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此話題的寫作內(nèi)容比較廣泛，既可以讓學(xué)生談?wù)勈裁词切腋?，什么讓人感到幸福，也可以具體記敘-一個(gè)幸福的瞬間，一件讓人感到幸福的小事等。此話題的寫作體裁多為記敘文和說明文。時(shí)態(tài)以現(xiàn)在時(shí)和過去時(shí)為主。
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相關(guān)話題寫作示例指導(dǎo)
實(shí)踐案例
題目
Write at least 60 words about the topic makes me happy' . (請以“____使我快樂”為題，寫篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。)
Questions for reference:
1: hat makes you happy?
2. Why does it make you happy?
審題
這是篇半命題作文。 想要寫好半命題作文， 首先要報(bào)一個(gè)恰當(dāng)、 新穎的感目。做米說，半命題作文中所需補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容往往是?作的中心內(nèi)容。學(xué)生在將題目補(bǔ)充完整的同時(shí)，
其實(shí)也確定了寫作的素材，明確了寫作的中心。在擬題時(shí)，首先要在選材上認(rèn)真思考，題目宜“大題小作”，即選取一個(gè)小的切人點(diǎn)，以便寫深寫透，寫出特點(diǎn)。這篇作文的重點(diǎn)在于，要突出題目中所填信息與幸福之間的關(guān)系一 為什么這件事能讓我開心?這-點(diǎn)必須在文中有清晰的呈現(xiàn)。本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，需避免出現(xiàn)大量過去時(shí)的句子，或以較大的篇幅來敘述過去的事件。
段落結(jié)構(gòu)
本文可采用“總一分總”的寫作結(jié)構(gòu):
第一段:文章的總起，拋出主題“ 讓我快樂”，橫線上所填部分，可以是一個(gè)愛好、一項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)等。
第二段:分層敘述，對(duì)主題展開說明，尤其要說明橫線部分和快樂之間的聯(lián)系。
第三段:概括文章內(nèi)容，首尾呼應(yīng)。
核心語匯
bring happiness to sb.給某人帶來幸福
be satisfied / pleased with ...對(duì)....感到高興
link happiness to ...把快樂...聯(lián)系起來
.. enable me to do sth.......使我能....
benefit from sth.受益于....
be worth doing值得做....
relieve the pressure of緩解...的壓力
shape one's character塑造性格
參考句型
It is my pleasure to do sth.我很樂意做某事。
That's why I...那就是我...的原因。
not only .. but also...不僅.....而且.....
An advantage of it is that . ...的一個(gè)好處.....
It is +被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+ that+句子的其他成分 正是..... (強(qiáng)調(diào)句)
習(xí)作1
Travelling makes me happy
①I like travelling. It makes me happy. During the winter and summer holidays, my parents often take me to many places at home and abroad. I can enjoy a lot of amazing landscapes and historical interests, delicious food, exciting experiences and so on during my journey. Furthermore, travelling is also a process of discovery, which I
enjoy a lot. More importantly, travelling can help to reduce my study pressure, tell me how big and beautiful the world is, and let me know more about history and culture. That's why it makes me so happy.
注：
① 這兩句話可以合并成travelling makes me happy
點(diǎn)評(píng):
本文圍繞“旅游使我愉快”這一主題展開寫作，條理分明，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，甸式多樣。文中從幾個(gè)層面闡述了旅游給作者帶來的愉悅，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，表達(dá)清晰，總的來說是一篇佳作。個(gè)別語句可以合并為-句，比如第一“ 、第二句話，可以改成travelling makes me happy,顯得更為簡潔。
習(xí)作2
Reading makes me happy
I've formed the habit of reading books since I was a little girl For me.,2530reading has been an enduring pleasure in my life.①I enjoy the company of the magic world in Harry Potter, of evil criminals and thrilling cases in Sherlock Holmes, of thousands of interesting people I would have never met in real life. Reading not only provides me with knowledge, but also enables me to understand the world around me. It is an education in a
classroom that has no walls. It is reading that always brings me fun and joy.
注
① 這句話體現(xiàn)了學(xué)生的寫作功底。
點(diǎn)評(píng):本文清晰明了地闡述了“閱讀使我愉快”的理由。文章的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)以及人稱的使用都非常嫻熟，其中“I enjoy the company of the magic world .. in real life"這句句子的表述，不僅增加了說服力，也體現(xiàn)了作者很強(qiáng)的語言表達(dá)能力。文章以一句強(qiáng)調(diào)句收尾，既增添了文采，也起到了點(diǎn)題的作用。
相關(guān)話題滿分作文必背
（一）
題目
Write at least 60 words on the topic“My Secrets of Happiness. (以“我的快樂秘訣”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。短文開頭已給，所給部分不計(jì)人字?jǐn)?shù)。)
Everyone has his or her own secrets of happiness, so do I.
Outline for reference :
1. Tell your secrets of happiness.
2. Give the supporting details.
優(yōu)秀范文
My secrets of happiness
Everyone has his or her own secret of happiness, so do I. One of my secret of happiness to do sports regularly. I usually do yoga with my sister on Saturday morning .I enjoy yoga very much and at the same time, I can relax myself and become healthier.
Another secrete is that I make an everyday list of all the things and people am thankful to, so that I can be content with what I already have. 1 would enjoy my life rather than complain about everything These are my secrets of happiness, and I hope it can be helpful to others.
（二）
題目
Write at least 60 words on the topic "I'd like to make ... feel happy". 以《我想使.......高興》為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。
Suggested phrases and expressions:
not afford to buy
spend .. doing sth. with sb.
bake sth. for sb.
make one's own present(s)
become healthier
優(yōu)秀范文
I'd like to make my mother feel happy
Mother is always ready to give anything she has to her children, not to receive.Therefore, I can never do too much to make my mother feel happy in return. As Mother's Day is coming, I would like to take this chance to express my gratitude to my mother.Though I can't afford to buy something expensive for her,I can make a present for her on my own. These days, I have spent my spare time practicing baking cakes secretly. I'm sure my home -made cake will be a big surprise for her. I just can't wait to see the smile on my mother's face and share her happiness.
（三）
題目
Write a passage on "A happy memory in my junior high school" in at least 60 words according to the given situation. (似“我初中時(shí)期的一次快樂的回憶”為題，寫: 不少于60個(gè)詞的文章。）
Phrases for reference (以下短語僅供參考):
a spring outing
a class meeting
a party
take part in
play with
be happy
優(yōu)秀范文
A happy memory in my junior high school
The happy memories I have had in my junior high school are countless. The most impressive one is the celebration of my fourteenth birthday. Our school held a party in a hall for the students of our grade. On that day, I sang and danced with my classmates on the stage. Our performance was a big success, which made me happy and excited. After that, we had a big dinner together in the school canteen. The food was delicious and we liked it very much. I had a good time. It was really a happy and unforgettable memory for me.
