Love,
When you come with the burning lamp of pain in your hands,
I can see your face,
And know you as bliss.
The first time when I heard these verses, I was 17 years old, in full blossom as everyone assumed. Not knowing much about love, I instinctively regarded love as something seemingly beautiful but hard to chew in essence.
I＇m correct, to some extent. All the years I spent alone prove both disheartening and fruitless, disheartening because the ideal one never came down to the earth to cease my endless waiting; fruitless because I ended up in dating with a wrong person,leaving all the verses nonsense. To make matters worse, as they criticized me, I broke up with the guy in only 15 days, which conversely seemed to me a nice thing. Thank God I am free again.
I wrote poems myself as a way to approach love and the unknown world. No tiny little dust in the air will escape my eyes,no voice of the blooming will slip away from my ears, and love is all pervading, all pervading except in my world. 易優(yōu)語(yǔ)文題庫(kù),同步教材，真題演練，提分就是快 https://cs.euzW.net
I can＇t resist the temptations of enjoy my life alone in reading, mind wandering, walking on the fallen leaves deep in thought, listening to music by some unknown artists, and of course, writing. I can＇t help trembling at the thought of being deprived of the freedom by someone outside my world. I hate to find myself wearing the coat from some strange guys with the angel wings still in the gesture to fly. I want to fly, not with the borrowed wings, but mine.
He will arrive at last, with his wings above my sky.
In 8 days I will have my 20th birthday, smiling shiningly in my autumn, murmuring the verses I changed myself,
Love,
When you come with the burning lamp of pain in your hands,
I can see your face
Without touching your hands,
And know you as a dream. 蘇州吳中區(qū)小學(xué)生語(yǔ)文提優(yōu)，蘇州名校沖刺培訓(xùn)，（Tel:181-1815-9898）20余年輔導(dǎo)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，每年都有數(shù)十個(gè)成功案例。
簡(jiǎn) 評(píng)
作者人生之帆剛剛揚(yáng)起，渴望友情，愛(ài)情，期待白馬王子從天而降?？墒情啔v淺，經(jīng)驗(yàn)少，看錯(cuò)人本屬人之常情。作者以親身經(jīng)歷表明，愛(ài)情不能光靠等待，同時(shí)還應(yīng)該不斷充實(shí)自己，不斷認(rèn)識(shí)自我。作者利用空余時(shí)間寫詩(shī)，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，閱讀名著，希冀自己的翅膀早日飛起來(lái)。作者深信她的白馬王子會(huì)到來(lái)為她保駕護(hù)航。
作者第二段使用disheartening和fruitless說(shuō)明當(dāng)時(shí)的心情是灰色的，接著第三段描寫怎樣對(duì)待愛(ài)情，怎樣排遣失意后的郁悶，用pervading表明love是一直存在的，只不過(guò)沒(méi)有屬于自己的罷了。
個(gè)別地方值得商榷，如which conversely seemed to me a nice thing令人費(fèi)解
