雅思 寫作科技類話題，尤其是和孩子成長(zhǎng)教育相掛鉤的話題每年都會(huì)考到，一直是重點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備的話題。2016年全年一共考了6次科技類話題和8次教育類話題，而2016年雅思 考試的總場(chǎng)數(shù)是48次，所以大家自己可以算一下科技類和教育類話題加在一起14次所占的比重，就會(huì)知道我們到底要多專注這兩類話題。
題目：
some people think that playing computer games only have negative effects on children, while others believe that it may also have positive influence on children's development.discuss both views and give your own opinion.
范文結(jié)構(gòu)解析
第一段：先陳述電腦游戲越來越受歡迎這一現(xiàn)象，然后明確表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)“打電玩的好處是不可以忽略的?！?
第二段：詳細(xì)闡述玩電腦游戲的好處之一：刺激大腦的開發(fā)。
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第三段：詳細(xì)闡述玩電腦游戲的好處之二：就業(yè)的時(shí)候可以選擇游戲制作等相關(guān)行業(yè)。如“微微一笑很傾城”里的肖奈大神，你們懂的。
第四段：詳細(xì)闡述玩電腦游戲的好處之三：游戲里設(shè)計(jì)的一些互動(dòng)也可以使內(nèi)向的青少年變得善談。
第五段：簡(jiǎn)要提出反方觀點(diǎn)：打游戲?qū)σ暳Σ缓?，并且耗時(shí)較多。
第六段：結(jié)尾段，再次用新穎的語(yǔ)言明確闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并針對(duì)打游戲的問題扼要提出解決方案，結(jié)尾段升華了。
原版范文
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Various computer games have gained tremendous popularity among children nowadays. Although the negative impacts on children are generally acknowledged, the blessings of playing computer games are just too obvious to be ignored. 中小學(xué)生學(xué)語(yǔ)文閱讀寫作的好幫手，優(yōu)秀作文網(wǎng)推薦，<A http://www.zequeka.cn>易優(yōu)作文網(wǎng)</a>。
An advantage is that this practice can trigger the healthy activities in their brains. As games require abilities such as decision-making, problem-solving and rational planning, to mention but a few, a circumstance is that some of these mental abilities can be consciously and effectively cultivated in the games instead of in class.
Another point that should be noticed is that the industry of online games has become so prosperous that numerous jobs emerged related to the game production. A growing number of game players are devoting themselves to the profession of game industry. Some of them even become millionaires such as the CEO of Evochron Alliance. Only those who perform well in certain sophisticated games can stand better chances in hunting a satisfactory job relevant with online games in this severely-competing employment market.
In addition, lack of personal skills is one of the most serious defects that we have ever known about today's students. Some computer games have already allowed the players to communicate and interact with each other in the community designed in the game. One benefit is that children who originally dared not to socialize with strangers are already willing to and able to have social intercourse with others. Thus, it is not surprising that they become more extroverted and conversable.
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However, under no circumstances can we ignore the downsides of playing computer games. It is undoubtedly detrimental to the children's eye-sight if they sit in front of the screen for a long time and it is so time-consuming as they are eager to upgrade their levels that parents and teachers will without a doubt complain about the time wasted on the games.
In conclusion, although we should not slacken our vigilance against the drawbacks of playing computer games, the positive functions of it should also be sufficiently recognized. It would thus behoove parents and teachers to shoulder their responsibilities to cultivate the children's time management skill, making them able to keep a balance between game and life.
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Various computer games have gained tremendous popularity(獲得巨大的流行度，常用短語(yǔ)，代替sth has become more and more popular這種俗的有傷風(fēng)化的短語(yǔ)) among children nowadays. Although the negative impacts on children are generally acknowledged, the blessings (可代替advantages)of playing computer games are just too obvious to be ignored(寫作常用觀點(diǎn)句). 作文培訓(xùn)網(wǎng)站推薦，<a http://www.zequeka.cn>易優(yōu)作文網(wǎng)</a>。
An advantage is that this practice can(寫作常用結(jié)構(gòu)句) trigger the healthy activities in their brains(電腦相關(guān)話題常用的觀點(diǎn)---刺激大腦的健康活動(dòng)). As games require abilities such as decision-making, problem-solving and rational planning(觀點(diǎn)延深的辦法之一——并列舉例), to mention but a few, (常用插入語(yǔ))a circumstance is that some of these mental abilities can be consciously and effectively(多用副詞可加分) cultivated (培養(yǎng)——寫作必備單詞)in the games instead of in class.
Another point that should be noticed is that(寫作常用結(jié)構(gòu)句)the industry of online games(談到電玩我們必須要談?wù)劕F(xiàn)在特別火的游戲產(chǎn)業(yè)) has become so prosperous that numerous jobs emerged related to the game production. A growing number of game players are devoting themselves to(獻(xiàn)身于) the profession of game industry. Some of them even become millionaires such as the CEO of Evochron Alliance. Only those who perform well in certain sophisticated games can stand better chances in hunting(這個(gè)短語(yǔ)要學(xué)會(huì)用——更有機(jī)會(huì)做某事) a satisfactory job relevant with online games in this severely-competing employment market.
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In addition, lack of personal skills is one of the most serious defects(缺陷) that we have ever known(多用完成時(shí)可加分) about today's students. Some computer games have already allowed the players to communicate and interact with (互動(dòng))each other in the community designed in the game. One benefit is that children who originally dared not to socialize with (社交)strangers are already willing to and able to(這種并列結(jié)構(gòu)可以學(xué)著用) have social intercourse with(把動(dòng)詞名詞化使用) others. Thus, it is not surprising that(寫作常用過渡句)they become more extroverted and conversable(外向和健談).
However, under no circumstances can we ignore the downsides of(用倒裝來表達(dá)的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)句) playing computer games. It is undoubtedly detrimental(加分副詞和形容詞放在一起了) to the children's eye-sight if they sit in front of the screen for a long time and it is so time-consuming(耗時(shí)的) as they are eager to upgrade their levels that parents and teachers will without a doubt(插入語(yǔ)要用得自然) complain about the time wasted on the games.
In conclusion, although we should not slacken our vigilance against the drawbacks of(大作文高分級(jí)別結(jié)構(gòu)句---盡管我們不能削弱對(duì)什么什么東西的警覺性) playing computer games,the positive functions of it should also be sufficiently recognized(高分結(jié)構(gòu)句). It would thus behoove(外教喜歡用這個(gè)詞表示某人應(yīng)該做某事) parents and teachers to shoulder their responsibilities to cultivate the children's time management skill, making them able to keep a balance between game and life(提出問題的解決方案，結(jié)尾段升華了親們！).
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