祝賀獲得好成績
【內(nèi)容提示】
假如今天是1990年6月18日。你的名字叫高峰,家住北京西四大街148號。你剛收到你的英國朋友Tom Brown寫給你的信,他的住址是:28 Carr Lane, Acomb York, Yo 25HU, U. K.?,F(xiàn)在你給他寫封回信,信中祝賀他在大學(xué) 入學(xué)(matriculation)考試中獲得好成績,你確信他能考入他所喜歡的重點(diǎn)大學(xué) ,他一直想當(dāng)一名外科醫(yī)生(surgeon),所以你認(rèn)為他應(yīng)該學(xué)醫(yī)。最后你告訴他,因?yàn)槊髂昴慵磳⒏咧?畢業(yè),從現(xiàn)在起必須充分利用時間做好考試的準(zhǔn)備,力爭在來年的考試中能像他一樣取得好成績,考入理想的(ideal)大學(xué)——北京清華大學(xué)。
要求:
①只須用英語表達(dá)上述內(nèi)容,不必逐句翻譯。全篇詞數(shù):150—180。
②信中不要使用自己的真實(shí)姓名和地址。 作文能力提升,就來易優(yōu)作文,https://www.euw.net
【作文示范】
Congratulations on Tom's Success
148 Xisi Street
Beijing
P. R. C.
June 18, 1990
Mr. Tom Brown
28 Carr Lane
Acomb York
Yo 25HU
U. K.
Dear Tom Brown,
I have just received your letter. I am really glad to hear that you have done so brilliantly in the Matriculation① Examination. Congratulations! With such excellent results you will be able to get into any leading university you like, I am sure. And I suppose you should study Medicine since it has been your dream to become a surgeon all these years.
Next year I shall finish my middle school and I want very much to enter my ideal university, Qinghua University. So from now on I have to make full use of my time to get well prepared for the next year's Matriculation Examination. I shall try my best to do as well as you have done in your Matriculation Examination this year. Please say hello to your family.
Yours sincerely,
Gao Feng 作文能力提升,就來易優(yōu)作文,http://www.zequeka.cn
【詞語解釋】
matriculation [m+?trkju'leiM+n] n. (大學(xué)的)入學(xué)考試
【寫法指要】
這是一封較為正式的祝賀信。祝賀信(letters of congratulation)是得到親友、同事、同學(xué)通過考試、榮獲晉升、獲得學(xué)位、結(jié)婚、喜得貴子等好消息時寫的信。這種信要寫得及時、真誠、自然、親切動人。祝賀信一般不宜寫得過長。
祝賀信常用的語句有:
①Congratulations on your success /achievements!
②I'm so glad to hear of your winning the prize in the … contest. Congratulations!
③Please accept my heartiest congratulations on your graduation from….
④Heartiest congratulations upon your graduation. May your future be as successful as your middle-school days have been.
⑤A word of congratulation just doesn't seem enough, so I am sending you a gift that I am sure you will find useful.