難以忘懷的經(jīng)歷
【內(nèi)容提示】
人人都知道，地震是一件驚天動(dòng)地，令人恐懼的事。假如你經(jīng)歷過一場(chǎng)地震而又獲救、幸免于難，你會(huì)有一種什么感覺呢？你肯定會(huì)有很多話要傾訴，你肯定一生也不會(huì)忘記這樣的經(jīng)歷。如果你經(jīng)歷過這樣的事當(dāng)然有東西可寫，即使你沒有經(jīng)歷過也可以設(shè)想這樣的情景來(lái)寫一篇短文。
【作文示范】
An Unforgettable Experience
When I was a little girl, in the summer vacation in 1976, I went to my mother＇s hometown , Tangshan.
After I got there, at first I stayed at my uncle＇s home . I was very happy in my uncle＇s home because my uncle had a daughter who is older than I. She often took me to visit some places. We spent ten days happily. I remember just on the tenth day there was a big earthquake. It happened about three o＇clock in the morning when I was dreaming. I woke up to find myself under a heap of rocks . I couldn＇t move. I didn＇t, in fact , know anything about what was happening until my uncle saved me from the rubble①.
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During the earthquake most of the houses fell down. We set up many tents to live in and received a lot of food from every city in our country. They helped us to tide over② those hard days. I think if we hadn＇t lived in New China we couldn＇t have survived the big earthquake. I am very lucky and so are my uncle＇s family.
（選自1987年4月21日《上海學(xué)生英文報(bào)》）
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
①rubble[＇r)bl] n．碎石；碎磚，破瓦
②tide[taid] over 克服；渡過
【寫法指要】
能夠在唐山那樣的大地震中幸存下來(lái)，確實(shí)是一件幸運(yùn)的事，令人終生難忘。作者分三個(gè)層次寫作此文：1）作者去唐山舅父家度暑假，前十天非常高興；2）第十天晚地震，舅父從瓦礫中把作者救出；3）舅父一家和作者都幸免于難，祖國(guó)各地救援；表達(dá)對(duì)祖國(guó)的熱愛
