小學(xué) 英語(yǔ)作文 :My Dog
I have a dog. Its name is Doggy. I like it.
Doggy has two big eyes, two small ears, a big nose and a small mouth. It”s black and white. It has a short tail. It”s cute and lovely.
Doggy is strong. It likes bones, rice and meat very much. My dog is lazy. It can catch a ball.
I love my dog very much.
點(diǎn)評(píng):作者能從外貌特征、形態(tài)和愛(ài)好描寫(xiě)自己的小狗。這無(wú)不是作者仔細(xì)觀察的結(jié)果。句子通順,是很好的英語(yǔ)小作文