中考英語話題作文：綠水青山就是金山銀山
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【背景介紹】
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環(huán)境就是民生，青山就是美麗，藍(lán)天也是幸福。改善環(huán)境質(zhì)量，補(bǔ)齊生態(tài)環(huán)保短板，必須堅持“綠水青山就是金山銀山”，加強(qiáng)生態(tài)文化的宣傳教育，倡導(dǎo)勤儉節(jié)約、綠色低碳、文明健康的生活方式和消費模式，進(jìn)一步提高全社會生態(tài)文明意識。要像保護(hù)眼睛一樣保護(hù)生態(tài)環(huán)境，像對待生命一樣對待生態(tài)環(huán)境，使生態(tài)文明成為社會主流價值觀，成為社會主義核心價值觀的重要內(nèi)容。要正確處理好經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展同生態(tài)環(huán)境保護(hù)的關(guān)系，牢固樹立保護(hù)生態(tài)環(huán)境就是保護(hù)生產(chǎn)力、改善生態(tài)環(huán)境就是發(fā)展生產(chǎn)力的理念，更加自覺地推動綠色發(fā)展、循環(huán)發(fā)展、低碳發(fā)展，不斷增強(qiáng)人民群眾對生態(tài)環(huán)境的獲得感。 <a hRef=http://www.zequeka.cn/miNifoRm.Html>蘇州初中語文補(bǔ)習(xí)</a>
【佳作賞析】
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習(xí)近平總書記在十九大報告中指出：必須樹立和踐行綠水青山就是金山銀山的理念，堅持節(jié)約資源和保護(hù)環(huán)境的基本國策。請你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“To make our hometown better”為題寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勀愕挠^點。
1.內(nèi)容提示：ride a bike, turn off the light, plant trees, don’t litter…
2.作文要求：
（1）包含以上觀點。
（2）短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息等。
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【答案】
To make our hometown better
Hello, everyone. I’m Lin Hua. It’s my honor to talk about how to make our hometown better.
With the development of the society, environmental problems are becoming more and more important. As a result, we can do a lot of things to protect the environment of our hometown. For example, we can ride a bike to school. We must turn off the lights before we leave the classroom. We can also plant more trees. Don’t litter everywhere. We’d better sort the litter in our daily life. In a word, it’s our duty to protect the environment. We should try to make our hometown better.
Thank you for your listening!
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇演講稿。要求以“To make our hometown better”為題，談一談如何使家鄉(xiāng)變得更好，注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第一人稱來行文，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹具體可以怎么做；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。
B
近年來，國家提出了“綠水青山就是金山銀山”的理念，人們越來越關(guān)注環(huán)保。假如你是學(xué)生Kate，你校要進(jìn)行以“How to protect our Earth”為題的演講比賽，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇演講稿。
1.詞數(shù):100詞左右(文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù));
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息;3.文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
How to protect our Earth
Dear everyone,
I’m very proud that I have been chosen to speak to you all today.____________________________________
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I hope everyone will protect our Earth well. That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【答案】
How to protect our Earth
Dear everyone,
I’m very proud that I have been chosen to speak to you all today.
As we all know, there is only one earth. Green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver.
The environment around us is getting worse and worse. Some people have no clean water to drink in some places. There is too much traffic on the road. The traffic causes air pollution. In many places, rubbish is thrown into lakes and rivers. So I think we should act to protect our earth.
First, our government should make laws. Second, we can go to school on foot or by bike in order to save energy. Third, we can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags when shopping. We can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled.
