我愛(ài)你——黃河！
【內(nèi)容提示】
你的家鄉(xiāng)在某條河流的附近。它澆灌著河域的良田，養(yǎng)育著沿河的兒女，人們稱(chēng)它為母親河。它或者流水潺潺，或者洶涌澎湃；沿岸景色萬(wàn)千，甚是美麗。你早有游覽該河、一覽美景的愿望，但一直未能成行。恰好，某個(gè)星期天你們班要組織游覽，這使你非常高興。請(qǐng)你把游覽的情況和你的心情寫(xiě)一篇文章。
【作文示范】
I Love You——the Yellow River
It＇s well known that the Yellow River is the second longest river in China. Though my hometown is close to her, yet I had no chance to enjoy myself at her beautiful scenery. What a pity！To my great joy we were told that we would go there and have a good look at the lovely river on Sunday.
It took us quite a few hours＇ ride to reach the bank of the river,where we saw the Chunü Spring①. It is one of the most famous hot springs there . The water of the spring is so clear that we couldn＇t help diving into it. Our head teacher, together with us, swam happily. Floating on the water, I looked around . We were surrounded by the great mountains.
蘇州易優(yōu)語(yǔ)文閱讀寫(xiě)作培訓(xùn)，家長(zhǎng)信賴(lài)，學(xué)生喜歡。 http://www.zequeka.cn
Then we got on some small boats. We had been longing to float on the Mother River. Seeing her powerful current and attractive beauty, I felt proud of being one of her sons.
It was noon before we knew it. We went ashore② and then danced and sang happily on the grassland. We helped ourselves to the tasty③ fish, crabs④ and other food, which we cooked ourselves.
It was time for us to go home. We had to say good-bye to the Mother River. We all felt reluctant⑤ when we left her.
（選自《英語(yǔ)畫(huà)刊》高中 版1997年第1期）
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
①Chunü Spring處女泉
②go ashore [+＇M&:]上岸
③tasty [＇teisti] a．美味的；可口的
④crab [kr$b] n．蟹；蟹肉
⑤reluctant [ri＇l)kt+nt] a．不愿意的；留戀的
【寫(xiě)法指要】
本文作者把自己對(duì)黃河的一片愛(ài)心和感情融于對(duì)黃河美景的描寫(xiě)之中。第一段寫(xiě)自己急于游黃河的心情；第二段寫(xiě)黃河的景點(diǎn)之一“處女泉”及在其中暢游時(shí)的快活心情；第三段寫(xiě)乘船漂游時(shí)被美景吸引住的自豪感；第四段寫(xiě)上岸后吃美味時(shí)的高興勁；最后一段寫(xiě)留連忘返的心情
