilities and he/she can acquire valuable experiences from it.
Third,the ability of working independently does not contradict with the ability towork in a team. For example, in a team environment, I enjoyed being a major contributor to my team. The fact that others depended on my work made me feellike I was doing worthwhile things. For example, I was in charge of the frontend for the GUI. This was very valuable experience, because I know how important it is to work in a team.
Inclusion,I think the most important quality in a work environment is the ability to work with others in a team.
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