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我的童年
【內(nèi)容提示】
寫一篇英語(yǔ)文章，敘述自己快樂(lè)的童年。內(nèi)容包括下列幾點(diǎn)：
①我的童年無(wú)憂無(wú)慮。
②父母從未強(qiáng)迫我做過(guò)什么。
③我背誦了許多詩(shī)文，因?yàn)槲蚁矚g它們。
④我完成作業(yè)后就去和小朋友們玩耍，有時(shí)玩一個(gè)下午。
⑤我的童年很單調(diào)，但是卻很快樂(lè)。
【作文示范】
My Childhood
There is only one word which can describe my childhood. The word is“carefree①”that so many today's kids② do not understand, although they have delicious food, beautiful clothes and pretty toys.
My parents never forced me to do anything. I recited a lot of poems and fine articles, but not for performing before their friends and our relatives, just because I enjoyed rhythms③ and words. So I never considered them a burden④. Later, when I was in the primary school, the homework was very few and easy to do, and I was never asked to be the top students.
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Nor did my parents stop me from doing anything. After I finished my homework, I could stay outside for a whole afternoon to do whatever I liked. I used to go swimming in the river in summer, skating on the ice in winter. Sometimes I played basketball or football with my little friends. I could read any book, and my parents never examine it before my reading.
Sometimes I think my childhood was boring⑤and not unforgettable, but I was really carefree and happy then. What is more important than to give a child a happy childhood?
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
①carefree['ke fri:]a．無(wú)憂無(wú)慮的
②kid[kid] n．（俚語(yǔ)）小孩；兒童；少年
③rhythm['riJ m]n．節(jié)奏；節(jié)奏的格調(diào)
④burden['b :dn] n．負(fù)擔(dān)；負(fù)重
⑤boring['b&:riR]a．令人厭煩的；單調(diào)
【寫法指要】
本文描寫的是作者童年時(shí)代的情況。引言段提出篇題（thesis）“carefree”。第二、三段是擴(kuò)充段，分別寫了兩個(gè)主題（topic）。第二段圍繞主題句（topic sentence）“My parents never forced me to do anything.”寫父母不強(qiáng)迫自已干任何事情，第三段圍繞主題句“Nor did my parents stop me from doing anything.”寫父母也不阻止自已干任何事情。這樣，作者從正反兩方面說(shuō)明自己的童年是無(wú)憂無(wú)慮的這一篇題。在結(jié)尾段里作者對(duì)全文作了總結(jié)：盡管自己的童年生活比較單調(diào)，也沒(méi)有什么難以忘懷的東西，但卻過(guò)得確實(shí)快活。最后，作者還發(fā)出了感慨：What is more important than to give a child a happy childhood? （什么能比給孩子一個(gè)快樂(lè)的童年更重要的呢？）
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