愛(ài)的奉獻(xiàn)
【內(nèi)容提示】
在你的心中有一位非常好的老師。他（或她）全身心投入工作，從不考慮自己：課堂上對(duì)你們要求很嚴(yán)格，而平時(shí)又好像是你們的朋友；教學(xué)、工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)；節(jié)假日從不休息，而是幫同學(xué)補(bǔ)課；教你們彈琴、繪畫(huà)、唱歌……。但他（或她）因患癌癥而離開(kāi)了人世。當(dāng)你一聽(tīng)到或一想到歌曲《愛(ài)的奉獻(xiàn)》和《我是一棵小草》時(shí)就會(huì)不由自主地想起這位老師。他（或她）永遠(yuǎn)活在你的心中。
【作文示范】
The Devotion of Love
Dear friends, you may have heard the song----The Devotion of Love①. It has been very popular since 1988, and is enjoyed by more and more people. Why? Because it has been sung for the people. As long as everyone devotes a little love, the world will be even more beautiful.
Whenever I hear the song, I can＇t help thinking of my dear teacher,Mr. Wang. He gave his life to the cause of education. He will be remembered as an engineer of the soul forever. As his student, I will never forget those days that we spent together. 蘇州易優(yōu)吳老師中考語(yǔ)文閱讀寫(xiě)作培訓(xùn)（TEL:181-1815-9898）
He was a kind and warm-hearted man. The moment I saw him, I felt as if he were my father. In class, he was strict in our studies. But in the spare time, he was our good friend. He often taught us how to play the violin, to sing, and to draw pictures. He cared not only for our studies but also for our minds. Whenever we had difficulties in our studies or in our daily life, he would encourage us to overcome them. When we failed in our exams, he would help us, “Don＇t lose heart, work harder and you will succeed.” On his holidays, he would give up his rest to help those who had difficulty in their studies so that they could catch up with the other students. He was just like a candle, burning himself away to provide light for other. He was such a good teacher that all of us loved and respected him.
But a year ago, word came that Mr. Wang died of cancer. Hearing this, I couldn＇t help crying. I remember the song of Small Grass: No sweeter than a flower, no taller than a tree…. Small grass is ordinary, but grand②. Mr. Wang is a blade③ of small grass. He gave his students all his love. Mr. Wang will live in our hearts forever. 蘇州小學(xué)生語(yǔ)文培訓(xùn)，（TEl:181-1815-9898）蘇州易優(yōu)閱讀寫(xiě)作同步提升
（選自《英語(yǔ)畫(huà)刊》1996年第12期）
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
①The Devotion [di＇v+uM+n] of Love（歌名）《愛(ài)的奉獻(xiàn)》
②grand [gr$nd] a．重大的；崇高的
③blade [bleid] n．（草）葉片
【寫(xiě)法指要】
這是一篇文筆優(yōu)美的抒情文章，展現(xiàn)了一名學(xué)生對(duì)老師深情的愛(ài)。文章開(kāi)頭是一小段關(guān)于歌曲《愛(ài)的奉獻(xiàn)》意境的描寫(xiě)，作者由歌聲想到與他們朝夕相處的王老師——他就是一位為教育事業(yè)奉獻(xiàn)了“愛(ài)”的人。他愛(ài)同學(xué)、愛(ài)工作、愛(ài)生活，可惜因患癌癥而去世。他把一生都獻(xiàn)給了人民。由此，作者又想起了《小草》歌：雖然王老師像小草一樣平凡，但他卻像小草一樣崇高（grand）。因此作者說(shuō)，王老師就是人們常常比喻的像蠟燭一樣燃燒了自已，照亮別人的教師的代表。全文情真景美，緣情設(shè)景，情由景發(fā)，景由情生，情景交融，相映成趣
