3、學會開頭短和結尾段寫作:
一個飽滿的開頭短包含三個層次:【話題引入】層次抓住閱卷者的注意力,【主題句】層次清晰地展現觀點,【結構暗示】層次提示中間段的層次結構或視角。
· 話題引入:這一層次有很多種寫法,可以用“故事”開頭,用“名人名言或諺語”引出話題,用“語出驚人”的方式開頭,用“描述現狀”的方式開頭,用“問句”開頭等。
· 主題句:這一層次的關鍵是把觀點寫清楚,可以加上“in my view”之類的信號詞,可以加上針對觀點的總的抽象理由,可以加上讓步層次。
· 結構暗示:這一層次用一句話提示中間段將出現幾個層次,或者分析問題的視角。
請看下面一例中每個層次可以怎樣完成。
Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specofoc reasons and example to support your answer. 作文培訓網站推薦,<a http://www.zequeka.cn>易優(yōu)作文網</a> 。
開頭段可以這樣寫:
Progress in technology, as an inevitable fact of life, has changed people's lives dramatically. But is progress always for the best? While one considers the potentially dangerous impact of changes such as industrialization and the advent of nuclear technology, it is clear that progress, while inescapable, is not always for the best.
文章開始("Progress in technology, as an inevitable fact of life, has changed people's lives dramatically. But is progress always for the best?") 用一句話描述關鍵詞 “Progress”在我們生活中的影響,然后用問句引出話題【話題引入】,之后用“the potentially dangerous impact of changes such as undustrialization and the advent of nuclear technology"提示讀者文章后面將從兩個角度入手談這個問題【結構暗示】,最后用"it is clear that progress, while inescapable, is not always for the best"清晰地闡明觀點【主題句】。
請看下面一題:
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing games teaches us about life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
開頭段可以這樣寫:
Almost everyone,
from like children to adults, loves games. The types of games may change and get more complex as we grow up, but our enjoyment never changes. I believe that playing games is both fun and useful, because it teaches us the skills we need in life. Games teach us there is a cause-effect relationship, teach us about teamwork, and teach us to follow rules.
文章開始(“Almost everyone,from little children to adults, loves games. The types of games may changes and get more complex as we grow up, but our enjoyment never changes.")用兩句話描述關鍵詞"game"對我們生活的影響【話題引入】,然后直接提出觀點和理由【主題句】("I believe that playing games is both fun and useful, because it teaches us the skills we need in life."),最后用平行對稱結構向讀者提示文章后面的三個層次【結構暗示】("Games teach us there is a cause-effect relationship, teach us about teamwork, and teach us to follow rules.").
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結尾段
當開頭短把觀點闡述清楚之后,結尾段從信息量上講就成為了最不重要的段落,甚至存在沒有結尾段的滿分文章——言外之意是如果時間不夠了,應該盡可能將中間段寫完整,而不是追求結尾段的完整性。
時間不充分的時候,結尾只需要在中間段最后加上一句總結文章的話:時間充分的時候,可以寫成一個簡單的獨立的結尾段,總結一下觀點,總結一下論據(層次),然后還可以做一個簡單的引申(只是不要發(fā)號召)