親人之情:我的奶奶-My Granny英語(yǔ)作文 網(wǎng)為您收集 作文網(wǎng) 345543.com
我的奶奶
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你的奶奶最愛(ài)你，你也最愛(ài)你的奶奶。而且，你奶奶是一位心地善良的人，因而受到人們的愛(ài)戴。但是，她病了，病得很重，必須做手術(shù)。醫(yī)生怕她年老體弱頂不住，但她很堅(jiān)強(qiáng)，堅(jiān)持做了手術(shù)。你每天到醫(yī)院去服侍她，看著她一天天消瘦很是心疼。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇文章表達(dá)你的一份感情。
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My Granny
The one I love best is my granny. The one who loves me best is also my granny . She is so kind that everyone who knows her likes her very much. But I'm sorry to say that my dear granny got cancer.
It was a cold day, but my heart was even colder. I could not accept the fact that my granny got cancer. Facts are facts. Only an operation could help her. The doctor told us she was too weak to be operated on, but my granny insisted that she could stand it. So the doctors did the operation. After the operation, my granny could not sleep, or eat, or say a word because of the pain .
Every one of my family felt sad. My granny noticed this, so she tried her best to nod and smile to us . We smiled back. Every day, my granny said she felt better but actually the pain was still there. Once, she said to me, “Yangyang, my dear. I'll be all right.”
My granny was growing thinner and thinner, but she was still smiling. The smile gave us hope.
The other day , I went to the hospital to see my granny . She said , “Spring is coming. Though I'm in hospital, I can feel the warmth. Yangyang I think I'll go home soon.”
How I hope she would be home soon!
（選自《英語(yǔ)畫(huà)刊》高中 版1996年第2－3合期）
【寫(xiě)法指要】
本文雖用語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)單，但寫(xiě)得娓娓動(dòng)聽(tīng)，字里行間透露出對(duì)親人的真情實(shí)感。這是因?yàn)樽髡哂昧艘恍┬揶o句法的緣故。例如，開(kāi)頭兩句用的是回文（chiasmus）辭格；第二段和第四段第一句用的是層遞（climax）辭格；第四段第一句后半部分用的是蟬聯(lián)（anadiplosis）辭格等。
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