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以簡(jiǎn)明扼要的主題句為寫作核心，是該類作文的基本要求。但在寫作過程中，往往會(huì)因?yàn)橹涡畔⒌恼f服力不夠，或是提出建議時(shí)的論點(diǎn)渙散，而出現(xiàn)中心論點(diǎn)搖擺、模棱兩可的錯(cuò)誤。因此，論據(jù)的有效使用，在“觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度”類作文中就顯得尤為重要。 易優(yōu)作文批改系統(tǒng)，易優(yōu)作文批改、易優(yōu)作文點(diǎn)評(píng) <a href=http://www.zequeka.cn/jiaoshoulanmu/>易優(yōu)作文批改</A>
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1.表明態(tài)度。在陳列別人的觀點(diǎn)之后，要清楚明確地表明自己的態(tài)度和立場(chǎng)，可以支持某觀點(diǎn)，或者不同意某觀點(diǎn)，為下文的辯論做好鋪墊。
2.論據(jù)支撐論點(diǎn)。這是文章的重要部分。作者立足于自己的觀點(diǎn)，從各個(gè)方面證明自己觀點(diǎn)的正確性，可通過反例或者經(jīng)典例子證明自己的觀點(diǎn)是正確的。
3.總結(jié)全文。在文章結(jié)尾處要總結(jié)全文，再次強(qiáng)調(diào)自己觀點(diǎn)的準(zhǔn)確性，呼應(yīng)前文，使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)更完整。
必備詞匯
表示贊成或喜歡
approve同意;贊成
agree同意
share分享
prefer更喜歡
wise明智的
reasonable理智的
favorable贊成的
admire贊賞
appreciate欣賞
think highly of高度評(píng)價(jià)
cannot agree more非常同意
表示反對(duì)或厭惡
disapprove不贊成
disagree不同意
unwise不明智的
ridiculous荒唐的
foolish愚蠢的
childish幼稚的
hate討厭
hatred厭惡
angry生氣的
irritated憤怒的
必備句型
表明觀點(diǎn)
( 1) I fully agree with the statement that.. because..
我完全同意...這種說法，因?yàn)?...
(2) More and more people are talking about whether we should shop online.越來越多的人討論我們是否應(yīng)該網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物。
(3) My opinion is that we should spend more time with our family.
我的觀點(diǎn)是我們應(yīng)該多花時(shí)間和家人待在一起。
(4) I think that traditional festivals are much more important than western festivals in China我認(rèn)為，在中國(guó)，傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日比西方節(jié)日更重要。
(5) As far as 1 am concerned, I think that we should pay more attention to environmental protection. 就我而言，我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該多花時(shí)間在環(huán)境保護(hù)上。
(6) Personally, I like to advocate that students should spend more time in exercise.個(gè)人而言，我提倡學(xué)生多花時(shí)間鍛煉。
(7) I don't think it is a good idea to lose weight by diet.我不認(rèn)為節(jié)食減肥是個(gè)好主意。
(8) For me, the former is surely a wise choice.對(duì)我來說，前者無疑是個(gè)明智的選擇。
(9) From where I stand, I support that...從我的角度來看，我.支持......
陳述理由
(1) I hold the view for the reason that..我堅(jiān)持這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的理......
(2) What is more, it will do good to our environment.還有，這對(duì)我們的環(huán)境是有益的。
(3) I think that B is a better choice for the following three reasons.
我認(rèn)為B會(huì)更好，有以下三個(gè)理由。
(4) Firstly,(Reason 1). Secondly,(Reason 2). Thirdly,Reason 3).
第一點(diǎn)，(理由一)。第二點(diǎn)，(理由二)。第三點(diǎn)，(理由三)。
(5) The reason is that..理由是.....
(6) For one thing, I think it is much more convenient to go by bike. For another thing,by doing so, we can lower the emission of carbon dioxide.
一方面，我認(rèn)為騎單車更方便。另一方面，這樣做可以減少二氧化碳的排放。
(7) On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我們絕對(duì)不能忽視知識(shí)的價(jià)值。
總結(jié)全文
(1 ) Thus we can conclude that...因此我們總結(jié).....
(2 ) So it can be concluded that ... important to us.所以可以得出結(jié)論說，......對(duì)我們很重要。
(3) In a word, ...play(s) an important role in our life.總而言之，......在我們生活中扮演著重要角色。
(4) From what has been discussed above, you may agree that...根據(jù)上面討論的，你也許會(huì)同意.....
