下面這篇在2004年考過兩次，內(nèi)容比較難寫，很多考生都構(gòu)思不出內(nèi)容，因此，我請我的美國朋友按照雅思 作文的套路寫了篇范文，大家可以學(xué)習(xí)一下里面的語言和內(nèi)容。
Unlike most countries, the police in the United Kingdom do not normally carry guns. Some people think it leaves the citizens unprotected, while others believe that this practice reduces the overall violence in society. Discuss both views and use your own experience and evidence.
Unlike most countries, the police in the United Kingdom do not normally carry guns. Some people think it leaves citizens unprotected, while others believe that this practi c e reduces the overall violence in society. Police having guns however is an issue secondary to criminals having guns. (45words)
結(jié)構(gòu)分析： 2+ 1 ” 模式，最后一句為主題句，明確地表達(dá)了自己的觀點(diǎn)。但是，前兩句的問題很嚴(yán)重，即照抄了題目。(這可能是我和老外沒有溝通好，在他所寫的所有例文中都出現(xiàn)了類似的情況，大家千萬不要學(xué)!!!)
蘇州吳中區(qū)小學(xué)生作文培訓(xùn)，就來易優(yōu)悅讀
Because criminals usually have access to guns, police officers need them in order to control crime. If police in the U.K. are able to go without guns and not have crime getting completely out of control then they have already set a fine example that other countries should follow. The fact that they are able to do this is an indication of their ability to control the flow of guns to the general populace and this makes citizens safer than anything else. To a civilian, taking guns away from criminals is more important than giving them to police. (98words)
For places that are not able to, or are unwilling to control this availability of guns to criminals, police have no choice. Countries with weak or ineffective gun laws, or countries bordering such countries, like Mexico which has strong gun laws, but virtually no way to prevent them from being smuggled over the border from the U.S., need a police force that is not only armed, but is armed better than the criminals. This “domestic arms race” is the fate of any country that does not realize that civilians have no need of being armed and should have no access to weapons whatsoever.(103words) 蘇州小學(xué)生語文培訓(xùn)，（TEl:181-1815-9898）蘇州易優(yōu)閱讀寫作同步提升
The root of the problem is embarrassingly corrupt governments and ineffective half-measures taken to control the circulation of guns, which allows criminals to easily come into possession of guns. Nations around the world should hope to someday reach the point where their police force can afford not to carry guns and still be effective. (54words)
文章后幾段結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰，未加點(diǎn)評，紅色部分為段落主題句。
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evidence ['evidəns] 想一想再看
n. 根據(jù)，證據(jù)
v. 證實(shí)，證明
聯(lián)想記憶 X 單詞evidence 聯(lián)想記憶：
e出+vid看+ence→[明顯的證據(jù)]證據(jù)，證人
violence ['vaiələns] 想一想再看
n. 暴力，猛烈，強(qiáng)暴，暴行
prevent [pri'vent] 想一想再看
v. 預(yù)防，防止
聯(lián)想記憶 X 單詞prevent 聯(lián)想記憶： 找中小學(xué)生語文題庫，就搜微信“易優(yōu)閱讀寶”
pre預(yù)先+vent來→預(yù)先來到→搶先一步，防止別人→防止，阻止
possession [pə'zeʃən] 想一想再看
n. 財(cái)產(chǎn)，所有，擁有
聯(lián)想記憶 X 單詞possession 聯(lián)想記憶：
源于：possess（v 占有；擁有）
circulation [.sə:kju'leiʃən] 想一想再看
n. 流通，循環(huán)，發(fā)行量，消息傳播
聯(lián)想記憶 X 單詞circulation 聯(lián)想記憶：
circulate圓，環(huán)+ion→發(fā)生，流通
unwilling ['ʌn'wiliŋ] 想一想再看
adj. 不愿意的
issue ['iʃju:] 想一想再看
n. 發(fā)行物，期刊號，爭論點(diǎn)
vi. & vt
ineffective [ini'fektiv] 想一想再看
adj. 無效的，無能的，效率低的
聯(lián)想記憶 X 單詞ineffective 聯(lián)想記憶：
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in不+effective（adj 有效的）；effect（n 效果）fect作->無效的, 無能的
civilian [si'viljən] 想一想再看
adj. 平民的
n. 羅馬法專家，平民
聯(lián)想記憶 X 單詞civilian 聯(lián)想記憶：
civil公民的+ian表名詞，“某種人”→平民
border ['bɔ:də] 想一想再看
n. 邊界，邊境，邊緣
vt. 與 ... 接
