建議信
Write a letter to the president of your college about the unpleasant conditions of the university dormitory, and suggesting possible solutions
Dear Sir,
稱呼:寫作關系不親密的個人
As I am a freshman, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning the basic conditions of our dormitory.
第一段只有一句話,包含了2層信息:自我介紹以及寫信目的。
(積累:It is my obligation to do…; make some suggestions concerning…)
Generally speaking, the dormitory building situates in a satisfying environment and is well-equipped.
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However, there are two unpleasant aspects that cause inconvenience to us:
1) the heating system is in need of improvement—it fails to maintain warmth in our rooms during the winter;
2) the furniture is not designed in a practical manner –there lacks a shelf to place books.
第二段是提出建議及改進措施段。
第一句肯定所述對象的優(yōu)點,為后面的改進意見做鋪墊。
(積累:generally speaking, situate in…; well-equipped)
第二句是一個過渡句,轉(zhuǎn)折到寫信的根本目的上:提建議。建議共分2條,通過序號列出。
第三句提出第一條建議:改進供暖系統(tǒng)。
(積累:in need of; fail to do…)
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(in a practical manner)
I would be more than happy if my proposal could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.
第三段只有一句話,對信件進行總結,表達了期待得到解決的真誠態(tài)度。
(I would be more than happy if…;take place )
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
信件結尾和署名