真題回放：agree or disagree：One of the best method to get teenagers to accustomed to adult life is to get them part-time jobs
點評：本題討論的是青少年順利進(jìn)入成年生活的最佳方式就是參加一份兼職。在托福 寫作的題庫中我們可以找到的類似題目有：
It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details。
開頭段：
背景描述+表明觀點
Adolescent是從childhood到adult的十分重要的過渡時期，this period of time是孩子們積極儲備知識的golden age。Someone oppose that the most principal mission is studying. Instead studying 卻沒有給我們將這些知識表達(dá)出來的技巧。而part-time卻可以讓我們將學(xué)到的知識轉(zhuǎn)化成skill從而make use of what one has learned。And part-time jobs help students focus on their studies是一個 perfect complement. 所以我認(rèn)為兼職才是青少年進(jìn)入成年世界最佳的途徑。
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正文段：
第一段
兼職當(dāng)中會與到各式各樣的問題，而這些問題或多或少與日常學(xué)習(xí)related。這可以給學(xué)生們一個opportunity去practice or check theories they have learned in school. 可以舉一個例子比數(shù)學(xué)在做cashier的幫助。
第二段
兼職工作對于teenagers來說是very precious experiences. 想要適應(yīng)成年社會首先工作是不可缺少的。而得到 good work的第一步就是有一個excellent resume。而part time job卻可以enhance their resumes and build contacts with companies and catch up with the Advanced knowledge of the fields. 比如說accounting 的學(xué)生大學(xué) 畢業(yè)后可以回到part time employer to look for a full time position, or approach other employers with good references and cutting-edge work experience.
第三段
兼職工作可以讓青少年提前做好進(jìn)入成年人社會所需要的準(zhǔn)備，例如Self-Confident and possessiveness. Knowing that they can do a job well and be paid for it is an important character-building experience that many students put off for too long. Handling their money from part time job也是塑造自制力的最佳方法 。
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重申觀點
The first thing you should do in pre-adult life is getting a part-time job.
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