三、不準文章邏輯不清
如果考生的文章是組織有序的，那么閱卷者從頭看到尾也不會感到糊涂。但是專家在此提醒考生，文章結(jié)構(gòu)的有序，并不是單純地使用了諸如 first，second之類的連詞就可以達成。文章中所有的句子必須服務于你的論述主題，一旦脫離了主題，那么再精辟的連詞也是徒勞的。此外，在獨立寫作的評分標準里提到了“unity”，“progression”，“coherence”，這就意味著考生需要將自己的觀點通過合理的句型表達出來，做到統(tǒng)一，層層遞進，連貫，以期讓閱卷者能夠“一目了然”文章的意圖。以下我們來看一個例子：
In any relationship of mine，I would wish that first of all，the person I am dealing with is honest. Even though he/she thinks that he/she did something wrong that I wouldn”t like，he/she”d better tell me the truth and not lie about it. Later on if I find out about a lie or hear the truth from someone else，that”d be much more unpleasant. In that case how can I ever believe or trust that person again？ How can I ever believe that this person has enough confidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with the relationship from there. So if I cannot trust a person anymore，if the person doesn”t think I can handle the truth，there is no point to continuing that relationship。 蘇州小學語文提優(yōu)培訓，就找易優(yōu)吳老師，20余年輔導經(jīng)驗，數(shù)百成功案例。（TEL:181-1815-9898）
在這個段落里，作者的語言流暢，準確，豐富，前后銜接緊密，語意連貫，句式較多變，并且使用了反問這種修辭手法，因此很好的完成了“組織”句子的目的。盡管不能說十全十美，但是這樣的論述仍舊可以得到滿分。與之形成鮮明對比的是：
The people lining up in the embassy are applying for a variety of visas. Some applicants want student visas. Other applicants want resident visas. The other applicants want tourist visas. Applying for resident visas is very difficult; one has to meet a lot of requirements. According to a recent survey，the largest number of applicants are applying for tourist visas. The number of people applying for student visas comes in second. Among all the applicants，only a fraction want resident visas。
這段話的主題句顯然是第一句，根據(jù)評分要求里對于段落一致性的要求，主題句后面的支持句都必須圍繞“不同的人在大使館里申請不同的簽證”這個話題展開論述。仔細分析后我們發(fā)現(xiàn)上面這段話里多了一個不相干的句子：“Applying for resident visas is very difficult; one has to meet a lot of requirement?！?，這句話雖然也在談簽證，但是它談論的是“申請簽證很困難”這個論點，這樣的話和段落主題就不相同了。因此考生在寫文章時，一定要做到一個段落只講一個話題，主題句的論點必須貫穿這個段落，后面的每一個支持句都朝一個方向前進，只有這樣才能寫出條理分明的文章
