中考英語作文指導(dǎo)：社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)作文之課外實(shí)踐英語作文
（一）
為豐富初三學(xué)生課余生活，上周末你校組織了一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹此次活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勛约旱母邢?。
活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：
1．上午游覽人民公園：欣賞美景、歌舞聯(lián)歡、拍照留念；
2．下午參觀市民廣場(chǎng)：觀看圖片展，了解祖國(guó)和家鄉(xiāng)70年巨變。
你的感想：
1．師生情深，感謝老師和同學(xué)的幫助；
2．倍受鼓舞，決心勤奮學(xué)習(xí)報(bào)效祖國(guó)；
3. ……（考生自己發(fā)揮）
要求：
1．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括內(nèi)容提示中所提供的信息，并可作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。
3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。
參考詞匯：市民廣場(chǎng)Civic Square
In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. _______________________________________________
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【寫作思路】
這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下上周末你校所組織的一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。所提供的材料中列舉了活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和你的感想。主要從：1．上午游覽人民公園：欣賞美景、歌舞聯(lián)歡、拍照留念；2．下午參觀市民廣場(chǎng)：觀看圖片展，了解祖國(guó)和家鄉(xiāng)70年巨變。以及表達(dá)師生情深，感謝老師和同學(xué)的幫助；倍受鼓舞，決心勤奮學(xué)習(xí)報(bào)效祖國(guó)；（自己在發(fā)揮一些）。這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。
【參考范文】
In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the People’s Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizen’s Square. In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
【高分句型一】
I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感謝我的老師和同學(xué)們的幫助。該句話用到了would like to do sth. 豐富了語言。
【高分句型二】
In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民廣場(chǎng)，我們看了70年來的攝影展，了解了祖國(guó)和家鄉(xiāng)的巨大變化。該句話的語言簡(jiǎn)練，層次分明，語意明確，用簡(jiǎn)單的句子表達(dá)了豐富的內(nèi)涵。使人讀起來朗朗上口。
（二）
假如你參加了學(xué)校組織的“走近鄉(xiāng)村”寒假社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求，向某英語網(wǎng)站投稿，分享活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷。
要求：1.80~120詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。
參考信息：
Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine!
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【寫作思路】
本文屬于一篇圖表作文，根據(jù)表格提供的信息來介紹“走近鄉(xiāng)村”寒假社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的經(jīng)歷。人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，既要寫活動(dòng)的過程，又要總結(jié)活動(dòng)感受與收獲。并補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。多種句式交叉使用來豐富文章的文采。高分句型：1.We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before. 我們經(jīng)歷了農(nóng)村的生活，學(xué)到了一些我們以前從書中得不到的東西。that we couldn’t get from books before.是定語從句，修飾不定代詞something。2. We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation! 我們真的希望今年寒假還能有這樣的活動(dòng)！hope后面是省略that的賓語從句。
【參考范文】
Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine.
During the winter vacation my classmates and I joined in the school activity “Get close to the countryside”. We live in the famers’ homes. Their great living conditions surprised us a lot. Do you know where vegetables come from? We got the answer when working with the farmers. Besides, we learned about other plants and some farm animals. How interesting!
We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before, and felt the wonderful changes of the countryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked and decided to save food. We were happy to see the farmers’ life was getting better and better.
We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation!
（三）
人生中有很多第一次：第一次學(xué)游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家務(wù)；第一次贏得比賽；第一次……。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，就你的第一次……寫一篇短文。 內(nèi)容包括：
1. 第一次……的整個(gè)過程；
2. 你的感受。
要求：
1. 詞數(shù)：80-100（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time ________________
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【寫作思路】
這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示信息，選擇給你印象深刻的第一次活動(dòng)進(jìn)行描述并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)，人稱主要為第一、三人稱。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文。首先開門見山，介紹自己的第一次活動(dòng)是什么，接下來詳細(xì)介紹第一次活動(dòng)的整個(gè)過程，最后談一談自己的感受。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。注意： 注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范，避免出現(xiàn)拼寫錯(cuò)誤；詞數(shù)在80—100。
【參考范文】
The first time to learn to swim
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time to learn to swim.
Last summer vacation, my father took me to the swimming pool in our neighborhood and taught me to swim. It was the first for me to swim. At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very patient. He encouraged me and taught me how to swim. He taught me how to breathe in the water first. Then, He threw me into the deepest part of the swimming pool. I was so frightened that I couldn’t move. But I never gave up. I felt safe with my dad around. Three hours later, with the help of my father, I could swim by myself. Although I couldn't swim very well, I was very happy.
I will never forget this experience, because I not only learned how to swim, but also learned to be brave!
（四）
5月18日是國(guó)際博物館日，下圖是你班同學(xué)參觀博物館的情況。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合調(diào)查結(jié)果、自己的參觀經(jīng)歷和感受，寫一份報(bào)告，并在英語課上匯報(bào)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80-100 (短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。
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【寫作思路】
這是一篇圖表，是同學(xué)參觀博物館的情況，結(jié)合調(diào)查結(jié)果、自己的參觀經(jīng)歷和感受，寫一份報(bào)告，并在英語課上匯報(bào)。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的不同，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
【參考范文】
Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc.
Among them, the science museum is our favorite.
I've been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What I'm interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.
Museums make it possible for us students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more?
（五）
近幾年，旅游已經(jīng)成為一項(xiàng)全民活動(dòng)。初中生們旅游的機(jī)會(huì)也有很多，因此，旅游也是初中生們津津樂道的話題。
你的美國(guó)朋友Tom非常喜歡中國(guó)文化，去年暑假你和他一起從桂林出發(fā)去北京旅游了幾天，你們參觀了一些著名景點(diǎn)，還品嘗了一些有名的小吃，請(qǐng)把你們的旅游經(jīng)歷寫成一篇不少于80詞的短文。
參考范文：
A Trip to Beijing My American friend Tom and I went to Beijing by plane last summer. On the first day，we visited the Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square. The next day，we climbed the Great Wall. We took lots of photos. Although we felt tired，it was a fantastic experience. The third day we relaxed. Then we had the Beijing roast duck for lunch. I think it is the most delicious food in the world. Tom is interested in Chinese culture，so we drank tea and saw Beijing Opera in Lao She Teahouse in the evening. Finally，we did some shopping and flew back to Guilin. The trip to Beijing was short，but it was wonderful. Tom said that he would never forget it.
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