(5) In conclusion, we should pay more attention to...總之，我們要更加重視.....
相關(guān)話題滿分作文解析
（一）
文章討論了許多年輕人很在意自己外貌的問題，文章的最后指出：“We need to judge people by what they do, not what they look like.” 你同意文章最后提出的觀點(diǎn)嗎？對(duì)此觀點(diǎn)你有何看法？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?，闡述理由，并舉例說明。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
I. Your opinion (agree/ disagree /…)；
2. Reasons (looks, personality品性， ability...)；
3. An example (yourself/ a person around you/ a famous person/…).
要求：
1. 短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 如舉自己或身邊的人作為例子，不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；
3. 詞數(shù)不少于80。
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【寫作思路】
這是一篇要求根據(jù)文章中許多年輕人很在意自己外貌的問題，文章最后提出判斷一個(gè)人應(yīng)該根據(jù)他做了什么，而不是根據(jù)一個(gè)人的外貌來判斷，對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)提出自己的看法。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
【參考范文】
范文1
I agree with the opinion. Compared with looks, personality and ability are more important. Because we can’t change our looks easily, but we can decide and control what we do. Thnaks to the kind and hard-working people, our society is becoming better and better.
For example, Ma Yun, a well-known businessman, doesn’t look handsome, but he created Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient. He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him. Because of his contribution to our society, we even think he looks so cool.
So let’s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attentionto our looks.
范文2
In my opinion, I think we need to judge people by both what they do and what they look like.
A person's personality and ability are very important, but for some jobs, looks are also important, such as an actor or an actress, a waiter or a waitress, or even a teacher. Because it's enjoyable to see a good-looking person.
For example, my teachers in my class all teach very well, and they are kind and helpful. All of us like them. But the most popular teacher is my English teacher, because she looks really beautiful. She dresses herself up every day and always has a smile on her face.
So let's try our best to improve our ability, personality and looks.
（二）
據(jù)了解，為了進(jìn)一步引導(dǎo)中學(xué)生積極參加體育鍛煉，提高身體素質(zhì)，襄陽(yáng)市教育主管部門正在研究制定有關(guān)“中考”體育考試的改革方案( the plan)，考慮在原有項(xiàng)目的基礎(chǔ)上增加籃球、排球或足球，總分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作為一名參加過體育“中考”的學(xué)生，你對(duì)這樣的改革持什么樣的態(tài)度。請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文表述你的觀點(diǎn)。
1．要點(diǎn)提示：
(l)觀點(diǎn)明確（要么贊成，要么反對(duì)）：
(2)理由充分（可針對(duì)增加考試的項(xiàng)目和調(diào)整的分值，也可只選其一。限三條理由）；
(3)給出建議（圍繞你的觀點(diǎn)提出一條合理化建議）。
2．注意事項(xiàng)：
(l)字?jǐn)?shù)：90詞左右：
(2)行文應(yīng)連貫流暢；
(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
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【寫作思路】
這是一篇給材料作文。襄陽(yáng)市教育主管部門正在研究制定有關(guān)“中考”體育考試的改革方案，考慮在原有項(xiàng)目的基礎(chǔ)上增加籃球、排球或足球，總分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作為一名參加過體育“中考”的學(xué)生，你對(duì)這樣的改革持什么樣的態(tài)度。要求根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文表述自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。
【參考范文】
In my opinion, I agree with the reform plan of “high school entrance examination” physical education examination.
It is reported that most young people are getting unhealthy. Without regular exercise, students are getting weaker and weaker. If the total score of "high school entrance examination" sports is increased, Both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach great importance to physical education, and it’s easy to imagine the phenomenon that PE is always taken away will never be seen. Students will be healthier and more energetic in their study. It is helpful to improve students' comprehensive ability and quality.
I think every school should make a plan to cultivate students' interest in sports so as to improve students' physical quality.
（三）
是否應(yīng)該幫助陌生人
最近，你們班就“是否應(yīng)該幫助陌生人”展開了討論，同學(xué)們就這一話題意見不一，你的看法如何?根據(jù)所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”為題，寫一篇短文。
原因
贊成
幫助他人是美德；
幫助他人就是幫助自己；
反對(duì)
怕陷入麻煩；
怕被誤解；
你的觀點(diǎn)?（至少兩點(diǎn)）
要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。
參考詞匯：美德virtue
Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．
參考范文：
Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions.
Some think we should try to help strangers． Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves．We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day．If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like.
However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness．
In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble．If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love.
