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54. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 易優(yōu)語文培訓(xùn)，（TeL:181-1815-9898）蘇州閱讀寫作同步提升
參考分析：
表明只能“部分同意”的立場。然后寫兩大段，舉若干個(gè)例子。
很多的情況下，確實(shí)不應(yīng)該根據(jù)外表判斷一個(gè)人。但也有一些情況下，必須根據(jù)外表判斷。比如，導(dǎo)演選擇演員；招聘零售柜臺店員等等。
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54同意不應(yīng)當(dāng)通過外表來衡量一個(gè)人
（1）一個(gè)人無法決定自己的外表，以外表來衡量一個(gè)人是不公平的。
（2）以外表來衡量一個(gè)人經(jīng)常會(huì)出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤，比如說很多有錢人穿著很樸素
（3）以外表來衡量一個(gè)人，和導(dǎo)致很多爭端，對自己很不利
Topic 54 External appearance
What do you feel when a handsome gentleman or a beautiful lady passes by? Then how about a fat short person wearing a dirty shirt? You feel differently? Yes, most people do. It's very common for people to judge a person by external appearance, because it's easy and direct, and it's instinctive. Appearance is a very important aspect of a person and reflects one's personalities. Sometimes you can tell the person's characteristics from his appearance. However, in most cases, you cannot tell exactly what the person is like just from the external appearance, and ethically, we should not judge a person just by one glance at his external appearance.
小學(xué)生語文培訓(xùn)，蘇州易優(yōu)閱讀寫作同步提升</a>
"Beauty and beast" and "Snow white and seven dwarves" are two stories that are almost known by everyone. Although there are fables, there are deep meanings inside them. What you can learn from them is that people that are not so good-looking can be very good people internally. And actually there are tons of examples in reality. Napoleon is a very short guy, but he was one of the most famous people in the history. Theodore Roosevelt, formerUSpresident during World War II, is handicapped; but he is one of the most successful presidents in American history. So how can you tell about the people from their external appearance?
Moreover, there are other undeniable facts that show that a beautiful person may be rotten inside. There are many prostitutes on the busy streets. It's obviously that they are very beautiful, but are they really righteous people? A beautiful appearance is a good thing, but a righteous heart is more valuable. Finally, as we can see, it's out of question that we should not judge people just from their external appearance. The most important standard is their internal personality. 蘇州吳中區(qū)小學(xué)生作文培訓(xùn)，就來易優(yōu)悅讀
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