I hope everyone will protect our Earth well. That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文要求以Kate的身份寫一篇以“How to protect our Earth”為題的演講稿，注意演講稿寫作格式，文中不能出現(xiàn)自己真實姓名、校名等信息，寫作時必須包含所提供的主要信息，可以作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文屬于演講稿，主要寫如何保護(hù)地球，所以本文的時態(tài)主要采取一般現(xiàn)在時。描述問題嚴(yán)重性時可采用比較級以及被動語態(tài)來寫，使寫作句式多樣；在采取行動如何保護(hù)地球時，可以按照First，Second，Third順序來寫，使文章上下連貫，有條理。
C
為慶祝黨的生日，某英文報刊環(huán)保專欄近期正在舉辦英語征文競賽，其主題是贊美家鄉(xiāng)。假設(shè)你是李明，請你根據(jù)下面的圖片及要點提示，寫一篇以My Beautiful Hometown為題的英語短文投稿。
要點提示：
1. 過去的家鄉(xiāng)：山、河流、垃圾……；
2. 現(xiàn)在的家鄉(xiāng)：青山、綠水、空氣、花鳥……；
3. 你的感想。
寫作要求：
1. 文中必須包含所有提示要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 條理清晰，字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和地名等相關(guān)信息。
My Beautiful Hometown
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【答案】
My Beautiful Hometown
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. There have been a lot of changes in my hometown.
There were several barren mountains and a dirty river in my hometown. There was much rubbish and people lived a hard life. It was a poor and backward little town.
But now, there are green mountains, clean water, fresh air and lots of birds and flowers. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theaters have sprung up one after another. The life of the people has greatly improved.
I love my hometown and its people. We are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以My Beautiful Hometown為題，結(jié)合圖片和提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第一和第三人稱來介紹，時態(tài)綜合使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。作文可分為四段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹家鄉(xiāng)的過去；第三段介紹家鄉(xiāng)的現(xiàn)在；第四段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。
D
“綠水青山就是金山銀山。”請你結(jié)合自己平時保護(hù)環(huán)境的一些做法，以“How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful”為題，寫一篇英語短文。
要點：1.表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2.80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名、人名等信息。
參考詞匯：environment；pollution；reduce；sort the rubbish（垃圾分類）
How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures____________________________________________
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【答案】
How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. But the environment pollution is a bit serious these days. In order to make our hometown more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment.
First we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave a room. Second, let’s walk or ride a bike to school. It is not only good for the environment but also good for our health. Third, we should also advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping. We should stop using plastic bags to reduce pollution. Last but not least, we should try to sort the rubbish and throw it into the dustbin every day.
How important for us to protect the environment! Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭，根據(jù)自己平時保護(hù)環(huán)境的一些做法，介紹怎樣使家鄉(xiāng)更漂亮，可以從節(jié)約用電、綠色出行等方面來說明。
2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱為主來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；在介紹時，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，行文連貫，保證條例清晰。
E
習(xí)近平總書記提出"綠水青山就是金山銀山", 這是中國生態(tài)文明建設(shè)的目標(biāo)。保護(hù)環(huán)境, 從我做起。請結(jié)合自己的生活實際, 寫出四種保護(hù)環(huán)境的具體做法及這樣做的目的。
注意:
1. 行文連貫, 內(nèi)容完整。
2. 字?jǐn)?shù)80100詞左右。
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息。（姓名、校名和地名）
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【答案】
As we all know, environment is important for everyone. There is something we can do to protect it in our daily life.
First, we can turn off the light as well as other appliances when we are not using them. It can help us save the energy. Secondly, recycle the waste water, paper and other waste so that we can reuse them. We can turn the waste into useful things and make full use of them. It’s good for our planet to reduce so much waste stress. What’s more, when we go shopping, we had better use our bag instead of using the plastic bag. Finally, planting more trees is also a good way to make our world greener and fresher. More trees can reduce the air pollution.
In a word, let’s take action to protect the environment.
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題屬于話題寫作。寫作時要注意文章的要求。
2.例文點評：例文采用三段式，第一大段說環(huán)境的重要性；第二大段陳述生活中我們可以做的4件事來保護(hù)環(huán)境；第三大段呼吁大家一起保護(hù)環(huán)境，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，段落分明。用第一人稱來進(jìn)行寫作分析；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主。
3.高分亮點：
短語：as we all know，turn off，turn … into，make full use of，What’s more，in a word。
句型：when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，there be句型，so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句。
《中考英語話題作文：綠水青山就是金山銀山》添加時間：2025-01-14；更新時間：2025-03-15
