現(xiàn)在我們就用我們平時(shí)講過的句子來寫這篇作文：
首先第一段是圖畫的描述：
第一段第一句推薦是開門見山不需要多余的句子，無論多牛的開頭句放在開頭老師都知道不是你自己寫的，都會(huì)覺得你是在“騙字?jǐn)?shù)”所以推薦的寫法就是：
As is shown above,
接著描述圖畫的中心事物，按照我們的老方法 用主系表倒裝為表系主的方法
in the middle of the picture stands two persons ,
接下來描述兩個(gè)人共同的動(dòng)作，用非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)：
looking at the broken wine bottle,showing different reactions,
在用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)描述兩人分別的動(dòng)作：
one signing that “there is nothing left”, and the other being grateful that “there is something left”.
最后一句結(jié)尾考研 作文高分攻略一書的54頁中任意挑出一句： 易優(yōu)語文培訓(xùn)，（TeL:181-1815-9898）蘇州閱讀寫作同步提升
Simple as the picture is, a certain informative meaning is revealed in it.
第二段的作用是論述：
第一句需要點(diǎn)出論題是什么：
The picture demonstrates two strikingly different attitudes, pessimism and optimism, when facing the same thing and tells us that the enthusiasm and the optimism are of paramount importance when it comes to the personal growth,especially in this ever rapid changing modern society.
第二句表明人們的態(tài)度：
Due attention to this quality is attached by individuals and even the whole society.
第三句開始進(jìn)入平行展開法就是句子的堆砌：
Those with optimistic attitude to the life can relieve not only pressure, but also anxiety and such problems as depression and solitude.
Favorable attitude to the life can broaden our mind, enrich our experience and enhance our vigor then creat an enthusiastic environment for our socity. 蘇州小學(xué)生語文培訓(xùn)，（TEl:181-1815-9898）蘇州易優(yōu)閱讀寫作同步提升
People with the spirit of optimism can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status.
