1．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已很普遍；
2．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的好處；
3．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的缺點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)航)第一段宜開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，寫(xiě)因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展和計(jì)算機(jī)的普及使網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物日漸普遍；第二段談網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的便利，如節(jié)約時(shí)間和精力，尤其對(duì)老人、病人和忙碌的人更是如此；第三段談網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的缺點(diǎn)，其一是有時(shí)網(wǎng)上所見(jiàn)與實(shí)際所得不一致；其二是網(wǎng)上欺詐造成投訴困難。
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With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don＇t have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.
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However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can＇t see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.
