不知所云 例：Many companies began using computers mouth.
段落過長，不分段，主語與動詞一致問題 She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time. 主語和動詞在數(shù)方面不一致。
句子別扭 We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed. 措辭過長或不清。換言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑。
關(guān)聯(lián)詞語重復 Since I want to go to a good school，therefore I am trying to raise my test scores. 不能在該句的主要主語和主要動詞前使用連詞。
句子不完整 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example，my friend in high school. 句子沒有主要主語或主要動詞，因為其實它應是一個從句。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法 是將兩個句子連接起來。
不要使用get When I got home，I got tired，so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式，意思也過于含糊，不適合用在正式的場合。應將get改為一個更加具體的單詞，如become，receive， find，achieve，等等。
介詞多余 I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US， I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class，my classmate never mentioned about her husband. 在表示這種意思時此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見于downtown，home，there，here等詞。這些詞語在英語中是副詞而非名詞，因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。
跑題或不相關(guān) There are many reasons to buy a car，preferably a nice car. 這個意思與文章的主題無關(guān)。
陳詞濫調(diào) It is okay for children to fail sometimes. 所表達的意思很普通 大多數(shù)人都已經(jīng)知道到了，因而就沒有必要再說出來。
重復冗余 Personally， I believe what the newspaper prints. 一種意思的表述不止一次，或者某個詞語不必要。
單數(shù)/復數(shù) Many year ago，dinosaur roamed the Earths. 單詞需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺蛿?shù)，或者由復數(shù)變成單數(shù)?！螖?shù)可數(shù)名詞 單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單獨使用，應該將其變?yōu)閺蛿?shù)形式或者加上限定詞(a， the，my，his，her，Gary"s，no，any，1，3，50，most，等等)。
拼寫錯誤，主語、動詞或賓語有問題 I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday. 句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問題，缺少主語、動詞或賓語，或者這些成分重復。
語氣與文章不符 I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris，London，Tokyo，and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out. 語氣與文章其他部分不相符，可能是過于正式或者太不正式。
動詞時態(tài)錯誤 Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food. 動詞時態(tài)不正確 檢查一下是應該用現(xiàn)在時、過去時、將來時還是完成時等等。
選詞不恰當 I was late getting home because I lost my way. 在這種情況下不應該使用該詞 可選擇更好的詞語或者所使用的詞語與文章的總體語氣不符。
單詞形式不當 I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth. 所使用的單詞的形式不正確 檢查一下應該使用該詞的名詞、形容詞或副詞形式的哪一種。
用詞錯誤 Even I don“t speak Spanish，I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation. 用詞錯誤或在此種情況下該詞不是最佳用詞。
以上就是托福 寫作中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的問題，一篇優(yōu)秀的英語作文 在內(nèi)容和語言兩方面應是一個統(tǒng)一體，任何一方面的欠缺都會直接影響到作文的質(zhì)量。以上語句中的出現(xiàn)的常見錯誤，希望考生能夠避免。為了文章的華麗偏用一些另類語句會出彩，但是若寫作中有問題，可是得不償失
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