雪后的校園
【內(nèi)容提示】
你的家鄉(xiāng)在北方。昨晚下了一夜的雪，你清晨起來，推門一看，一片潔白。吃過早飯，你背起書包，拿上鐵锨去上學(xué)。走進(jìn)教室，空無一人，你趕緊去操場(chǎng)。那里，學(xué)生們都在清理路上的雪。掃完雪，你們進(jìn)教室上課。課后，同學(xué)們都去操場(chǎng)玩雪。學(xué)校周圍的樹上穿著雪衣，遠(yuǎn)處的山上也是白茫茫的積雪。
【作文示范】
Our Schoolyard After the Snow
One winter morning, I got up early. It was still dark. When I pushed the door open, everything was covered with snow. I hurried through my breakfast, and then went to school with my bag on my back and a shovel①in my hand.
When I reached school, I saw the lights were still on. Immediately I rushed to the classroom, but to my surprise, I saw nobody there. Then I ran to the playground. There I saw most of the students trying to clear the snow on the paths. How hard they were working. I joined them in the work. Soon the snow was removed. Then we all came back to the classroom, laughing, talking, and singing. As soon as the bell rang at the end of the class, we rushed out of the classrooms to the playground. Oh, there was so much snow! We at once started playing. Some of us began to fight with snow balls. Some were rolling on the snow ground. Still some others piling up a snowman. In the centre of the playground, many students were skating on the ice. Some of them could not skate and had many falls. 蘇州小學(xué)生語文培訓(xùn)，（TEl:181-1815-9898）蘇州易優(yōu)閱讀寫作同步提升
Our hands and faces turned red with cold, we were also wet all over, but we didn＇t mind.
The trees around the schoolyard looked like huge men with silver clothes defending our school. Beyond, snow-covered mountains in the distance looked like an elephant made of wax②.
What a wonderful scene!
（選自1987年12月29日《上海學(xué)生英文報(bào)》）
【詞語解釋】
①shovel [＇M)v+l] n. 鏟；鐵锨；鐵鍬
②wax [w$ks] n. 蠟；蠟狀物；蜂蠟
【寫法指要】
本文前兩段按時(shí)間和空間轉(zhuǎn)移的順序?qū)懥藦募依锏綄W(xué)校下雪后的情景，第三段寫感覺，第四段由近及遠(yuǎn)寫校外的雪景，作者在這里兩處使用了明喻修辭格。最后用一個(gè)感嘆句抒發(fā)自己的感情。抒情篇
