安慰信
You heard that one of your friends failed in the entrance examination of postgraduate. Write a letter to him which should include the following information:
1.Express your regrets
2.Encourage him to try again
3.Hope to see him in high spirits.
You should write about 100 words.
Dear Jennifer,
稱呼：寫作關(guān)系親密的個人
I am very sorry to hear that you didn”t pass your exam.
I know how difficult the past few weeks have been for you.
I have thought about this for a long time and I decide to express my regrets in this way.
第一段點(diǎn)明寫作目的：為了安慰朋友沒有通過考試。
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第一句話開門見山擬安慰事宜。
（積累：I am sorry to hear that…）
第二句話表達(dá)寫信人感同身受。
第三句話是一個and連接的并列復(fù)合句，強(qiáng)調(diào)寫信人寫這封信的原因。
（積累：express my regrets）
You are a very smart person as well as an industrious student. If it were not for your cold, you would have been admitted by Qinghua University.
I think you should try one more time next year. I am sure that you will be successful.
However, you should pay attention to your health. You should do some exercises after studying for a period of time.
第二段從考試失敗的客觀原因及建議兩方面展開。
第一、二句先肯定收信人的實(shí)力，然后強(qiáng)調(diào)了考試失敗的客觀原因----感冒。 易優(yōu)作文批改系統(tǒng)，易優(yōu)作文批改、易優(yōu)作文點(diǎn)評 <a href=http://www.zequeka.cn/jiaoshoulanmu/>易優(yōu)作文批改</A>
（積累: as well as; be admitted by）
第三、四句提出寫信人的第一條建議：再堅(jiān)持考一年
（積累：try one more time）
第五、六句提出寫信人的第二條建議：注意身體健康。
（積累：do some exercises）
I hope you will be in high spirits when I see you next time.
第三段是一個復(fù)合句，表達(dá)了寫信人的祝福和期待。
（積累：in high spirits）
Best wishes,
Li Ming
信件結(jié)尾和署名
