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（一） 易優(yōu)作文網，中小學學生學作文的好網站（http://www.zequeka.cn）
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要求：語句通順，意思連貫，可根據提示適當發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；演講中不得提及生個人身份的相關信息，如人名、校名或地名等；詞數80—100，開頭結尾已給出（不計入詞數）。
Hello, everyone! __________________________________________________________________________
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That's all. Thank you!
【寫作思路】
本文屬于材料作文，談論祖國的偉大強盛以及為實現中國夢我們應該做的努力。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。
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Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional culture made a difference to the world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Chang’e 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on.
As a teenager, we should do as follows to achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. What’s more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a person that the country needs. In addition, we’d better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches and let other countries admire us.
That's all. Thank you!
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be proud of, make a difference to, such as, and so on, 比較級and比較級, devote oneself to doing, in order that, try one’s best以及first of all, what’s more, in addition和last but not least等，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。
（二）
假如下面是你們班教室里的照片墻，墻上記錄了中考前學習和生活的點點滴流，以及考前老師的溫馨提示。忘不了備戰(zhàn)中考時充實而快樂的時光，請你以“Preparation for High School Entrance Exam”（備戰(zhàn)中考）為題，寫一篇80-100詞的短文。
1. 請闡述圖中信息，可適當發(fā)揮；
2. 文中不得出現真實的人名、校名和地名；
3. 字跡工整，語言流暢，表達正確。
學習區(qū) |
Listen to the teacher | 生活區(qū) |
Eat healthy food | 提示區(qū) |
Avoid making mistakes |
Take notes |
Exercise |
Learn to relax | |||
Finish doing… |
Have enough sleep |
Be on time | |||
… | … | … |
Preparation for High School Entrance Exam
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【寫作思路】
這篇作文要求我們以Preparation for High School Entrance Exam為題，介紹備戰(zhàn)中考的時光。題目中用照片墻的形式呈現了備戰(zhàn)的具體內容，并給出了一些關鍵詞，學生們應依據這些圖片和關鍵詞，展開合理的想象，充實細節(jié)內容，并用正確的英語表達出來。審題可知，這篇短文的主要內容應包括三個方面：分學習、生活和提示三個方面解析介紹，注意分清層次和結構，合理安排各個方面的信息，注意上下文的銜接、過渡應自然。短文應以第一人稱為主來敘述，時態(tài)應為一般過去時，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不要根據漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應從句子的整體結構出發(fā)，寫完整的句子?？梢院唵尉浣Y構為主，清晰、準確地表達自己的意思。而為了提升作文檔次，應在文中穿插并列句、復合句以及其他復雜句式和結構。同時注意語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢。
【參考范文】
Preparation for High School Entrance Exam
High School Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it. In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and took notes at the same time. After class, we finished our homework on time. If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details. All the teachers encouraged us not to give up and keep on studying. Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on. We also did exercise every day and had enough sleep. The teachers told us not to feel stressful and learn to relax. We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes. What’s more, we must be on time. We all felt tired and nervous, but what a full and happy time!
這是一篇比較不錯的作文，短文作者根據題目要求，回憶了自己和老師們一起備戰(zhàn)中考的一段充實、快樂的時光。題目以照片墻的形式展示了備戰(zhàn)的過程和內容，非常新穎獨特，分析照片墻可知，文章應從三個方面進行介紹：學習、生活以及老師對學生的提示。這篇短文也正是按照這個思路進行展開敘述的。短文層次很清晰，敘述也很清楚。短文主要使用了一般過去時態(tài)，符合表達的需要，語法規(guī)范，注意了動詞過去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式。語句通順，句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣。句子以簡單句為基礎，也使用了賓語從句、狀語從句等復合句句型，調整了文章的節(jié)奏。短文中使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it.、If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details.、Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on.、We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes.等等。
（三）
假定你是李華，請你以初三畢業(yè)生的身份給學弟學妹們寫一封電子郵件。要求如下：
1. 重點分享你在處理學習困難方面的經驗以及你下一步學習或生活的打算；
2. 郵件不少于80詞，開頭與結尾已給出，不計入字數；
3. 不得出現真實的個人信息。
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【寫作思路】
考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。運用適當的短語表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【參考范文】
I'm going to graduate from junior high school. Looking back on three years of junior high school life, there are many gains and difficulties. I have many difficulties in learning English. At the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. I am about to start high school life, I will continue to work hard, I hope you bravely face junior high school life, have a happy junior high school life.
