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1.描述某一 現(xiàn)象或事物。在文章的開(kāi)頭首先要指出我們?cè)u(píng)論的對(duì)象或事件，為下文我們指出該事件或事物的利弊做好鋪墊。
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2.分析缺點(diǎn)。針對(duì)所指出的事物分析其缺點(diǎn)或不足之處?？梢允潜旧淼牟蛔?，也可以是其給社會(huì)帶來(lái)的不良影響，或者是對(duì)環(huán)境造成的傷害等。
3.指出其優(yōu)點(diǎn)。要客觀看待事物，在分析缺點(diǎn)的同時(shí)還要指出該事件或?qū)ο蟮膬?yōu)點(diǎn)或可取之處，可以說(shuō)給人們生活帶來(lái)了方便，或者有利于社會(huì)的穩(wěn)定等。缺點(diǎn)和優(yōu)點(diǎn)的順序可以互換。
4.作者看法?？陀^對(duì)事物進(jìn)行了分析之后，作者要提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，是怎么看待該現(xiàn)象或事物的，是利大于弊還是弊大于利，是應(yīng)該提倡還是禁止。
說(shuō)明利弊型議論文寫(xiě)作模板
這種題型往往要求先說(shuō)明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度（利或弊）出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度（或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè)）
１． 說(shuō)明事物現(xiàn)狀，
２． 事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)（或一方面）
３． 你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀（或前景）的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一). Besides -------------------（Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二）.
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(Ａ的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects over weigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)．
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè))．)
相關(guān)話題必備詞匯、短語(yǔ)、句型
必備詞匯
描述現(xiàn)象或事物
be popular with..受到....的歡迎
be familiar with sth.很熟悉某物
raise a heated discussion引起熱議
表示優(yōu)點(diǎn)
advantage優(yōu)點(diǎn)
benefit益處
be beneficial to .對(duì).....有益
do good to .....有好處
be of great benefits有很大的益處;有很大作用
be of great help幫助很大;有很大幫助
have a positive effect on ......有積極影響
exert a positive influence on ......生積極影響
表示缺點(diǎn)
disadvantage缺點(diǎn)
side effect副作用
do harm to .....有害
useless無(wú)用的
be of no help沒(méi)有用
defect缺陷
have a negative effect on對(duì)..生消極作用
必備句型
描述現(xiàn)象或事物
(1) There is a heated discussion about...關(guān)....討論很激烈。
(2) ..has brought us much convenience along with much inconvenience.....給我們帶來(lái)了方便的同時(shí)，還帶來(lái)了不便。
(3) ..has raised hot discussion. ....已經(jīng)引起了人們的熱議。
( 4) ..has its advantages and disadvantages, just like everything does.
和所有東西一樣，...也有它的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。
說(shuō)明事物優(yōu)點(diǎn)
(1) There are three advantages in/of... (某事物/現(xiàn)象)有三個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)。
(2) The first advantage of.. is that... (某事物/現(xiàn)象的)第一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn).....
(3) ... provide convenience for us in life. (萊物)能為我們的生活提供便利。
( 4) With the help of.... our life can be much better and more convenient.
....幫助下，我們的生活可以更加幸福和便利。
(5) In spite of the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
盡管有缺點(diǎn)，它還是有對(duì)應(yīng)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。
(6) Nothing can be compared with... in terms of..在(某方面)，很少有東西能...媲美。.
(7).. has a positive impact on people's life ..人們的生活起到一種積極的作用。
(8) sth. exerts a favorable influence on people' s life.某物對(duì)人們的生活產(chǎn)生了有利的影響。
(9) .. is playing an increasingly important role in people' s lives.
....在人們的生活中起著越來(lái)越重要的作用。
說(shuō)明事物缺點(diǎn)
(1) However, ... its negative side as well.但是，..也有其不好的一 面。
(2) On the contrary, its disadvantages can not be ignored, either.相反，它的缺點(diǎn)也是不能被忽視的。
(3) Nevertheless, it still has some drawbacks.但是它還是有一些缺陷的。
( 4) Just like everything has two sides, .a.. has many disadvantages.正如每個(gè)事物都有兩面性一樣，..也有很多缺點(diǎn)。
(5) However, by doing so, we may cause some problems.然而，這么做的話，我們可能會(huì)引發(fā)一些問(wèn)題。
(6) Nonetheless, it's sometimes blamed for its obvious defects.但是，它有時(shí)候會(huì)因一些明顯的缺陷而受到指責(zé)。
(7) As the proverb goes that every coin has is two sides... is no exception.
俗話說(shuō)硬幣都是有兩面的，......也不例外。
(8) However is negative aspects are also evident. To begin with ...To make matters worse,...Wort of all,....
然而，它的不足之處也是很明顯的。首先，..... 更糟的是，......
