Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近幾年大學(xué) 校園內(nèi)出現(xiàn)“考證熱”
2)產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因
3)你的看法
Certificate Craze On Campus
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。 小學(xué)生語文培訓(xùn)，蘇州易優(yōu)閱讀寫作同步提升</a>
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)的“考證熱”;分析越來越多的大學(xué)生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因;闡述“我”對(duì)大學(xué)生“考證熱”的看法。
高分范文
Certificate Craze On Campus
In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear?
[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another. 蘇州小學(xué)生語文培訓(xùn)，（TEl:181-1815-9898）蘇州易優(yōu)閱讀寫作同步提升
[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
[1]祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。randomly意為“隨意地，隨機(jī)地”。
[2]限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增強(qiáng)了說服力。
[3]that引導(dǎo)同位語從句，修飾the idea。
[4]設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。
[5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。
[6]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，充當(dāng)介詞賓語。
[7]用于引出“我”的觀點(diǎn)。
[8]“當(dāng)談到或提及…時(shí)”。
[9]since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為“既然”。
蘇州小學(xué)語文提優(yōu)培訓(xùn)，就找易優(yōu)吳老師，20余年輔導(dǎo)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，數(shù)百成功案例。（TEL:181-1815-9898）
[10]“只是，僅僅”。“而不是”。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.
臨摩：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭(zhēng)的事實(shí)。
___________________________________________________________________________.
2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability.
臨摩： 在過去的三十年，發(fā)展中國(guó)家在許多方面都取得了很大的進(jìn)步，其中包括健康水平的提高。
___________________________________________________________________________.
3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.
臨摩：我認(rèn)為，對(duì)于我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。 蘇州易優(yōu)吳老師初中語文高效提分（Tel:181-1815-9898）
___________________________________________________________________________.
【KEY】
1. It is a sad but true fact that divorce rate is on the rise.
2. In the past three decades, developing countries have made great progress in many aspects, among which are the improvements in health domain.
3. From my point of view, it is more important for us to enhance our practical abilities but not to get more certificates.