這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語,如:So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.，這些文章增色不少。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
（四）
假如你是英語校報的編輯李平，請你根據以信息，給新入學的學弟學妹們寫一封信，歡迎他們來到新學校，并對他們在學校如何做合格的中學生提出建議。
寫作要點：
1. 歡迎他們來到新學校。
2. 介紹學校：
(1) 課程有趣；
(2) 有多名外教；
(3) 活動豐富。
3. 請對他們在學校如何做合格的(qualified)中學生提出具體建議。
寫作要求：
1. 不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。
2. 可適當加入細節(jié)，使內容充實，行文連貫。
3. 字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。
4. 至少80詞。
Dear new friends,
It’s my pleasure to write you this letter.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【寫作思路】
這是一篇書信作文，內容是關于學校生活的。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；提示內容就是本文的寫作要點。這些要點構成寫作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象提出自己的建議。不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是用一般現在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。在寫作過程中，要注意句與句段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。
【參考范文】
Dear new friends,
It's my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our new school. Our school is clean and beautiful. The classrooms are big and bright. All the subjects are very interesting. I am good at English. There are many foreign teachers in our school. In our spare time, we can communicate with them and improve our oral English skills. Our after class activities are also rich and colorful. There are different clubs in our school. You can take part in all kinds of activities you like.
Now you are going to be middle school students. How to be a qualified middle school student? At first, you should follow the school rules. It's also important to have good study habits. You must listen to the teachers carefully in class.I think you should learn to share things with your classmates and help each other.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
（五）
回顧初中三年。有許多事令人難忘。校英語報如Have Your Say欄目正面向九年級畢業(yè)生征文。假如你是李華，請你選擇其中一個話題, 并結合具體事例, 用英語寫一封信表達你對某個人的謝意或歉意，參加此次征文活動。
要點如下：
say "thanks" to___________ | say "sorry" to_________ |
1. be not good at... 2. encourage me to… 3. make great progress 4…. | 1. argue with… 2. not talk to each other 3. regret doing… 4….. |
注意：(1) 短文必須包括你所選擇話題的所有要點，并適當拓展；
(2) 文中不得出現真實的人名和校名；
(3) 詞數：80-100，書信格式已給出；
(4) 首句供參考Looking back on the past three years, I’d like to say...
Dear ___________,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【寫作思路】
這個作文要求我們從題目中給出的兩個話題中選擇一個，并結合具體事例，用英語寫一封信表達你對某個人的謝意或歉意，參加學校英語報的一個征文活動。題目中利用表格的形式展示了兩個話題的主要結構，具體的內容需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力進行補充，并用正確的英語表達出來。審題可知，這篇短文應以一般過去時、第一人稱和第二人稱為主來敘述。文章內容應包括：首先確定一個話題和人物；然后具體說明你感謝他或者向他道歉的原因，這是文章的主體部分，敘述應詳細，合情合理；最后再次重申自己的感謝或歉意，并表達祝愿。寫作時應注意：首先文章內容應完整、充實，注意分清段落和層次；其次需注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能根據漢語思維逐詞翻譯。句式結構應完整，可以簡單句結構為基礎，穿插并列句、復合句以及其他復雜結構，提升文章檔次。同時語句直接使用恰當的連接成分，使文意連貫、自然。
【參考范文】
范文1
Dear Alice,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.
When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my text book and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class.
Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student.
Thank you again. Wish you goal luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2
Dear Alan,
Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say sorry to you for arguing with you.
When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didn't talk to each other.
I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Let's forget about the past and become good friends again.
Yours,
Li Hua
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據題目要求，向自己的同學表達了感謝或歉意。第一篇作文是向Alice表達了感謝，并詳細介紹了Alice幫助自己學習英語的過程；第二篇作文向Alan表達了歉意，介紹了由于足球比賽失利，互相埋怨，產生矛盾的過程，并表達了自己的悔意。文章內容都非常豐富，敘述也很完整、詳細。兩篇作文都使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確。注意了謂語動詞過去式形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞過去式的變化，如hid, said, won, lost等等。句式結構完整，語言得體、地道，符合英語的表達習慣。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如第一篇里When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English.、Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart.、Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress.。再如第二篇中When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal.、Let's forget about the past and become good friends again.等等。
（六）
時光荏苒，初中三年轉瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比較，你會有很多變化。請以“I have changed a lot!”為題，根據以下要求與提示，用英語寫一篇短文，具體描述你最重要的變化及其如何發(fā)生的。
要求：
l. 短文不得出現任何真實人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分；
2.不少于60詞。
提示：
l. What did you use to be like?
2. What is the most important change?
3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.
I have changed a lot!
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【寫作思路】
本文要寫我初中三年的變化，根據習作提示，首先要指出我最大的變化是什么，并描述出具體變化是怎么發(fā)生的，所以要針對自己某一個最大的變化來寫，而不是泛泛地寫很多變化；時態(tài)主要是一般過去時和一般現在時。
【參考范文】
I have changed a lot!
Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. The most important change is my attitude to English.
I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.
Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!
本篇文章，首先開篇點題，我有很多變化，我最大的變化是我對待英語學習態(tài)度的變化。第二段是文章的主體，先描述過去學習英語的狀況，其中用到表達過去常用的句型used to do ;在媽媽及老師的幫助下，我的英語學習發(fā)生了很大變化，具體表現為 I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.等。最后對以上變化進行總結，并指出對于這個變化，我的心情如何，Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 整篇文章內容符合要求，時態(tài)用云正確，思路清晰，結構完整，是一篇不錯的文章。