(9) The side effects...have exerted on human beings can be seen as follows. Firstly...Secondly, . In addition, .
....對(duì)人類(lèi)產(chǎn)生的副作用如下所示。其一，.....其.二,.. ....此外......
表明個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)
(1) From where I stand, I think its advantages carry more weight than its disadvantages.從我的立場(chǎng)來(lái)看，我認(rèn)為它的優(yōu)點(diǎn)大于它的缺點(diǎn)。
(2) Anyway, I still believe.. more advantages than disadvantages.
不管怎樣，，我們....的優(yōu)點(diǎn)比缺點(diǎn)多。
(3) But for me, 1 think it has more positive sides than its negative sides.
對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)，我認(rèn)為它的積極面比消極面更多。
( 4 ) From the comparison between these positive and negative effects, we should take it reasonably.
通過(guò)這些積極面和消極面的對(duì)比，我們要理智地對(duì)待它。
(5 ) Therefore, we should take it seriously. 因此我們應(yīng)該要認(rèn)真對(duì)待它。
( 6) In my view, we should make full use of its advantages and reduce its side effects.在我看來(lái)，我們要充分利用它的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，降低它的副作用。
相關(guān)話題滿分作文解析
現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生使用“作業(yè)幫”這個(gè)APP 來(lái)搜查他們不會(huì)做的題目。對(duì)此，不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下文字的提示，并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
優(yōu)點(diǎn)
1. 及時(shí)幫助學(xué)生解決在學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的困難；
2. 在家就能學(xué)習(xí)，簡(jiǎn)單，方便；
3. 可以選擇自己喜歡的老師，學(xué)習(xí)興趣更濃。
缺點(diǎn)
1. 有的學(xué)生假裝學(xué)習(xí)，事實(shí)上在玩游戲；
2. 有的學(xué)生不想獨(dú)立思考，直接照抄答案，他們根本不關(guān)心自己的學(xué)習(xí)，只是虛度光陰。
你的建議
聯(lián)系實(shí)際，給出自己合理的建議。
要求：
1. 80－100 詞。（開(kāi)頭的首句已給出，不計(jì)算在詞數(shù)內(nèi)）
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)及其他相關(guān)信息，否則，不予評(píng)分。
參考詞匯：convenient方便的，便利的 pretend to do...假裝做…… think independently獨(dú)立思考
Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people think _____________________________________________________________________
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
這篇作文要求我們對(duì)介紹不同人對(duì)“作業(yè)幫”這個(gè)應(yīng)用軟件的看法，并聯(lián)系實(shí)際，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。題目中利用表格的形式，列出了寫(xiě)作的主要內(nèi)容，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)部分：作業(yè)幫的優(yōu)點(diǎn)、缺點(diǎn)以及個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。可以分為三段分別進(jìn)行敘述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈現(xiàn)，學(xué)生們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。最后一部分內(nèi)容則需要學(xué)生們聯(lián)系自己的實(shí)際生活，發(fā)揮想象力，自己來(lái)補(bǔ)充適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容。文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第三人稱(chēng)和第一人稱(chēng)為主來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要將題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容都包括在作文中，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)?？梢愿鶕?jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、完整，但需要注意合理性，要緊貼題目要求和文章主旨。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯表格內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然。
【參考范文】
Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. Some people think it’s useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. It’s easy and convenient for them.
They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. However, others don’t think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They don’t want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don’t care about their studying at all. It’s a waste of time.
I think it’s good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who don’t want to study, it’s very bad.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇優(yōu)秀是作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，把人們對(duì)“作業(yè)幫”這個(gè)應(yīng)用軟件的不同看法進(jìn)行了介紹，并在最后發(fā)表了自己的觀點(diǎn)。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。各部分內(nèi)容之間層次清晰，敘述有條理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言得體。句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。除簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)外，短文里還使用了and連接的并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，以及動(dòng)詞不定式、動(dòng)名詞等非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型有The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、I think it’s good for students who are hard-working等。
相關(guān)話題滿分作文必背
網(wǎng)購(gòu)已不再是一個(gè)新鮮的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。但它與實(shí)體店購(gòu)物的比較依然是人們熱衷的話題。
隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物成為一種新型的購(gòu)物方式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的利與弊。
要求：1.語(yǔ)句流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。2.包含提示內(nèi)容，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.詞數(shù)80左右，首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。4.文中不能出現(xiàn)人名、地名等真實(shí)信息。
Advantages:方便（convenient）；24小時(shí)營(yíng)業(yè)；不用排隊(duì)
Disadvantages:看不見(jiàn)物品；容易受到欺騙（be cheated）；不能享受和朋友一起購(gòu)物的樂(lè)趣
參考范文：
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day. However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.
In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internet shopping.
