報考托福 的考生想要取得好成績，平時就要多加練習(xí)。寫作是其中的一項難點，在寫作中有一些常見的詬病句，下面托福 寫作輔導(dǎo)就為大家講解。
托福寫作輔導(dǎo)：
1. I am not good at maths, but English
改進: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children”s leisure time?
改進: Who is the proper person to plan children”s leisure time?
3.It is children who clear about their interests.
改進: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介詞是大家在托福寫作中低分的常見病句。)
改進: I agree with the latter idea.
5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
改進: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
改進: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(語義重復(fù)也是大家在托福寫作中導(dǎo)致低分的主要原因)
改進：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
